BloodTooth's Hatred
Chapter 3
Suddenly Bloodpaw felt sad he was mentored by Ravenshadow a very unpopular warrior but his brother Goldenpaw was mentored by the clan deputy Boulderclaw
'Did Gorgestar like him better than me,' he thought 'if so I don't know what I did wrong?' finally he got up his brother was gone and bye the smell of it he wasn't far he had only just gotten up 'first day as an apprentice.' He thought then he heard Ravenshadow yowl "Bloodpaw time for training we are going to practice hunting after looking around our territory with your brother." He jumped up and bounded toward him the black and gray warrior was small skinnier then most of the other warriors his limbs were long and his amber gaze pierced him and his brother's mentor was well shaped muscular and had blue eyes his gray pelt was very hard to see from the shadows then he heard something behind him he turned to see a silver-gray she-cat it was Dawnkit "Hi," she meowed "tell me if you find something exciting out there I can't wait till I'm an apprentice." He suddenly thought why did she trust him more than his brother? His brother was more trustworthy then he found himself unable to answer that question
-Later that day-
"Now that we are done looking at our territory I think we can start hunting don't you think Boulderclaw?" "Why not unless the apprentices are tired." he meowed to Ravenshadow then look at him and his brother "We are fine right Bloodpaw?"
Asked Goldenpaw "right." Ravenshadow quickly pointed his tail "over there that would be a good place to hunt since they are only apprentices." Meowed his mentor "your right it would be a good place to start hunting," he turned to look at the apprentices "you two go in there and after you found your first prey come back but before that lets teach you the hunters crouch." He got on the ground and showed him a familiar crouch but he wanted to try the crouch he invented so he did and when he said go Bloodpaw quickly smelled the air it had a familiar sent mouse and a fat one by the smell he bounded lightly over until it was strong in his mouth then he got down his head as close to his shoulders and he stalked walking slowly and being aware of twigs and leaves then when he was close enough he striked at the mouse but it was aware and quickly moved he threw his claws in front of its escape and his right forearm hit something he looked to see his claws in the mouses head they went straight through the skull and out the other side it was dead he quickly took it off his claws and walked back killing a rabbit and missing 2 squirrels he was the last one back and his mentor and Boulderclaw saw him with the prey between his jaws and said he did a good job Goldenpaw had nothing and though he sounded nice he could see in his brothers eyes he was sad then he looked at the mouse he let out a gasp "Oh great StarClan that mouse looks terrible ill be surprised if even Bumblepelt will eat it." Then his mentor said now Goldenpaw prey is prey even if it doesn't look killed properly." "sorry it just surprised me that's all."
Before peace blood will coat a tooth and gold will shine brightly