Disclaimer I don't own Pokemon.
Ayyy chap 2 was quick, lets see about 3.
I need to take my daily chill pill.
I wanna say thank you to St Elmo's fire for telling how to improve my writing. Note I am young and haven't done my gcse so I am very grateful for your help.
It should be changed by now
For Raychiu, there is a hint for which legendary pokemon Violet has. It's in chapter 2 {.-.}
Ash murmured under his breath "Red. I like that." He looked at Violet and nodded. He smiled and gave a look of approval. Then they all sat down and discussed plans for the tournament.
[1 month later…]
"Come on guys. I think the hotel's gonna be full very soon. Let's hurry and get our room!" Max shouted, punching his fist in the air. Making many people look, point and laugh at him. This embarrassed Max.
"If you want a nice room then stop stopping and hurry up." May said, pulling his hair walking towards the gang and heading to the hotel. Max started to stretch and shout. Telling May to let him go.
"Come on Max, your such a kid. At least not as immature like Ash." Iris said and everyone laughed at it.
They hurried over to the hotel desk to enter tournament and get a luxurious room in the hotel. They then go outside to look around the city.
Things were looking good for the traitors. Serena looked around, grabbing her famous fiance Peter, the current Kalos prince and future king. Hugging him tightly and glaring at other jealous girls looking at the couple. May was holding hands with Drew. They were madly in love and people were envy of their success. Dawn and Barry were look at each other's eye, deeply in love. Iris and Cilan are also dating and are eating ice cream with Cilan talking about the flavours and how different pokemon like different tastes. Misty was talking to Brock and Cynthia about going to look at the water show when a explosion of steam raised to into the air. They all ran towards it and saw Red defeating a trainer with one pokemon, Lucario. Completely desemating his opponent.
"Wow he's powerful," Max said. Wanting to challenge him and earn his 'rightful' place as champion of the region. "I'm gonna challenge him and defeat him without breaking a sweat." He smirked, hurried down the stairs to the battlefield and shouted "I challenge you to a battle!"
Red turned around, looking at Max and the rest of the traitors behind Max's back. He eyes filled with rage as he stared at them. He nodded and headed to the field into the trainer box and nodded to Lucario. It jumped on the battlefield and turned its back to its opponent. Max ran in the box and threw out his pokemon.
"Go Exploud, lets get this over with." Max shouted.
"EXPLO, EXPLOUD." The Pokemon exclaimed. Ready to take down any opponent.
"Brock, help me ref this match." Max shouted. Knowing that he would defeat his foe quickly without a sweat.
"Sure Max. 3v3?" Asked the Pokemon doctor Brock. Max nodded and shouted "Hyper beam!"
Explode fired his powerful beam and blasted it across the field. Hitting its mark and a cloud of dust rose from the ground.
Max laughed, telling Red was trash and weak when the smoke lifted to see a Lucario standing there, smirking at his opponent without a scratch on his body.
"Aura sphere." Red commanded. Lucario thrusted its arm out and shot of blue energy ball out of its hands. Exploud tried to dodge it but fails as aura sphere always hits its mark. A ball of smoke appeared covering the entire field. When the smoke vanished, the Exploud was knocked out with a Lucario charging up his aura.
"What...t. Im...im...impossible. How… You must have cheated you loser!" Shouting across the field. Max and enraged and threw out 2 of his best pokemon. A Sceptile and a pikachu. Seeing this Red stared at his first Pokemon. Ready to take it down with one single hit.
"I'll show you the power of my pokemon. MEGA EVOLVE SCEPTILE!" Max screamed. The sceptile was surrounded with a ball of energy and transformed into a grass-dragon type pokemon.
"Use dragon rush." Max exclaimed. Many people spectating the battle was shocked that the referee Brock was not being fair and Max losing control.
"Pikachu, Use thunder, and make it hurt!" His pikachu then fired a huge bolt of lightning, draining its energy.
"Extreme speed"
Lucario then quickly punched Max's Pikachu and Mega Sceptile. Throwing them back into the dirt. Then Max saw a blur and felt a gust of wind. Max saw a Lucario standing in front of him, looking at him with mean look. It then picked it up and stared into his eyes.
"Look what you did to him! You broke him!" Lucario exclaimed.
Then suddenly his master commanded his pokemon to return by his side. Max was still shell shocked when Red pulled out his necklace with a Z crystal and a keystone on it. He then slammed his finger on the Z crystal and shouted "ALL OUT PUMMELLING!" The lucario then jumped up into the air. Shooting an aura sphere and then throwing energy constructs of fist into both pokemon.
The 2 exhausted pokemon tried to dodge them but failed to do so and was punched left and right. Leaving them with bruises and marks everywhere.
"No...o, t..this can't be." Max started shaking. He then threw a mean glare at Red's Lucario and screamed "You cheated. My pokemon are the most superior pokemon of all time!" With Iris, Cilan and Brock backing him up.
Champion Cynthia looked at his eyes and fell in love with him. Misty, May, Dawn and Serena all did too, not knowing what power he held.
Max was about to attack him when his friends advised him to go to the pokemon centre before it is too late.
"I will defeat you… whatever your name is. Just wait and see." With that, Max and his friends rushed toward the city's heart.
Red just smiled, smirked and flew away on his Charizard before anyone else could talk to him.
Hey guys so chap 3 is out. I'm gonna try to write as much as possible. If u can plz tell me how to change past chapters as I already corrected them. Anyway review, pm me and favorite. (°~°)
Im sorry if it isn't that great so um ideas would help. thx
