Hello Toms and She-Cats i am ZnK not Erin Hunter...so i don't own warriors,but im am writing this fanfiction

Chapter 2

The Cat padded along with FireStar while he explained the way the Clans worked,and with every word The Cat was anxious to join ThunderClan,but he still needed to get his brother to the medicine cat FireStar spoke of,then he asked "Whats your name kit?".

That was a question that the Cat didn't know the answer himself,since he always live with his brother,he had grown accustomed to only being called brother.

The Cat spoke to FireStar "I don't have one FireStar"with a pang of sadness in his voice

Then FireStar looked towards BramblePaw and said "Go hunt for the elders BramblePaw,i will see you at camp"BramblePaw nodded as FireStar spoke,And then he dashed off towards the forest that were parts of ThunderClan terriotory.

Then FireStar asked gently "can you unsheathe your claws kit?"with a serious demeanor to his face

The Cat looked at FireStar and took a second to acknowledge the command from who he hoped would be his Clan Leader

As his Claws escaped from his paws,FireStar stared at The Cat and then he spoke with a glad tone in his voice "you kit,shall be named GoldenPaw until you become a warrior,but tell this to no one until you do become an apprentice,if you do"GoldenPaw felt worried for a second but then he noticed that FireStar's tone was pragmatic,but it did hold certainty to it.

GoldenPaw then spoke as he jumped onto a broken tree trunk "Brother...wake up...I found help from some cats,they might let them"

GoldenPaw's brother then asked with the usual weak voice he had for a whole moon now "Who?"then GoldenPaw remembered that his brother didn't receive the explanation of Clans together with him.

GoldenPaw asked to FireStar looking down from the tree "FireStar,can you explain it to him as well?"FireStar nodded towards GoldenPaw and jumped to the tree.

After the explanation,his Brother was well awake,though weak,his brother could walk the distance to the ThunderClan Camp near the Great Sycamore,
His Brother was named ScarPaw due to the scar on his chest.

FireStar then spoke "we need to get ScarPaw to CinderPelt,our medicine cat"as he got closer to ScarPaw.

FireStar told ScarPaw "Relax kit"as he bit ScarPaw scruff,and carried him off the tree and started to walk,GoldenPaw saw ScarPaw sleeping while in FireStar's grasp,GoldenPaw the walked towards FireStar and kept following him,as he reveled in the beauty of seeing the forest in new eyes,looking at territory that FireStar had explained to him earlier,as he saw a rabbit,he dropped to a hunting crouch and slowly dragging his body on the ground towards his target,then,he dashed at the rabbit.

FireStar said through ScarPaw's fur "No,That's not how you hunt a rabbit" but before he finished GoldenPaw had already killed the rabbit,FireStar looked puzzled with the blur of speed that GoldenPaw had moved to kill.

GoldenPaw tempted to bite into the rabbit,but instead he remembered the part of the warrior code that ruled that apprentices and warriors must feed the clan first.

When GoldenPaw saw a tunnel made of gorse FireStar told him "This is the entrance to camp,are you sure you want this life?" GoldenPaw nodded,knowing that this would be the life for him,and then he spoke "Yes,FireStar,i'm tired of living alone."Scarpaw also nodded.

FireStar nodded with approval and then he told GoldenPaw "GoldenPaw,you are spirited i will tell you that,you will prove your loyalty to me if you get to stay in the Clan"GoldenPaw was amazed at how much FireStar believed in him.

When he crossed the gorse tunnel he could smell dozens of cats,he recognized BramblePaw near a den on the other side of the clearing where the camp was set,GoldenPaw assumed that it was the elders den since there was an old cat talking to BramblePaw from within it.

All cats looked towards him,FireStar and ScarPaw with quizzical expressions,some looked at him with threatening eyes,but GoldenPaw wasn't intimidated,he fought a fox once,and he made it run,he wasn't scared,only worried that he wouldn't be accepted by the Clan.

After crossing the clearing,he entered a enclosed clearing,a small one,with a cat inside it,a she-cat with a dark gray colored pelt,Then FireStar spoke "CinderPelt,this cat is wounded,i found his brother in the forest,his brother led me to him,and i intend on making both of them apprentices"CinderPelt had a sweet voice,soothing,relaxing,GoldenPaw guessed it must be something for all medicine cats "FireStar,are you sure the Clan will accept them?"
FireStar then spoke "They said the same about me,i was a kittypet"

GoldenPaw was surprised but not shocked he respected FireStar even though he barely knew him well,FireStar being a kittypet before coming to the Clan only solidified that respected and allowed him to understand FireStar's reasons for helping him,and he wouldn't disappoint took ScarPaw as they spoke then she said "he is really feverish,also,they are great cats,one of them took BramblePaw,an apprentice with three moons of training,these two have been hunting since they were two moons old" FireStar gasped for air then he looked at GoldenPaw and said "Come on,lets make you an apprentice"

As they were leaving a long-haired gray tom with amber eyes and broad great shoulders as he spoke,most cats would probably be hostile towards him but the tom simply asked "who is this FireStar?"FireStar looked at the cat with a warm friendly look,obviously they were best friends,then he spoke "he is a cat who i found in the woods when training with BramblePaw,he has been hunting to live with his brother since he was 2 moons old" GrayStripe looked at me his eyes wide with disbelief then he spoke to GoldenPaw this time "kit,are you okay,i've been in this clan for many,many moons,i've never seen a cat so two-faced that he would abandon a kit,didn't any cat ever help you?"

GoldenPaw remembered the ShadowClan patrol that drove him off when he was a kit "No GrayStripe,once i met a ShadowClan patrol a moon or so ago,they simply drove me and my ill brother" GrayStripe looked at him his eyes filled with concern but then GoldenPaw finished "but we are okay now,and i hope we get to stay,I want to fight for more than my own life,and i want to talk with other cats,not live alone.".Then FireStar told them both "well,lets make you a ThunderClan apprentice" Then GrayStripe asked FireStar with an eager tone "Who would mentor him FireStar?"

FireStar spoke with tired tone in his voice "well,no cat in the Clan would accept him as their apprentice,none of them has shown even a bit of acceptance towards him,Only you,so i suppose you should be his mentor"GoldenPaw was thrilled being mentored by GrayStripe one of the only cats who showed him any had BramblePaw so he couldn't become his apprentice.

They were at Highrock,the great rock that FireStar used to adress the Clan,FireStar then called "Let all those cats old enough to cat their own prey gather here beneath the Highrock!"as the other Clan cats came beneath the great hill that was Highrock,GoldenPaw felt himself cooler than he expected,he guessed he wasn't as worried as before,he was confident he could convince the Clan he would be a great addition to it.

When all cats gathered beneath Highrock,GoldenPaw felt all their gazes in between him and FireStar then FireStar began to speak "This Cat,has been within our forest for four moons,him and his brother have been hunting since they were kits,abandoned by their mother and father,they have never known family or a friendly face until today,i invite this cat to this Clan"GoldenPaw braced himself for the shouts of protest,then he heard nothing,until a dark brown tabby tom yowled "FireStar,do you really want a loner to join our Clan?He isn't Clanborn" FireStar stared at the tabby and spoke back with narrowed eyes,FireStar spoke "Dustpelt,have you forgotten a Clanborn Warrior caused the biggest terror in the forest,and a kittypet stopped him"at first i thought FireStar was about to start a riot then he continued stopping any damage from being made "A cat isn't made by birth but by what do in life" Dustpelt continued after FireStar was done "FireStar,how are we supposed to trust a loner?"GoldenPaw's head got hot,not with fever but with anger,was this tabby really question his loyalty without even seeing him,GoldenPaw was trying to calm himself,but before he could do anything to stop he was already leaping off the Highrock and hurtling towards the dark brown warrior who was questioning his loyalty to those who saved him and his brother.

Just then noticing his mistake.

Well Toms and She-cats This Chapter took me 2 hours to make,I had thought this out before,but i did have to change it up a little bit,i might make a chapter tomorrow not making any promises