All Alone

by MissLilly235045

ITS HERE! The rewrite to ALONE! I know you've all been waiting. You don't have to read ALONE, by the way. Anyway, here's the summary: "She didn't want to be known as the coward, but she was scared. Scared, of the darkness swallowing her up. Ironic, huh?" (R&R. Cussing, Suicide Warnings, Bi-Polar Dissorder. - I've fully researched the disorder, btw; T for safety, probably M soon!)

3. Chapter 3: Invisible

THANK YOU TO ALL REVIEWERS!

I know the last 2 chapters have been short, but I have written them all after one another. Also, I have done a quarter of Chapter 4, as I planned on making it Chap No. 3. Anyway, enjoy! READ THE WRITING BELOW!

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I SUGGEST YOU READ THIS NEXT NOTE, IT'S VERY IMPORTANT: When I said I was re-writing this, my writing and imagination has matured greatly, and there will be a lot of heavy things in here, like Slash, Depression and maybe Violence. If you can't read stuff like this, then I suggest you stop reading this now.

Chapter 3: Invisible

White blurs filled my vision as I blinked. What's going on?

Noise and lights flashed in blurs, as I felt myself being moved.

I mumbled something, incoherently, as I felt my skin burning.

I tried to scream to the blurs, but the noise wouldn't come out.

Then my skin felt like an ice cold bucket of water had been chucked on it - just like this morning.

Don't ask. Just don't.

I felt a pressure on my stomach, as I was lurched to the side.

Then, blackness filled my world one more.

So? What do you think? I updated earlier than I predicted, as I wrote this really quickly. Review!