A/N: Critical's P.O.V is just of him and his views of his comrades and his targets. An OC from an epic person is in here, so if you don't want to get confused about a new face, you might wanna read her bio real quick. If not, skip Critical's P.O.V! Enjoy!
Demons
Chapter 2: Found You Forever
~Critical's P.O.V~
I've been a proxy for... what? Two months now? And already, I've learned a few things about the people we're going after.
Alex: Crazy dude who will not hesitate to kill anyone.
Tim: Kinda... normal guy. He's my comrade, so I can't say much about him. He does have cough attacks sometimes. They get pretty bad if he doesn't have his medicine.
Jay: I think he's paranoid, but really, you have four proxies after you, that are related to The Operator. I'd be paranoid too!
Jennifer: Well... she's a hider. And almost like Alex, she'll attack if she feels threatened, and the time I actually got close to her, I could tell she already didn't like me.
And the other three proxies? Well, we got a new one! She's The Operator's niece. But, we're all getting along, and she's pretty nice! But, back to the others, they're pretty okay.
Masky: Other than wanting to get his missions done, and sometimes get revenge on Alex, he's a pretty laid back dude. He can also be... pretty angry at times, and with me having a short temper, we easily get into fights.
Hoody: He's pretty cool. He plays his parts perfectly, gets his jobs done, and is the fastest. No one can catch him when he's either fleeing, or being chased. He's also quiet, which I like, and doesn't get in my way when we're on missions together.
Lilly: Well, since she's new, I'll explain her looks. She has pale white skin, long black hair that has strawberry highlights that reaches the middle of her back. It's also cut into a girl scene style, with white bangs covering her left eye. Her eye color is black, teal irises, and white pupils. She sometimes scares me with those eyes, but I'll never tell her that. She also wears a black t-shirt that has in light blue letter 'I didn't slap you, I just high-fived your face', light blue jeans, and gray converse. She also has on these black and red beaded rosary necklace with a black sugar skull charm on it instead of a cross and a fake light pink lilly hair clip. She's a sweet girl, and very nice and helpful, but when she's angry, oh my gosh, it's like WWIII just began. And get this, she's friend's with Jennifer! JENNIFER! The girl who hates nearly everyone in the world, and trusts nobody! I'll never understand that girl. But, when she's on her missions, she wears a mask like all of us, and doesn't really go near Jennifer. Her mask is pure white with yellow, blue, and aqua green bullseye style eyes, a large cheshire grin, and a pink triangle nose with pointed ears. On the top of the nose are three black bars and three black dots underlining the eyes. It's a nice mask, I can't lie about that.
Me: Well, I'll introduce myself, since I'm also kinda new. My name is Critical. I won't give out my real name since I don't really use it anymore. I'm mostly laid back and easy going, but it's easy to make me mad. I'm also very protective of my friends, master, and my mask. I have, like Lilly's, pale white skin. My eye color is... well... I don't remember anymore. I've seen myself with my mask for so long, I've forgotten. But, my hair color is black. And my mask is white with black eyes and two stripes under the eyes. I wear a dark red hoodie, dark blue jeans, and black vans. Do you know how hot it gets when I'm running away from someone!? It feels like my feet are on fire! But, yeah, that's about it for me. I try to get my missions done as quick as I can so I can get to rest.
That's all for now. PEACE!
~Normal P.O.V – Proxies~
Masky leaned against the tree, looking at the two males in front of him. Hoody, his partner for nearly two years now, was on the right, and Critical was on the left. Masky didn't have too much to say about the new male proxy, but he had to admit, he did get jobs done fast. He heard footsteps, and looked behind him, seeing Lilly, one of the newest proxies. She was also The Operator's niece, so he couldn't shout at her if he got angry. He could at Hoody and Critical, just not Lilly.
"There you are!" Masky hissed quietly, watching as Lilly put her mask on, glaring at him before she did so.
"So... what's the plan?" Critical asked, crossing his arms. He could see Masky now glare at him through his eye-holes in the mask.
"Well, Hoody and I need to go find Alex. We heard he's close to Jay, and we can't afford for him to get hurt." Masky explained, before looking at Lilly. "You and Critical are gonna have to keep an eye out for either Alex or Jay."
"What about the other one?" Critical asked. Masky shrugged.
"What about her? She's probably in her hideout, either sleeping or making plans on leaving to go somewhere," He turned to look at Lilly. "Isn't that right?"
"She was talking about relocating. But she said it won't be for a while. She still wants her answers." she replied. Masky nodded slowly.
"Right. So, like I said. We'll go hunting for Alex, and you two should keep an eye out for them." he spoke. The three nodded, all understanding. Saying goodbye and good luck, the two groups split up. Masky and Hoody went to the woods, knowing Jay would roaming around there to find anything interesting. Critical and Lilly went to the tunnel in the forest near Rosswood Park. Alex usually went there to... well, just to be there. They weren't sure if he was there this time, but they weren't sure if he would be there. Hopefully he would, and they would be able to watch him.
~Jay~
Jay sighed, gently kicking a rock as he roamed through the burnt down hospital. The last time he was here, that hooded person left a tape. Maybe this time he could find something more? After all, he hadn't exactly looked at the place in a long time, and had seen some more masked people enter the place. Maybe there could be more clues?
CRUNCH!
"Gulp... Uh... Tim?" Jay called quietly. He was about to call out for Jennifer, but remembered she still hadn't forgiven him for the whole Marble Hornets thing. Like Tim, how could he have trusted her after all those years!? She was labeled insane!
Taking a deep breath, Jay continued to walk, looking in each room carefully, trying to see if there was anything he could use for a clue. He finally found something. It was a piece of paper that read: 'He's near! Run while there's still time!'. He tilted his head. Was this for him? Or someone el-
"OOF!" Jay fell to the ground, both paper and camera flying from his grip and landing away from him. He was turned over, now facing Alex, his once best friend. Alex now stared down at him with hatred in his eyes. Before Jay could even try to talk to him, Alex had already raised his fist and had punched Jay in the cheek. This happened several more times, before Alex was tackled off of Jay. He got up, seeing Masky was pinning the smaller male to the ground, who was struggling like there was no tomorrow. Though Jay was grateful Masky had showed up to save him, he couldn't stay. Jay quickly grabbed his camera and paper and ran out of the room. He knew Masky would be okay. He was strong guy!
Getting out the burnt down hospital, Jay put a hand up to his bleeding nose, looking around at his surroundings. He spotted someone by a tree, but the person quickly ran off before he could even think of chasing him. He sighed, starting to quickly walk back to his car. Hopefully he would have more answers soon.
~Jennifer~
Jennifer laid on her mattress, eyes closed as she thought about leaving. 'It's all so simple!' she thought. 'I can easily pack what I need, get a ticket, and leave! But... I need to know why those things are following me. I know it's crazy, but I have to! There has to be a reason, and I want to know. I also can't just leave Lilly one day! She's too nice, and she doesn't deserve a reason for finding her friend suddenly absent from her new home!' Jennifer opened her eyes, laughing.
"Just listen to me," she spoke to herself, a smile still upon her face. "I actually care about someone for once in my life. And she truly seems like an honest person! It's so... weird. Maybe she's my ticket for the answers? Or a way out? Either way, I can't risk losing her. She's the only person I can trust, and fall back on if I ever need any help."
Jennifer slowly got to her feet, looking out the cracked window and into the forest. She once more laughed.
"I can't believe she's still around," she continued. "She knows me! She knows what society thinks of me, yet she's still around! I've told her my dreams, what I've seen, and what I've been through, and she's still my friend. And the best part, she's actually normal! Maybe my luck is changing. Maybe I'll finally be able to be how I was years ago."
~Critical and Lilly~
Lilly walked alongside Critical, both scanning the area for Jay or Alex.
"So... about your new friend," Critical started, making Lilly look up at him. "You might want to get rid of her."
"What? Why?" she asked, confused about why he had said that.
"Well, Masky, Hoody, and I have been talking. I mean, it's nice that you have a friend who's not family, but she's like Alex. If you one day say or do the wrong thing, she's going to attack you!" he explained. Lilly thought back to all the times she hung out with Jennifer. The girl actually poured her heart out when she felt comfortable around her.
"I don't think she would," she replied. "She's been honest to me after she started to trust me."
"Well, just be careful. I don't need our mission messed up because of your new friend." he told her. She glared at him behind her mask, but before she could shout at him, they stopped. Speak of the devil, they saw Jennifer up ahead. She was quickly making her way through the forest, something clenched in her hand. She soon stopped by the entrance of the tunnel, lifting on of the stones that was by it, set the thing she had in her hand down, and placed the stone on it. She then looked around, hoping no one saw her and left back to her newest home.
"Come on, let's see it!" Critical said, running over to the spot when Jennifer finally left. Lilly followed, watching as he picked up the stone and grabbed the note. He unfolded it, reading first and not allowing Lilly to see.
"What does it say!?" she asked quietly, trying to see. Once he was done, he handed it to her.
"Read for yourself." he replied. She grabbed the note and slowly read over it, surprised at what was on the paper.
A/N: Okay, don't kill me for another A/N, but I need to add two more info's. They're both my OCs, well, except one of them. That one is someone from my life. Here it is! Critical is up first!
Name: Critical
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Personality: Laid back, easy going, easy to anger, protective, can easily snap
Clothing: Dark red hoodie, dark blue jeans, black vans, a white mask with black eyes and two black stripes underneath the eyes
Likes: Getting things done, his comrades, nothing getting in trouble, cold/cool nights
Dislikes: Someone getting in his way, being yelled at for no reason, heat
Fears: The Operator
Weapons: Bloody lead pipe, bloody switchblade
Friends: Jay [] Alex [] Tim [] Jennifer [] Masky [X] Hoody [X] The Operator [X]
Enemies: Jay [] Alex [X] Tim [] Jennifer [] Masky [] Hoody [] The Operator []
Place: Proxy [X] Worried About Friend [] Wanting Answers []
Please Explain Your Choice: Critical has been a proxy ever since he finally snapped. He now obeys The Operator, and goes on missions with the others.
Problems Like Tim? (A.K.A changes personalities if something happens): It's rare, but sometimes he'll turn back into his old self, and doesn't remember anything. But, he has to be hit in the right spot on the back of head really hard.
Places Most Scared Of: Burnt Down Hospital [] Forest [] Park [] Old School [] Home []
Places Felt Most Safe: Burnt Down Hospital [] Forest [X] Park [X] Old School [] Home[]
History (optional): Prefers not to talk about it
Name: Thomas (my "little brother"!)
Age: A year younger than Jennifer
Gender: Male
Personality: Usually happy, can be depressed, speaks his mind, can be racist (this is him in real life! I'm sorry if anything that happens offends anyone!)
Clothing: Black hoodie, blue jeans, black converse, black hat with red trim, and sometimes he wears red glasses
Likes: Knives, friends, being happy, his girlfriend
Dislikes: Unknown
Fears: N/A (I don't ask what he likes or dislikes or what he's scared of. He's Thomas. That's it!)
Weapons: Switchblade
Friends: Jay [] Alex [] Tim [] Jennifer [X] Masky [] Hoody [] The Operator []
Enemies: Jay [] Alex [X] Tim [] Jennifer [] Masky [] Hoody [] The Operator []
Place: Proxy [] Worried About Friend [X] Wanting Answers []
Please Explain Your Choice: Through the years he and Jennifer have been apart, they've been writing letters to each other. When Thomas moved out to Jennifer's area, she had already went into her hiding spot, and told Thomas to visit a certain spot everyday so they could still talk.
Problems Like Tim? (A.K.A changes personalities if something happens): N/A
Places Most Scared Of: Burnt Down Hospital [] Forest [] Park [] Old School [] Home []
Places Felt Most Safe: Burnt Down Hospital [] Forest [] Park [] Old School [] Home[X]
History (optional): N/A
So, hopefully this chapter wasn't bullshit, but it probably was. But ya know what? I DON'T CARE! I haven't been feeling too well in my mind, so everything kinda sucks right now. Anyways, see you guys whenever!