Hello, my awesome story readers. Sorry I haven't been updating for ages but I was under the impression that my story wasn't that good so I stopped but now my friend Lauren had talked some sense into my head and I continued lol.
Anyway I want to thank MrsMargeryLovett for their criticism, it really helped- I hope that my writing it a bit better -and also I want to thank all the people that reviewed so THANKYOU!!!
Anyway I better get on with my story, I hope you like it!!!!
Kim xxx
PS: this chapter is dedicated to my friend Lauren because she was the one that got me to keep writing.
Chapter 3~ Thanks Emmett
BPOV
I could hear strange whispers around me, but I was to knocked out to hear them clearly.
As I finally began to come to, I could start to make out the whispers that I heard.
"God Emmett, what did you do?" said a soft pixie-like voice.
"Hey shut up! She was the one who ran into me!" someone's loud voice said- defiantly not a whisper now.
"You could have killed her! Her head hit the ground pretty hard!" a beautiful velvet-like voice said- it was filled with worry.
"Pfft, your not much better, you probably scared her half to death yourself! What were you thinking, eating a mountain lion in an area where people could see you?!" said that same loud voice again.
"Hey, that track hasn't been used for the past 10 years!" replied that velvety voice.
"Oh come on Edward, don't tell me you didn't know she was coming" said a new voice, one that sounded like bells.
"I didn't! Believe it or not I couldn't hear her at all!" said that velvety voice again, sounding a bit annoyed.
Who did that voice belong to… Edward? Who was Edward?
Just then, I felt a hand touch my chest- ice cold, even through my shirt. It sent a shiver down my spine and the hand pulled away quickly
"She's still alive, thankfully, but I think she's going to wake up soon" said… Edward?
I tried to move my arm but it was numb. Oh great. I started wriggling my fingers until my arm decided to wake up. When it did, I moved it behind me so I could get up.
As I got up, I felt a sudden head rush and fell straight back down again.
I heard a gasp from everyone around me - four people, each with beautiful voices – as my head hit the pillow.
Wait… pillow? I was knocked out in the forest, what was I doing here?
Oh no, these were doctors, I was in a hospital! Oh my God, Charlie would be worried sick!
In shock, I opened my eyes to see three of the most beautiful people in the world standing over me- looking worried.
The first person I saw, standing at the back of the bed was a girl that looked to be the age of 19. She had pale white skin, rose red lips, long blonde hair that fell to her elbows and the most beautifully carved face I had ever seen.
She looked at me with a look of jealousy, something that told me that she wanted something I had. Her look was increasing with anger so I looked away.
The next person I saw was a very buff boy standing next to the blonde girl. He was a brunette with short messed up hair. He to looked to be the age of 19.
His worried expression turned to a smile.
What was so funny?
"Hello I'm Alice, how are you feeling are you ok?" said the girl with the pixie-like voice.
I turned to face where the voice was coming from and found myself facing a small beautiful girl. She looked to be about 17. She had short spiky black hair and soft pick lips. Her face was thin and her lashes where thick and long.
In my loss of words from the beautiful people around me, I only managed to croak out a "hmm"
As a looked at the three people again, I realized that there was only three. I could have sworn that I had heard four voices.
I looked around the room to try and find the other boy I had heard.
I turned my body around and found myself facing the most handsome boy I had ever seen, though he looked somewhat familiar.
He looked 17 as well, just like Alice. His hair was a rusty brown colour and his skin was pale white, just like the blonde girls- just like everybody in the room actually.
At that moment I noticed another similarity between them- they all had topaz eyes. Where had I seen topaz eyes before?
I was still staring at him, trying to match up who he was, when he flashed me a breathtaking smile.
Oh my God, he was the man over the lion, the dangerous man, the man with the face of and angel.
"Hi" he said in a breathtaking voice.
"Im Edward. How are you." He stuck out his hand and I hesitantly shook it.
As soon as ours hands touched, a jolt of electricity came out of his ice cold hands.
"Im sorry about this, but when you ran into Emmett," he waved his hand over at the buff man, "and hit your head, we thought it would be a good idea for you to come over our house and my dad could take a look at you, he's a doctor you see."
As if on cue, another beautiful man, maybe in his twenties, walked through the door.
He too was beautiful, skin pale white, strong face, blonde hair and like the others, topaz eyes.
"Hello, im Dr. Carlisle Cullen, how do you feel?" his voice was soft and understanding.
"Umm, I'm ok. What's going on?"
"Well my son Emmett, here, knocked you out when you ran into him and Edward thought it would be a good idea for me to have a look at you."
"Oh I see"
"So what's your name?"
"Umm, Bella Swan"
"Well Bella, your good to get up but I suggest you stay around here for a while until your head stops bleeding." He walked out of the room while I touched my head to feel a bandage wrapped around it.
"Well Bella, do you want to do something? How about going shopping? Those clothes have blood on them?" said Alice, her face beaming.
"Oh well maybe later, besides, I don't have any money with me" I said, her face falling a bit.
"Oh that doesn't matt-" she started to say, before Edward cut her off.
"Alice, don't you think that maybe she's hungry? And also Carlisle just said for her to stay around here. So Bella-" he said turning to me "-are you hungry? You haven't eaten for two days so you must be."
"No, not really." But my belly disagreed quite loudly.
Edward laughed- which was one of the most beautiful sounds in the world. "Yeah sure. Come on, lets go make you some breakfast."
He pulled me out of bed and led me out of the room and into the kitchen. He sat me down at the table while he went to prepare my breakfast.
For the first time since I had been awake, I looked at something other than the faces of the people in the house.
The walls and interior of the house were a white and creamy colour and the furniture looked antique.
The kitchen was totally clean, as if no one had cooked in it all day, though they must have because the clock above the stove read 12:35pm.
As I was reading the time, Edward finished making my breakfast and brought bacon and eggs over to me.
He sat in the seat opposite me and stated watching me eat.
As soon as the food hit my mouth, my mouth was indulged by the taste of the bacon and eggs and my stomach praised the fact that there was finally food in it.
The only thing I could do was moan and when I did Edwards face lit up lick a thousand stars, making look more beautiful than ever.
"You like it?!"
I nodded enthusiastically. It was the best food I had ever had.
Just then, the blonde girl stomped through the room with Alice fast on her heels.
"Please? Will you PLEASE let her borrow some clothes? Mine won't fit her and hers are dirty and ugly!" Alice complained to the blonde.
"No Alice, Im not going to let her touch any of my stuff!" said the blonde.
Alice smiled at me for a second and then went back to pestering the blonde.
I looked back at Edward a bit offended.
He noticed my expression.
"Don't mind Alice, she's 'fashion this, fashion that', she only likes what she picks out for you" he said, trying to cheer me up.
"But what about the blonde, what did I do to her?" I asked, curious.
"Oh you mean Rosalie, don't worry about her either, she just doesn't like people like you."
Like me? What's wrong with me?
When I finished my breakfast, Alice came back into the kitchen carrying a blue v-neck shirt and black denim short shorts.
"Hey Bella, I got you these clothes from my mum, you two are pretty much the same size. Why don't you come up to m y room and get changed?"
Just as I was getting up Edward grabbed my arm. "Umm Bella, why don't you grab the clothes and come and get dressed in my room. If you don't, Alice will be playing Barbie with you for the next four hours."
Horror flashes across my face and when I turned to look at Alice, she was pouting.
"Aww Edward your mean. It wont be that bad Bella, really. Will you please come?"
"I'm sorry Alice, but I think I'm going to go with Edward on this one. Sorry" I said, trying to sound sorry but actually very relieved.
Alice stayed in the kitchen sulking while Edward took me up to his room. His room was up two sets of stairs- wow a three-story house. His room had a window for a back wall and the carpet was a thick golden colour and the walls were a bit darker, though made out of the same material.
The walls were covered in CD after CD, probably more then the best music store in all of Olympia.
In the corner was a very advanced looking CD player.
His room didn't have a bed although it had a wide black leather sofa.
On the far end of the room was a door leading to a bathroom. Edward guestured to the bathroom.
"Take your time."
It was a simple looking bathroom, tiles on the floor, toilet, sink, shower and mirror. It was as clean as the kitchen- like no one had used it.
I walked over to the mirror and looked at my reflection. Alice was right, my clothes were bloodstained and very dirty- the purple of my shirt was almost a dark brown.
I took it off and put on the shirt Alice had given me. It smelt like roses and cinnamon mixed together.
I took of my blue jeans and put on the black shorts. Alice's mum's clothes fit me perfectly, though the v-neck was a little too far down for my taste.
I looked back into the mirror and started brushing my fingers through my hair, trying to fix it up as much as I could.
I left my clothes in the sink and opened the door to the bathroom and walked out. When Edward saw me he let out a little gasp.
My face turned bright red- my stupid blush.
He gave me a little smile and then patted the sofa, signaling for me to sit down next to him.
Slowly I walked over and sat down.
"Blue really suits you"
"Umm… thank you." I wasn't used to boys this beautiful saying things like that to me.
"So Bella, can I ask you something?"
"Yeah sure, whatever you want"
"Good. Well I just wanted to know what you were doing on the mountain alone, because you certainly weren't wearing the right clothes for hiking." He seemed very curious.
"Oh, umm, well what happened was," I started hesitantly, but he just stared at me. "I was out, umm… three days ago was it?" He nodded "with a guy called Jacob, my dads friends son. I-" I couldn't finish the sentence.
"Wait, Jacob? Jacob Black was it" he was suddenly very into the conversation.
I nodded, then continued "When I got home, I was going to have a shower when a rock smashed through my window and standing outside under it was Jacob…..."
I continued telling him my story up until I smashed into Emmett on the old path.
When I was done I looked at Edward, his perfect face set into a frown and he was staring at the floor.
I waited for a while until he spoke again
"Jacob, that stupid, stupid dog!"
Dog? Why call him something as soft as dog? Why not frikken ass hole!!
Then Edward looked up at me and smiled "well I guess that would explain the smell"
"WHAT!" I shouted, very surprised.
"What? Oh never mind. Umm, just stay in here a while, I have talk to Alice and Emmett about something. I'll be back soon." And then he walked very quickly- but gracefully- out of the room.
Not knowing what to do in this very tidy room, I decided just sat there for about five minutes thinking about different ways to kill Jacob, when I heard footsteps.
Oh good, Edwards back
Just then, I heard a different voice, one I hadn't heard before. "Edward, Edward are you in there? What's going on downstairs? And what's that smell?
What is with people and saying that I smell?
I was looking at the door when I saw another beautiful man walk in front of it. He was about 18 and had pale white skin and blonde, neat hair. Like everyone else, his eyes were topaz.
When he saw me, his topaz eyes went crazy, making him look terrifying- and then he licked his lips.
I didn't even have a second to think, he just crouched on the and pounced at me, his eyes staring at me with a crazed hunger.
So, that's it- Chapter 3- I hope you liked it. Please review and tell me what you thought!!
Kim xxx
