Heres the update once again thnxs so much for the reviews that you guys gave since i wrote this on my Phone i think there is less spelling mistakes and you know..stuff
so here ya go
POV of the brunette
I slowly open my eyes realising that I was still alive and was saved by someone because he saw that he was in a room that he never saw before
as I slowly got up I fell back because of a headache that went through my head.
Then I heard the door sliding open and a pink pigtailed boy came out holding onto wooden bucket.
" Your awake! you shouldn't be up yet with that bad injury of yours!" looking at my arm I remembered what happened the other night.
" What happened to you?" asked the pink boy
"I ..."
Then the door slides open with a brunette standing and waking in and sliding the door back
" You don't have to say it if don't want to" the boy sat down next to the pinkette.
"I'm Shindou Takuto one of the gods that live here at Raimon shrine and this is my best friend Kirino Ranmaru one of the youkai who also live here"
Kirino bowed his head down.
".. Oh yes I'm Matsukaze Tenma please call me Tenma thank you so much for helping me out " I bowed my head down to the two boys.
"So are you a youkai or a human?" Asked Kirino sniffing at me.
" you don't smell like either"
"... I'm ... im a hanyou "I answered back.
Translation
Kami:God
Youkai: Japanese mythical creatures
Hanyou: a word for half demon or youkai in Japanese
Special thnxs to Honoka chan (Soccers Heart) for giving me tips and advices it helped me alotXD
Pm me what you think other characters should be as youkai
i will say this now that the evil youkai will be said as Ayakashi which also means youkai in japanese^^
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