Hiya guys!
I just wanted to let you all know that I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story!
All constructive critism is welcome. Also, I just wanted to two of my readers who reviewed my story:
NCIStwin1
And
Agent Aleu
Just one more time to any of you who have added me as a favorite, alerted or reviewed my story!
O! And I forgot to say this the last two chapters: I DO NOT OWN NCIS! IF I DID, I WOULDN'T BE WRITING STORIES ABOUT IT.
I love you guys!
~Soccergil98
Gibbs walked onto the back porch where Tony was squatting next to the staircase.
"What ya got DiNozzo?"
"It looks like blood boss." Tony said, gesturing to tiny red splatters on the ground.
"Bag it. Bring it to Abs." Gibbs stated simply
Ziva walked into Aria's bedroom where she saw the girl staring at a photograph of a happy family. "Is that your mother Aria?"
She turned around, startled "Yes. It was taken when I was 6. The whole family went to Disney World. It was before my mom died and my dad joined the navy. Even little baby James got to go."
"You are being very brave about this Aria" Ziva stated
"Thank you. My dad always told me to make the best out of a situation. But… I don't know how long I can do that."
"I understand how you feel."
"How is that Ziva?"
"When I was young my mother died. After that my father told me emotion was bad. When my sister Tali was killed in a suicide bombing, I felt terrible, but my father told me once again that emotion was my worst enemy and punished me for showing it. But, when I moved to America, my brother was shot right in front of me. My new family, NCIS, taught me to express my feelings. They are more of a family to me than my father ever was. I think, hiding your feelings makes you feel even worse. It all gets bottled up inside you and one day, you have to let it all out. I think today is that day Aria."
Aria looked up at Ziva and she realized she was right. Tears started streaming out of her eyes as Ziva pulled her to her chest until she calmed down. She whispered comforting things like 'shhh, its all right' and 'it will be okay'.
Ten minutes later Aria pulled away and looked at Ziva, I mean really looked at her. There she realized they were not all that different. "Ziva?" Aria asked "Where are we going to stay?"
"You will come to NCIS during the day and spend the night at my apartment. I only have one bedroom, but I will sleep on the couch and you and James on my bed. I will start to look for a three bedroom apartment."
"Oh. Thank you for taking us. I will start packing my stuff. And I'll tell James to get his stuff."
"Ok Aria. I will go and continue the investigation."
Ziva walked downstairs and into the kitchen where the body was. The body was gone so she guessed Ducky had already gone back to NCIS. She walked outside in the front yard to try to find Gibbs when she noted that Ducky's truck was still outside. She immediately sensed something was wrong. She drew her gun and walked around the side of the car. Nothing. She turned around, but before she could register what was happening the gun was kicked out of her hand. She fought back but he sensed her attacks. Forty-five seconds later she was lying face down on the ground with her hands being tied behind her. She figured it was not a good idea to fight back. After all, they were still at the crime scene and someone would notice she was gone eventually right?
Ok so, I know this is not a really good place to stop but… I'm trying to keep my chapters as short as I can.
So… review if you like it.
Love,
Soccergil98
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