this is the fixed up version quicksilv

Heh, don't know your email... scratch head It was mid afternoon when Naruto started his training with Kakashi. Not only was he wearing 200 pounds of weight on each of his legs but he was wearing weights on his fingers too! Then out at the horizon he saw something that would scar forever. What he saw was a man and boy who look liked clones and what scarred him more was they were wearing green spandex with bowl shaped hair, next was what he saw was what looked like caterpillars where eyebrows were supposed too be. To him they looked like two big freaky monsters that came too eat him. "OH MY GOD PLEASE DONT EAT ME!" yelled/pleaded the young Naruto. "MY YOUNG AND YOUTHFUL FRIEND WE ARE NOT HERE TOO EAT YOU WE ARE MERLY TRAINING." yelled the bigger of the two. "Then who are you?" asked Naruto. "My name is Might Guy and this is my youthful student Rock lee. Lee introduce yourself. Hello my name is Rock Lee and I'm-" Lee then got interrupted by the blond. "I dont care I'm training, so leave me alone." Naruto said with a scowl. "Very well till we meet again, come Lee, we must do more training and become more youthful!" the both said and they then proceeded to run into the sunset. "Wait how did they run into the sunset when its only 3:00 p.m.?" questioned Naruto. But he'll never get his answer. As Naruto was training to get his hand signs faster he heard a noise in the woods. He looked up and saw that it was around midnight. "I wonder who could be in the woods this late at night." Naruto asked himself. He went into the woods and saw a man in a mask holding an unconscious girl. "Hey what the fuck are you doing with that girl?!" Naruto demanded. If there was one thing Naruto hates are perverts, especially the pedophile kind. "I'm kidnapping her duh." came the intelligent replied of the cloud shinobi. "Thats it, I'm going to kick your ass!" said Naruto. He then used his favorite hand seal and made 1,000 shadow clones. The Cloud Nin used a Lightning Shock jutsu to cut the numbers in down to a small amount due to Naruto's recklessness. Naruto then tried a new technique he's been dying to try out on Kakashi. He sent 50 clones up in the air spinning and performed Shadow Rotation Barrage. In a instant 50 ax kicks fell on either the Cloud Ninja head or shoulder thereby breaking his shoulders and knocking him unconscious. When Hiashi and Hizashi Hyuga came they saw the man get his ass kicked by a six year old that made 1,000 shadow clones and not even break a sweat. Too say they were impress was a understatement. Hinata also saw Naruto beat up the cloud shinobi and instantly fell in love. When he was finished he tied up the man and turned too Hiashi. "Thank you" "Naruto Uzumaki." Naruto introduced and bowed. "Naruto Uzumaki for saving my daughter." then Naruto turned to Hinata and blushed He has never saw a more gorgeous girl before. Hinata also blushed when she saw him. 'I never saw someone so beautiful/handsome in my life.' they both thought. Hiashi saw this and smiled. He was glad his daughter had a crush on someone who was strong and nice. 'Though I wish it would last.' he thought. Oh but it would last. "Naruto-kun how would you mind staying the night so you can protect my daughter Hinata?" Hiashi asked. "It would be a honor to have you dine with us too." said Hizashi with happiness. "Really I'd love too. Believe it!" he said. And Hinata never new someone could come up with such a...COOL catch phrase. Then they walked too the Hyuga complex too get some sleep.