Chapter 3-A Night to Remember
The hotel looked a little outdated. The wallpaper was decorated in flowery 1970's style. The carpet was green, and the furniture was yellow. Eleven looked around the hotel frowning. She didn't like the looks of it, she hoped their room looked much better than the lobby. Mike could tell it upset her. They had to been together for so long, he knew what she was thinking sometimes. He could always tell by her facial expression, if something was wrong with her. "I know El, I don't like the looks either, let's hope the room looks better than this. Mike said putting in arm around her. Eleven gave him a smile.
They have walked up to front desk of the hotel. Mike nervously rang the bell that was sitting on the desk. The person didn't turn around. Mike sighed and rang it again, still no response. Mike cleared his throat. "Excuse me, I'd like a room please." Mike said in an annoyed tone. Eleven turns the chair around with her mind. The middle-aged man sitting in the chair was fast asleep. "You got to be kidding me, the bastard is asleep." Mike said. Eleven lifted the bell off the desk, and it hit the old man's glasses. Mike looked over giving her a disapproving look, but all she could do was snicker. The man was startled, and looked at them in horror. Eleven looked at him with an angry face.
"Room now!" Eleven said in a harsh tone.
Yes, of course." The main replied. "How many of you kids are coming from that damn prom.
Mike and Eleven didn't respond. Mike paid for the room, and he handed him the room key.
"Ok room number is 11." They both looked at each and laughed at the number of the room.
Their hotel room was on the first floor. They walked down the hallway to their room. Mike stood at the door a few seconds before he unlocked it. He looked at Eleven. "This is really it El, once we walk into that room, everything will change." Mike explained to her. Eleven smiled at him and took his hands in hers.
"I'm ready for this change, Mike." Eleven assured him.
He smiled and rested his forehead on hers. He looked into her doe eyes. He gently kissed her on the forehead. He lifted her hand to his lips and kissed it. He unlocked their room.
They walked into the hotel room hand in hand. The room was decorated better than the lobby. The two walls in the room were painted white, and the wall behind the bed was painted like a brick wall. The cover on the bed was red, the sheets, and the pillows were white. The carpet was brown. The room had a small table beside with a phone, and an alarm clock. There was a bathroom, a small couch, and a tv on a little stand. The curtains were yellow. Eleven walked over to the window, she moved the curtains over, and look out the window. Mike walked up behind her and put his arms around her waist. She smiled. He kissed her on the check and moved her bouncy curls out of the way so he could kiss her on the neck. Eleven leaned her head over to the side, so he could have more access to her neck. Mike starting nibbling, and lightly breathing on her neck sending child down her spine. She lightly closed her eyes. Eleven walked to the edge of the bed and sat down. Worried, he did something wrong, he followed behind her. Mike sat down close to her and held on to her hand.
"El, did I do something wrong?" Mike asked. Eleven shook her head no, and gave him a reassuring smile. "Then what is it?" He asked putting his hand on her check.
"I'm worried, Mike." Eleven told him.
"What are you worried about?" He asked her as played with her bouncy curls.
"I'm worried I won't be good at it." She said looking down.
"El, I've never done it before either, I'll probably be lousy at it, all I know is stuff I learned at school, movies, and books." Mike said trying to reassure her. "You are perfect at everything El, I don't think this will be any different." Eleven smiled. Her smile was contagious, he could look at her beautiful smile until the world ended. "You won't be lousy, nothing about you is lousy. Mike laughed. "You are so damn cute." Eleven blushed.
Mike leaned in and started to gently kiss her. She kissed him back. The kiss started to get more passionate, he bit her bottom lip. He opened his mouth more and touched his tongue with hers. They both lock lips, and her bottom lip is between his lips, then he sweeps the tip of his tongue over her lower lip. He leans her back on the bed, and gets on top of her. He goes back to kissing her. She smiles into the kiss. He moved down to her neck planting kisses and sucking on the skin. Eleven loved this new feeling. Mike was driving her crazy. He moved down and kissed her collarbone. He looked up at her and smiled. He played with her curls. Eleven tugged at the top of tuxedo.
"Mike, let's get naked." Eleven said, not realizing how blunt she sounded. Mike turned red. He was shocked that she was being so forward. He didn't say anything. "Mike" she wined.
"You are very eager, aren't you?" He asked her getting turned on more and more. Eleven blushed and nodded her head. He hoisted himself off her, and stood in front of the bed. Eleven got off the bed and stood in front of him, he moved close to her, and whispered in her ear. "Turn around, so I can unzip your dress." Eleven nodded and turn around, so her back was facing him. He unzipped her dress, and the dress fell to the floor. She stepped outside of the dress, and turned around to face him. Eleven looked at him blushing. He looked into her eyes for a moment, his eyes started to travel down her flat stomach, to her legs. She was almost bare to him. She moved closer and took his tuxedo jacket off, she unbuttoned the shirt underneath it. She throw the shirt to the floor. She ran her hands slowly up and down his chest. She loved how his bare chest felt on her hands. She moved her hands to his pants and tried to unzip it, but she was having trouble. She mumbled something under her breath. She unzipped his pants with her mind. "El, don't use your powers for a task that simple." He laughed. She playfully stuck her tongue out at him. His pants fell to the floor, and he stepped outside of it. Now they were both standing there in nothing but their underwear. She nervously looked up at him. He walked towards her and held both of her hands. "El, are you sure about this, once I take this from you, you can't get it back." Mike said.
"I don't want it back, I want you to have it Mike. I want you to have all of me, and I want to have all of you." Eleven replied. He had never seen her so determined. She had love and lust in her eyes. Mike began to have doubts again.
"You know it's going to hurt you right?" Mike questioned her.
"I don't care if it hurts, I want to do this with you, I'm sure of it, I promise. She assured him.
"I'm sorry, I just love you so much, I just want to make sure you are completely ready. I don't mean to make such a fuss over you." He sighed. Eleven smiled at him.
"It's ok Mike, I love you too, and I'd rather you worry about me then not care at all. He kissed her hand. "I am ready now, Mike." Eleven said. Mike now had her assurance and leaned into kiss her. The kiss was passionate. He puts his arms around her waist, he moved his hands up to the back of her bra unhooked not breaking away from the kiss. He steps away and the strapless bra falls to the floor. She pants heavily and look at him. His eyes begin to wonder down her body. He admires her perfectly round breasts. She lays back on the bed and he gets on top of her. He kisses her forehead, check, neck, and collarbone. He moved his lips to her breast. He lightly kisses it, and starts to lightly lick her nipple. Eleven inhaled sharply at this new sensation. "Mike" She panted. Her takes his thumb and flicks it over her other nipple. She bites her bottom lip. He starts to kiss all the way down her body. He kissed, and sucked on her inner thighs, he desperately wanted to move his lips and fingers to her warm center, but he decided that was for another time. Eleven ran her fingers through his hair. She felt herself getting wet. Mike looked up at her, as he pulled the hem of her panties. "Take them off Mike" she demanded. Mike did as he was told. Now Eleven as completely bare to him.
"God El, you are so beautiful, so perfect." He softly kissed her lips. He broke away from the kiss.
"Mike, don't stop" She pleaded bringing him closer, wrapping her arms around his neck.
"Well, El I gotta get the condom." He laughed. Eleven laughed as well. He got out of the bed, and picked up his pants, and looked through the pockets and took the condom out. He laid the condom down on the bed, and took his underwear. Eleven eyes wondered down his whole body. She stared at his already hard member. Mike immediately blushed. Mike looked at her, and could see the hunger in her eyes.
Eleven continued to hungrily watch as he put the condom on, he got back in the bed with her. He caressed her, moving his hands gently over her face in a loving way. "I love you so much." Mike beamed as he looked into her eyes.
"I love you too, Mike. She gushed.
"Now El, you must promise me that you will let me know if it hurts, or if you need me to stop." Mike said in a serious tone.
"Promise." Eleven nodded. Eleven wasn't concerned about the pain she just needed him to fulfill her needs. Mike smiled and realized that she was ready. He knew it was now time, and he couldn't be more nervous about it. Mike slowly tried to slide inside her. It was difficult at first, because she was resisting. Her body was fighting him off. He tried to push in, and tears started to fall down her face. Mike felt bad.
"El, you're crying, we have to stop, I can't do this to you." Mike declared.
"No, Mike I don't want to stop, please continue. I'll be ok." She protested. Mike wanted desperately to make the pain go away, but he knew that Eleven would just have to get through the pain, that was a part of it.
"Ok. I'll continue." He said. He pushed into her more.
"Ow God, Mike it hurts." She cried.
"Please El, let me stop. This is killing me to see you in so much pain." Mike said in a concerned voice.
"I have to get through this, we can't stop. Eleven replied. He pushed into her more until he was all the way inside her. He stood still for a moment, so her body could get used to him. Mike slowly started to move his hips. Her body started to stretch and get used to him being inside her. He continued to move at a slow pace. The pain started to turn to pleasure and El let out a small moan.
"Is it starting to feel good now El?" He asked.
"Yes." She replied panting.
"Good" he said as he continued to slowly move inside her, even though he desperately wanted to go faster. He wanted to make sure she was ok. Eleven's pants started to get heavier. She let out another moan. Mike couldn't get over how good it felt to be inside her. Eleven ran her fingers down his back.
"oh Mike!" "She cried his name out. "I feel like I'm going to cum."
"Me too El." Mike said still panting. She moaned again. Her back arched upwards, and she started to tighten around his body. This caused him to moan loudly. "Oh El!"
"Mike, you feel so good inside me." She moaned. Mike was brought to his limits and collapsed on top of her. They both panted heavily. He laid on top of her a few more minutes, and he pulled out of her, he got off the bed and threw the condom in the trash.
He got back in the bed and laid next to her. She snuggled up close to him laying her head on his chest. Mike wrapped his arms around her.
"El, that was incredible, I never dreamed it would be like that." Mike beamed. Eleven nodded in agreement.
"The pain didn't last the whole time, like I thought it would. Despite the pain in the beginning, I really enjoyed it Mike." She gushed.
"I did too." Mike smiled.
"I can't wait until we do it again" Eleven said. Mike laughed. He wrapped the cover over both off them. They both laid there continued to talk and love on each other before they both drifted off to sleep.
I fixed all the errors, and paragraphs in this chapter, now I need to fix the errors and paragraphs in chapter 4.