3rd chapter, I love naruto do you? XD kind of an odd question to ask, considering you're reading a naruto fanfic.
I don't own naruto, live with it.
Kyuubi's Doom
Chapter 3
Eyes closed he felt his paws hit the outside ground, it wasn't soppy wet like it always had been in the cage he had known for 13 years. He opened his eyes and saw the demon looming over him. He looked at the ground and saw naruto, unconscious. "Hmph, he thinks I'm so weak, I bet he couldn't catch me if I started running in this form!" Kyuubi thought angrily and looked back up to the demon. "Thanks for letting me out, but I am not going to be anybody's pet!" he snarled and quickly threw Naruto onto his head and started to run.
"Heh, I always like a good chase." The demon cackled and started to run after his fox pet.
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Shino and Shikamaru ran side by side and Choji and Hinata did the same, they dodged demon attacks and jumped over dead bodies. They saw Hokage tower be destroyed and only hoped Tsunade wasn't in there when it happened. She would know what to do, or at least know where to get people to safety.
"I-I hope Naruto Kun will be ok, he didn't come with us." Hinata thought worriedly as she ran at Choji's side. She looked behind her and for a split second she was certain she saw a golden red fox dash into the forest followed by another gigantic demon. After a while she came to the conclusion that she was loosing her mind in all this destruction, so she thought nothing of it."HOKAGE SAMA!" Shikamaru bellowed and they ran to her. She was sitting on the ground healing a young child. And a couple of ninjas behind her were escorting people to an under ground tunnel that went underneath Konoha.
She looked up, her face had a large gash in it and she wore a grim expression. "You four go down the tunnel, I'll fallow once we get everyone who's still alive into the other tunnels underground!" She said hurriedly and continued healing the child, then looked up again, her face full of confusion. "Where's Naruto?" she asked.
"He went the other way when we ran to Hokage tower." Shino said.
"What? Why the hell would he do that? Do you know where he went!" She asked, her voice shaking.
"No, he just left. We have no clue if he is dead or ali-" Shino cut off as they saw Hinata run back towards were they last saw him.
"HINATA GET BACK HERE!" Tsunade screamed but she didn't listen, instead she kept running. Tsunade looked at Shino and the others. "You three get underground and don't come back up until you hear things settle down!" She ordered and handed the kid she had finished reviving to Shikamaru and started running after Hinata.
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"Naruto Kun! Please don't be dead!" Hinata pleaded as she ran back to the crater that they had last seen him. When Shino had said that he might be dead, she had finally realized the possibilities of him not surviving out here alone, no matter how determined he was all the time. "Naruto Kun!" She thought again and urched to a stop when she came to the crater she had last seen him. Hinata looked around, the demons were still ripping people apart and squashing them, there were very little humans left, and the screaming was dying down. There was still no Naruto in site, so she resorted to looking at the dead bodies on the ground and only hoped she wouldn't see him among them.
"HINATA!" Tsunade yelled as she caught up to her.
She looked around, tears starting to well up in her eyes. "I can't find him." She sobbed and wiped at tear from her eye.
"Don't worry, he won't die that easily." Tsunade said to her and put a hand on her shoulder. "Now I want you to get as many people as you can find and bring them to the tunnel under ground. I'll go look for Naruto." Tsunade said to Hinata and she nodded sadly. "Don't worry." She said again, and with that they she was off to go find Naruto.
Hinata sighed and only hoped the fifth would stay true to her word and bring Naruto Kun back to safety.
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A claw came down upon Kyuubi and grabbed his back. "I have you now, fox demon. Hehehe." The demon laughed and picked up Kyuubi. Naruto fell to the ground and landed softly in some dead leaves. Kyuubi bit the demon's hand and withdrew immediately because its skin was as hard as rock, possibly harder. "Now before you can get away again I'm going to take you back to my planet, you won't want to leave my side there. Its not like your cute peaceful little Earth you have here, its a lot harsher then you can imagine." It exclaimed and grinned evilly.
Naruto awoke to this statement and opened his eyes after the demon said this to Kyuubi. Just then there was a loud bang and the demon disappeared in a flash of light and smoke. He got up, his eyes wide in amazement, starring at the place Kyuubi and the demon had last been.
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Tsunade stood there in the trees, mouth agape. She had witnessed the whole thing. The nine-tailed demon humans had always feared for centuries was now in the care of an even stronger demon! She ran over to Naruto, who must have been thinking the same thing. "Naruto, we should get under ground. I have a feeling that the above ground world is going to get a bit messy." She said to him and helped him to his feat.
He nodded his expression still unchanged from what he had just seen. He had learned to trust his inner feelings and right now it was screaming at him to find a good place to hide. "Yeah." He said quietly.
They were just about at the nearest underground tunnel of Konoha when Tsunade came to a halt at the edge of the forest, making Naruto bumped into her. He was just about to yell at her when she put her hands to her lips to hush him. He looked out from behind a tree and saw three gigantic demons talking to one another.
"Did you see, Glethsic found a demon fox pet here. This planet is odd, that demon was so small." A vampire like demon said to the other two.
"Huh, no fair, I wish I had a fox pet!" A tall skinny demon whined. This demon had bones sticking out of his shoulder blades and kneecaps, not to mention his long bony like tail.
"We're bringing some of the humans back to our planet for servants so maybe you'll find something you like here Noth." Another more-wider one said and grinned.
Naruto swallowed. "Servants? They're making some of us servants? Not on my watch!" He thought and shook his fist in anger. He saw Tsunade put a look of anger on her face too, and then motioned for him to fallow. Just as they were leaving Naruto heard the last of the demon's conversation.
"So how are we doing this again? Are we destroying a country each week?"
"Yes."
Chapter End
So the story is coming together :D, how do you like it? Please leave reviews! I want to make this a cool story to read, but I don't know how I'm going to do it with out any confidence :(.