oops! I kinda made a huge mistake in chapter 2. I would like to thank jdcocoagirl for noticing it. The mistake was making Nick one of the victems and the Nick showing up to process the scene. Please just forget that Nick was one of the CSI's to process the scene. Thanks Newkid-is-me
Chapter 3: Arriving At The Hospital
The ambulance's had just pulled up to the ambulance dock at the hospital. The ER doctors came out and help unload them to bring them into the hospital. The paramedics were listing off Sara's and Nick's injuries." 33 year old female gunshot wound to the chest,almost lost her on the way. 33 year old male possible concussion, and some broken limbs. "
The head doctor spoke up. " Get them to trauma room one." She ordered. " Hi, I'm doctor Emily Geller, I'll be looking after them until they get better. You are?" She asked.
"I'm Gil Grisoom, their supervisor, you might want to know that Sara and Nick are engaged" Grissom said. Brass walked through the hospital doors. He walked up to Grissom and Dr. Geller. " And this is Dective Jim Brass, he's one of our coworkers at LVPD" Grissom added. He flashed Dr.Geller a flirty smile. She looked around 45 years old, only 3 years younger than himself.
" Code Blue, Code Blue, Dr. Geller get in here!!!" Yelled her intern, Sandra Green. Dr. Geller started down the hall. " Never mind we have it under control" Sandra said again. Dr. Geller started laughing. She had thought that was funny. Suddenly her pager beeped.
"Sorry, I got to go, we have an O.R room open, we're bringing Sara into surgery now. I promise we''ll do the best we can do. " She said then got up then walked down to Trauma one where they we're prepping Sara for surgery. " Oh, you may visit Nick now,but he is still unconsious, if he wake up press the button by the bed. " She yelled over her shoulder. Grissom and Brass walked down to were he was being treated, which was also Trauma room one.
When they got to the room they pulled a couple chairs up to the bedside and started to talk to him, in hopes that he would wake-up. " Hey, Nicky it's us. Us as in Grissom and Brass. He hope you wake-up soon. Just to let you know Sara is in surgery. The guy that ran you off the road must have stopped and got out of the car. Nicky, Sara was shot." Grissom, said with tears running down his face. You see Grissom had always been in love with Sara, but by time he found that out, it was too late. She was over him, and falling hard for Nick. At first their relationship hurt him, but he knew that if he truly loved her he had to let her go. But still at times it hurt to see them together, especially when they had announced their engagment.
Brass now had decided to speak. " I hope you and Sara are going to recover. You should wake up soon. You know what I just realized? Your wedding is in a month and a half. Please wake-up soon."
That was all I could think of. Do you guys have anyideas for the story? Please review tell me what you think, even if you think this story is horrible. Please choose on of the below options.
A) The doctors find out Sara is pregnant and she loses the baby during surgery.
B) The doctors find out Sara is pregnant but the baby is fine, and the surgery goes fine.
C) The surgery goes well but Sara gets into a coma.
D) Both B and C but Nick doesn't wake up for a while, and neither does Sara
Thanks again for reading,
Newkid-Is Me