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Clare's POV: My heat was stolen by the once mysterious Eli Goldsworthy. But now he wasn't mysterious at all. I felt

like I knew him my whole life. I stared at him in fascination still shocked and happy with our seven

second kiss. Yes, I counted the seconds, sue me. "Do want to continue walking," Eli asked breaking the

silence. I nodded and smiled like an idiot and he guided deeper into the woods. It was still raining but it

wasn't coming down as hard considering big vines were covering the sky. I could start to love rainy days.

Wait a moment, rain ruins my hair. Oh no, I probably look like crap and I'm right in front of Eli. I

suddenly became very self conscience. I let go of Eli's hand stopped walking. I ran my fingers threw my

hair, getting some knots out and fluffing my hair up more. Eli seemed to notice I was trying to fix myself

up, and I blushed slightly. He rolled his eyes and came up to me. He grabbed my hands and put them at

my sides. Then, he knotted up more hair again, making my hair all nasty. I looked at him questionably.

"Why'd you do that," I asked. He leaned his face into mine, thinking he was going to kiss me. But no, he

moved his face to my ear. "You look beautiful Clare. Knotted hair, straightened hair, or curly hair. You're

perfect," he whispered softly. I blushed a deep, scarlet red. That definitely deserved a kiss. I leaned in

slowly and closed my eyes savoring the moment. We made out for about two minutes when my phone

vibrated in my pocket.

1 new text message From: DAD CLARE DIANE EDWARDS! GET HOME THIS INSTANCE YOUNG LADY IT IS WAY TO LATE! YOU ARE IN TROUBLE!

I suddenly started panicking and Eli must have noticed because then he said "Don't worry Clare, tell him

you're on your way now. I nodded and quickly responded. Me and Eli retraced our steps threw the

beautiful forest and back inside Morty. Eli started driving in the diection of my house and I suddenly

became scarred. Because I remember what happened last time I was in trouble, remembering the

purple bruise on my right cheek. Ever since mom left us both two weeks ago, my dad has been

constantly drunk and abusive. And right now I would be in even more trouble. My clothes were wet and

hopefully he wouldn't find about why I was late which was because of Eli. My boyfriend. If dad found out about that, a lot of bad things could happen. I may have looked okay to Eli, but inside I was screaming.