Hi guys, thanks all who have reviewed and would like more, im dedicating this chapter to you.i dont own the hobbit
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(time skip)"gandalf can't you do something about this deluge?" Dori asked grumpily
"I believe i can" whispered atanatari so only dori could hear her thoughts,
"well, do so" dori snapped
"very well, i shall" and after saying that atanatari waved her hand and began to mutter a spell
rain, rain go away and come get us another day"
Suddenly the rain stops and the company (even thorin) cheered and then all of the sisters eyes went white and they began to hover a few inches off of the ground and after a gasp from the company they began to sing
home is behind death ahead
and through every path we tread
i see fire i see smoke
i see blood and loss of hope
brothers peace comes not with swords but wth words
and so they ended the song...
Modern day Wales
"honey come on, time to go home" I said as calmly as i could even though i was fuming with my daughter, she had run off into a sweet shop and taken sweets (worth £20) and i had to pay for it after apologizing to the man at the desky -thing, yet the next thing i heard was a sreeching of car wheels and a crying male baby -who was in the path of the car-
Suddenly the car started driving at around 90 mph
i ran and ran and ran
i picked up the child and watched the car go into the empty pram, next i gave him back to his mother who said she was eternally grateful and i waved it off saying it was my duty before my daughter came and hugged me
"you were amazing mama"she said... before screaming,
what happened next was a blur i ran, grabbed Melody (her daughters name) and the next i knew i had gun pointed at each of our heads and we were shot...but all i could hear were the screams, screams of terror and then it all went black
Once again guys constructive critism and please RR so i can feel happy thanks to everyone following me and reading this its great a 13 year old writing this story, i had written it down and got some off the top of my head but its fun bye ,bye
RDMxx
