Ratstorm growled. Hid head held high as he spotted Brackenpaw, the pale gray tom carryed a mouse and two voles. Low food! What he eat them all?

"Brackenpaw!" He spat. "Come here, now."

Sixlegs, who lead the protrol nodded to Brackenpaw. "Go, hes your mentor." She shrugged. All she really cared about was ruling.

Gets her off my back! Ratstorm glared at Brackenpaw. The young was was "his" kit. But only Ratstorm knew how he gotten Brackenpaw, not really anyone else. "You ate all that prey, didn't you?" He growled.

Brackenpaw was trimbling. His ears layed back as his eyes were closed in hope. "N-no sir! I didn't catch much, new-leaf is still just starting." Brackenpaw shivered his green eyes slitted opened, a weird mutatian that happened as a kit, that made his eyes have a extra sheild.

Ratstorm spat at Brackenpaw. "Go, get ready for dawn protrol. Then two hunting protrols to make up for your low catch."

Brackenpaw nodded stiffly. But as soon as he could, he raced away from his mentor.

Stupid apprentice! Ratstorm paddled to Sixleg. His head rised in a threating stare. "Why was he on that protrol?" He challanged. "Hes my apprenticed, you had yours long ago."

Sixleg gave him a long look. "Hes needed, when i say. Remember Ratstorm, i'm deputy not you." The six-legged she-cat shoved past Ratstorm before stopping to give Brackenpaw's ears a quick lick with a few words before going off.

What? She has a soft spot for Brackenpaw? But hes not her kit! Ratstorm glared at Sixleg, if he was deputy, she would've been dead and never cought the killer.

But if you can get ride of her..Sulkstar would have no choice! "Hmm..i need help." He would have to have suporters. Mostly he didn't trust Barkstripe, that tom had his own choicment of trying to make deputy.

But i can..have all i need with the shadows..He looked around. Red eyes shined back, shadowed cats stalked around. He smiled, he had friends that could kill Sulkstar in seconds.

"I have friends in the darkest of shadows!" Ratstorm yowled.

So...yeah, probily trying to make shorter chaps based on one or two cats then when this stroy has more ppl submit (or same ppl submit more idk), then i'll make full-on chaps!

Thanks for reading!