Right... right.. Ok... I have to stop this.


Yui Komari.

Why... why the hell did you turn that nice sweet girl into a bitchy Brittney? (I am sorry if your name is Brittney)

Your OC is crude. It's obvious you are trying (and failing) to make the reader feel pity for her by adding in an unrealistic (And quite frankly unbelievable) bully story. Oh look, OC-Chan is being hurt by Yui, how cruel. Let's just forget about the abuse the vampires are dishing out. No, no, means words are so evil!

If you want a bully character... go made a different story about a different fandom. Because you so do not need a bully of all things in Diabolik Lovers (and no, that thing you created and named Yui, is not Yui.)

Yui is a sweet, kind, innocent girl with a bit of a masochist kink she has yet to explore due the fact that she's still seventeen, a virgin and grew up in the church that probably didn't encourage much sexual exploration.

This OC will usually be the 'opposite' of Yui. Being brave, tough, and either goth or boyish. Oh and she'll probably have boobs and make fun of Yui's lack of boobs all the damn time.

So basically female Ayato or Subaru.

So female Ayato usually stands up to the brothers, punches them, throws knives (Fucking. Knives?!) at them when they insult her. Does she do this to anyone that insults her, because at this point she isn't suppose to know the brothers are vampires so... (I mean imagine doing this to a normal person who insults you.)

So she's not female Ayato... shes crazy bitch.

Crazy bitch then usually goes about hitting and defeating the, and say this with me, Supernaturally strong, immortal, teleporting, vampires.

And gets away with it. In fact Crazy Bitch gets away with little consequences, when in reality this lunatic would have been locked in the dungeons of the Sakamaki household and tortured until she couldn't even remember her own name.

A strong female character, is not strong when you have to add superpowers or violence to her character in order to make her strong. If you want a strong character, look at characters who, without super powers, can make a difference. I would name some examples but... it's hard to name any anime characters I know who are actually like this, which explains why these characters exist.

You rarely find a female character who isn't either in love with the main character, has huge boobs, is a total doormat, or is just not... not strong unless she has powers of some kind.

It's sad, really, if you think about it.

But case and point, the brothers aren't going to allow someone like that to live. Yui, Yui is actually doing really well for her situation, if you stop, and think about it.

Let me play this out for you, put yourself in her shoes:

You are told to go live in Japan, so you go, and upon going into this huge freaking mansion, you find nobody is waiting for you. What do you do:

Option A, Get the fuck out of there, there are probably serial killers in the mansion

Option B, Look around, see what there, call out to see if the owner is home, since you are in a persons house.

Option D, Stand at the doorway, and wait, maybe text your friends or family to check if they told the people your were staying with that you were coming that day, or if you have the right address (which already checked because, like, duh, you arrived at a fucking mansion. A. Mansion. Holy Shit)

If you picked A, then... Let me clarify. You don't know that there are vampires in that mansion. All you know is that you traveled a very long way, and are moving into a new home that you found out is a fucking mansion, so you'd be reacting the way you'd react if you found out your living in a mansion. Remember, you don't know shit about the Sakamakis. You would not run, you can't afford another plane ticket or hotel room, nor is there a taxi in the middle of nowhere, and also you're still in your Holy fucking shit I'm so tired and also OMG I get to live in a mansion, am I dreaming this place is awesome" Mode.

Option B, Your outcome will be similar to Yui's. There is a very attractive boy laying a couch, what do you do? Try to wake him up because your tired from your flight and long drive, and also you're probably starving, plus he's fucking hot a hell. He does not have a pulse, so you go to call the cops, but then he, the dead guy, wakes up.

So of course this would throw you off, because, dude, he was dead and now he's not and your brain is foggy from all these new things being pushed up in your face, plus he's eyeing you up and down making you really insecure of your looks cause now you feel ugly because of his, quite literal supernatural beauty. (Unless you have the confidence of a goddess but that's unlikely.) Ayato can also put out KI (killing intent) which basically means you're gonna end up freezing out of fear, plus trying to punch him will do nothing, it be like punching superman. Nothing would happen except maybe he be upset your not being submissive, and pinning you while whispering scary threats in your ear.

Option D, Reiji will find you first since you failed to walk into Ayato's trap, you would then go through what Yui did, being creeped out and licked by random boys who:

Teleport.

Lick her face.

Refer to her as human.

Are told not to kill her.

Display inhumane strength.

See her as a possession.

It's implied that they kill people.

Yui then, at this point, finds out they are vampires, or rather, her suspicions are most likely confirmed. I do believe most of the time she is acting stupid, because it's not like she can just ask if they are vampires. Plus it's not something a logical person assumes, vampires existing would be a lot to take in.

Yui might be naive, but she's actually quite strong if you actually pay attention to her character, and are able to fully grasp exactly what she is going through, and that this is how she facing her captors, torturers, and how she faces death itself, and I think she's pretty strong.

She has her fault, she gullible, naive, oblivious, a bit to trusting, and she clearly has Stockholm Syndrome by the end of Season two, but she's alive and still able to function as a good person, she stays herself and stands up for her beliefs. I think she's strong for that.

So enough with the pointless hating. Please.


Well, I think I've said enough on that topic. Sorry I've been out for a bit, but hey, I'm back.

I was thinking maybe the next chapter should be on the topic of romance, as this seems to be where the Diabolik Lovers fanfictions suffer the most.