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Tohru Honda2
Chapter 4 the revive.
"Oh NO!" yelled Yuna, running up to calli scared for her with her breathing short and her heart beating slowly and sadly.
She bent down over her, "Calli? A-are you...?" Calli didn't move. "Calli!", she cryed "NO!"
Tidus put her hand on Yunas shoulder, she looked up at him and he shook his head.
"TIDUS!" she yelled at him, "SHE ISN"T I WONT BELIEVE IT!" she looked back at Calli she noticed all her features she had two pigtails with the pigtail holders half way down the pigtail, her face with no pimples but a long cut down her face that Yuna hoped that wouldn't leave a scar, she had long eyelashes, and thin lips that were dry.
"Tidus we have to do something!" she looked back up Tidus noticing that Wakka, Rikku and, Paine were working hard to help everybody, "Tidus?" she saw he almost looked like he was in a trance, "Tidus, hello."
He bent down.
"TIDUS?" she waved her hand back and forth across his face, "Answer ME?"
He put his hand on Calli.
"I know I am worried too." She said very calm, "Huh, Tidus what a-are-?"
A light started caomeing out of his hand into Calli.
She looked at it and her heart skipped a beat.
"TIDUS! This can't, NO WAY!"
BAMMMMM! The light looked like it exploded!
She fanted.
She dreamt that Tidus was holding something, a red rock, his eyes were closed, concetrating.
"Tidus?" She thought, "What my-my voice. I-I can't speak."
The light started to glow a bright red light.
"OH NO!", she thought, "NO this can't-NO NO NO! its not even supposed to exist! My dad used to tell me stories about it,
but..."
Tidus started to scream!
She woke, her heart beating violentlly in her chest. She could hardly breath.
She put her hand on her chest.
"Okay!" She said to herself, "just a dream...but...could it...?"
She heard voices outside the tent, she peake outside it was still dark, she saw Tidus and Wakka talking,
"yeah I know. I'll take care of it"
"Good." replyed Wakka, as he walked off.
Tidus scrached his head, sighed, Yuna remembered the pearcing scream she heard in her dream.
He turned and saw Yuna, He smiled slightlly.
as he walked towards her she started to think, "Could he really have used that stone to come back here?" She shook her head,
"No No way It would've almost killed him, Almost, Maybe...he could have."
"hiya Yuna you just fanted I was really worried"
Tidus said to her.
"No Tidus don't worry about me wheres Calli, better yet is she alive."
"Oh don't worry about her, she is walking around building her strength-"
"REALLY!" Yuna interupted, "Thats not good she sould be in bed reasting!"
"WOAH! Calm down, Yuna. shes fine, don't worry."
"What don't worry? Thats crazy she was really hurt back there!"
She ran past him, "okay where would she be Tidus?"
"in the crusaders-opps I mean the hotel tent over there."
"THANKS TIDUS!" She yelled back at him.
As she ran towards the hotel tent she started thinking again, "I know, I shoulda talked to him about what happened to Calli and how he got back here, but...I..."
She got there.
"CALLI!", she yelled in the tent.
"Over here Yuna!"
"Calli, you can walk?"
She asked surprised.
"Yeah Yuna, Anyways have you seen my Chocobo?" she asked looking side to side.
Yuna looked at her in surprise.
"WOW! she actually still wants to be with her chocobo after it atacked her."
she turned her head smiled and said, "No. heh"
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