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chapter 3: a hot dayinparadise

maltein was cornered by a strange man (Who was jergvais) and drank his blood. then in a nother place (the sudes factory) there was a nother couple. it was two vampires named wintson and mary. "you are a vamprie!?" asked mary inquisitively. "yes. ia m," stated wintson. it was then that the two vampires heard te h screams of maltein.

THEY RAN to malteins house. "Don't! STOP!" yelled both of the vampries!!

"WhAAAAAAT!!!!!!" whispered maltein, inquisitively, "WHO ARE YOU!?"

"We are your guardans. we wer sent here to prtect you fomr danger!" Screamed the two vampries. "GOOO VAPOREON!" screamed maltein as she threw a pokeball.

Vaporeon jumped out of the pokeball and began to cast water beam AT FULL BLAST!

Jergvais was killed and melted into a steamy mush. "I have a feeling HE won't be coming back," giggled maltein. "we are glad to see you are safe, your garudans will all ways be here" said the two vampires.

TO BE CONTINUED.