This is ONLY for Senshinchan 14- Since you are the one that reviewed
most for Jim is Gone, and the first two for Faith, Jim's sister(with
positive comments) and you are going to be sort of...honored. It depends on
your definition of 'honored'. Anyway, since I like you, you receive...
YOU GET TO BE IN MY STORY!!! I don't know if you'll like it but if you like it, sure. Put this in your review-
Age: You can be any age you want to be.
Name: Whatever you want to use. Just don't use your real last name. BIG NO NO!
The position you want to be in: Jim's friend, girlfriend (- Me not like preppies) or anything else you want. Demon is okay too. ^^ or you could be a Catrl Catrl! ^ ^ Kitty*pets Senshinchan 14*Good kitty! Anyway, yeah. Put this stuff and miscellaneous stuff in your review(like super powers you want..stuff like that).
I hope you like this gift. If you don't...*sob, sob, cry, cry* YOU HURT MY FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just kidding. Oh, and you can email that to me if you want at Shadowbabygirl55555@yahoo.com Have a nice day! ^^
*THIS DOES NOT GO FOR ANYONE ELSE BUT
SENSHINCHAN 14*
Enjoy. Review plz.
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(*(*(*SENSHINCHAN 14, IF YOU DID NOT READ THE TOP READ IT NOW. IT'S IMPORTANT*)*)*)
When Jim heard what happened, he totally freaked out. A casino?! What the hell was Gene thinking?! Casino was just a place for dumb(sorry people who go to the casino) people go there to waste money away for no reason! And Gene was just one of those people just dumb enough to do something like that.
He hugged his sobbing sister tight. For a kid her age her it must have been so scary. Faith went with Aisha and Melfina into her room to tuck her into bed. Rina had already went to bed. Jim took Gene outside to have a little discussion.....but it would turn out to be a little more than that...............
"What in hell were you thinking?!" Jim yelled. "I can't believe that you took MY sister, your god daughter, to a frickin' casino!"
"I didn't think that something like this would ever happen! I really am sorry!" Gene tried to protect himself. He knew that it wouldn't have happened if he never went there, but he wasn't deliberately doing it, nor did he predict it would happen. "It's not like I have ESP! I can't predict for things to happen! I'm sorry!"
"Sorry can't cut it Gene," Jim said coldly. He was PISSED to the max. "It's really hard for a brother to raise a sister. I don't even know if I'm doing good at it.(A/N- DON'T PUT YOURSELF DOWN LIKE THAT JIM!!!) But when I saw her little sobbing face looking up at me....I couldn't take it! I don't want Faith to live what I did with Ray! It's not right! You just can't say your sorry and it'll never happen! FAITH IS SCARRED FOR LIFE GENE!!"
"I didn't want it to happen! Your acting like I wanted it too! I DIDN'T, OKAY?!?!" Gene yelled back. He was really feeling the guilt now. "So shut the fuck up about it!"
There was a long silence. Gene didn't know how Jim was feeling at all. He didn't understand how he felt. Not at all. He looked up at his aniki. Jim tried to hold back tears; this was so upsetting. He thought that every older brother would feel this way if his little brother or sister were almost kidnapped. Anybody would.
All Jim wanted for his sister was for happiness. But he WOULD have to tell her about her father some day. And about what happened, Yumi, how she died.... He was trying his best. The best he could. Was it not enough?! There was only going to be one way for Gene to understand how he was feeling right now. And that was if he was put in the same situation. Then Gene would understand. But Jim didn't even want to bring that topic up but it seemed it would be the only way he would understand. Fortunately, Jim was cooling down a little bit.
"I won't! What would you do if Rina got practically kidnapped!?" Jim asked with some tears going down his face. "Well?"
There wasn't really a response to that. Of course he would be scared, angry, and feel very protective to her more than ever out in public. That's what Jim was feeling like. He wasn't trying to lay a guilt trip on him at all. It was just those three things that drove him mad in anger. Gene put a hand on his shoulder. Now that he put it that way.....
Gene smirked. "Jim, I promise that it won't ever happen again. I understand how you feel. I wouldn't want that to happen to either of the girls."
Jim smiled. "You understand. Sorry to put it in such words. So? How about we just try and calm down Faith and-"
"Stop right there!" yelled a voice. Out in the darkness, was a form. It was Dave, with a gun! But this time he had a cut up face. Not deep but deep enough to draw blood. "Give the damn girl over now or I'll shoot everyone in the house! And I take it that you do have a daughter, Gene Starwind. Rina Starwind. Is it not? Shame if she had to die!"
Gene couldn't believe he just threatened his daughter! He would pay for that!
"Bastard!" shouted Gene. "You ain't laying a hand on anybody!" he was about to draw his gun but he shot by his hand, scraping the skin. Blood seeped out of the small cut. (Me- Great....another scar. Just what Gene needs...- -''')
"As you can see, I am a VERY good shot. I could have shot you both by now with three bullets in each and you wouldn't even have time to react!" Dave shouted. "Now hand her over!"
"This is the guy that tried to take her before," Gene warned Jim.
Jim nodded. "And he won't get her ever again! Hear that! You ain't getting her!"
"I take it that your Jim. Her elder brother. Her only brother. Such a shame that I'll have to tell her that her only brother died," he said with a smirk, pointing the gun at him. "So? You want to die or do you want to hand her over like a good little boy?"
"Jim! Gene!" they all heard a scream from three people. Faith, Melfina, and Aisha were running to them.
"Go back! Go back NOW!!!!!" yelled the two guys. "NOW!!!"
"Melfina! Get Rina and Faith as far away from here as you possibly can! You help her Jim!" yelled Gene. Jim and Melfina nodded. He looked at Aisha. "Your going to help beat his A$$. Right?"
"Hell yah'," Aisha said, snapping her knuckles. She looked up, no full moon. Damn..looked like she'd have to do this with just her usual strength. Which was enough to beat a hundred scrawny asses at once! "Lets get a movin' here Gene!"
He nodded. Dave started to panic.
He yelled "Just had the damn girl over!" Dave pointed the gun at Aisha who was ready to charge. "I won't shoot anybody, just hand Faith over, and this will be all okay once again."
"Why do you want Faith?!" asked Aisha as she growled under her breath. "And who in the heck are ya' anyway?"
Faith held onto Melfina's dress and hid behind her. That was the man that tried to kidnap her. She was so scared..she didn't want to be hit again. Faith looked up at Melfina.
Please don't let it happen again...
"Don't worry Faith. I'll get you away from here," Melfina said with a fake smile. "Come on Jim. I'll go get Rina while you start running. K?"
He nodded in agreement. "Come on Faith. We are out of here."
While they slipped away, Dave saw it. Darn it! If they got away Ira would do more than just cutting up his face. So he did what he didn't want to do in the first place. Dave shot. Everyone gasped as Rina, who had just ran into the backyard to find Gene, fell down with a gunshot in her hip. Gene ran to his daughter and was also shot. But he didn't mind the pain that started to build up in his shoulder from the bullet. Melfina and Aisha ran to them as he held her in his arms.
There was no doubt that she needed to get to the hospital now. So did Gene. When he looked back, pointing his gun straight at where he was to shoot him right in the heart, Dave was already gone somewhere. Was he after Jim and Faith who got away?! Gene handed his crying daughter to Aisha; then jumped up. He had to go find them.
"Gene! You can't get up and find that man now! And what about Rina, Gene?!" asked Melfina with tears strolling down her pretty face. "She needs you now!"
"Take her to the hospital. And hurry. I have to go find Faith and Jim because Dave might be after THEM. And I can't let them down by not helping them," replied Gene. "Hurry. Rina needs your guy's help so get to the damn hospital now!"
"Your ar-" she began to say but he put a finger over her lips.
Gene smiled. "Don't worry about me Melfina. Everything will be FINE."
"You be careful. And rip that guy to shreds for me, k?" Aisha asked with soft eyes. "Find Jim and Faith in one piece. Okay? Because I...just want to tell Jim.."
"I know. Just wait and I'll be back!" Gene shouted as he ran off to fine them.
His arm burned excruciatingly but he had to go on. He had to find Jim and Faith. He had to survive this. Gene wouldn't let his daughter grow up without her godfather and father. There was no way! His little aniki wasn't going to be hurt. And Faith wasn't going to be kidnapped.
Gene would make sure of that.
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Hope you liked it a lot! It took me three days to write this! *swipes sweat off of forehead* Phew.
*(*(* SENSHINCHAN 14, IF YOU DID NOT READ THE TOP, READ IT. NO, YOU ARE NOT IN TROUBLE. I WON'T BE ABLE TO PUT YOU IN IT UNLESS YOU COMPLY IN ONE WEEK FROM TODAY(10-22-2003) SO DO IT NOWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*)*)*)
YOU GET TO BE IN MY STORY!!! I don't know if you'll like it but if you like it, sure. Put this in your review-
Age: You can be any age you want to be.
Name: Whatever you want to use. Just don't use your real last name. BIG NO NO!
The position you want to be in: Jim's friend, girlfriend (- Me not like preppies) or anything else you want. Demon is okay too. ^^ or you could be a Catrl Catrl! ^ ^ Kitty*pets Senshinchan 14*Good kitty! Anyway, yeah. Put this stuff and miscellaneous stuff in your review(like super powers you want..stuff like that).
I hope you like this gift. If you don't...*sob, sob, cry, cry* YOU HURT MY FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just kidding. Oh, and you can email that to me if you want at Shadowbabygirl55555@yahoo.com Have a nice day! ^^
*THIS DOES NOT GO FOR ANYONE ELSE BUT
SENSHINCHAN 14*
Enjoy. Review plz.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(*(*(*SENSHINCHAN 14, IF YOU DID NOT READ THE TOP READ IT NOW. IT'S IMPORTANT*)*)*)
When Jim heard what happened, he totally freaked out. A casino?! What the hell was Gene thinking?! Casino was just a place for dumb(sorry people who go to the casino) people go there to waste money away for no reason! And Gene was just one of those people just dumb enough to do something like that.
He hugged his sobbing sister tight. For a kid her age her it must have been so scary. Faith went with Aisha and Melfina into her room to tuck her into bed. Rina had already went to bed. Jim took Gene outside to have a little discussion.....but it would turn out to be a little more than that...............
"What in hell were you thinking?!" Jim yelled. "I can't believe that you took MY sister, your god daughter, to a frickin' casino!"
"I didn't think that something like this would ever happen! I really am sorry!" Gene tried to protect himself. He knew that it wouldn't have happened if he never went there, but he wasn't deliberately doing it, nor did he predict it would happen. "It's not like I have ESP! I can't predict for things to happen! I'm sorry!"
"Sorry can't cut it Gene," Jim said coldly. He was PISSED to the max. "It's really hard for a brother to raise a sister. I don't even know if I'm doing good at it.(A/N- DON'T PUT YOURSELF DOWN LIKE THAT JIM!!!) But when I saw her little sobbing face looking up at me....I couldn't take it! I don't want Faith to live what I did with Ray! It's not right! You just can't say your sorry and it'll never happen! FAITH IS SCARRED FOR LIFE GENE!!"
"I didn't want it to happen! Your acting like I wanted it too! I DIDN'T, OKAY?!?!" Gene yelled back. He was really feeling the guilt now. "So shut the fuck up about it!"
There was a long silence. Gene didn't know how Jim was feeling at all. He didn't understand how he felt. Not at all. He looked up at his aniki. Jim tried to hold back tears; this was so upsetting. He thought that every older brother would feel this way if his little brother or sister were almost kidnapped. Anybody would.
All Jim wanted for his sister was for happiness. But he WOULD have to tell her about her father some day. And about what happened, Yumi, how she died.... He was trying his best. The best he could. Was it not enough?! There was only going to be one way for Gene to understand how he was feeling right now. And that was if he was put in the same situation. Then Gene would understand. But Jim didn't even want to bring that topic up but it seemed it would be the only way he would understand. Fortunately, Jim was cooling down a little bit.
"I won't! What would you do if Rina got practically kidnapped!?" Jim asked with some tears going down his face. "Well?"
There wasn't really a response to that. Of course he would be scared, angry, and feel very protective to her more than ever out in public. That's what Jim was feeling like. He wasn't trying to lay a guilt trip on him at all. It was just those three things that drove him mad in anger. Gene put a hand on his shoulder. Now that he put it that way.....
Gene smirked. "Jim, I promise that it won't ever happen again. I understand how you feel. I wouldn't want that to happen to either of the girls."
Jim smiled. "You understand. Sorry to put it in such words. So? How about we just try and calm down Faith and-"
"Stop right there!" yelled a voice. Out in the darkness, was a form. It was Dave, with a gun! But this time he had a cut up face. Not deep but deep enough to draw blood. "Give the damn girl over now or I'll shoot everyone in the house! And I take it that you do have a daughter, Gene Starwind. Rina Starwind. Is it not? Shame if she had to die!"
Gene couldn't believe he just threatened his daughter! He would pay for that!
"Bastard!" shouted Gene. "You ain't laying a hand on anybody!" he was about to draw his gun but he shot by his hand, scraping the skin. Blood seeped out of the small cut. (Me- Great....another scar. Just what Gene needs...- -''')
"As you can see, I am a VERY good shot. I could have shot you both by now with three bullets in each and you wouldn't even have time to react!" Dave shouted. "Now hand her over!"
"This is the guy that tried to take her before," Gene warned Jim.
Jim nodded. "And he won't get her ever again! Hear that! You ain't getting her!"
"I take it that your Jim. Her elder brother. Her only brother. Such a shame that I'll have to tell her that her only brother died," he said with a smirk, pointing the gun at him. "So? You want to die or do you want to hand her over like a good little boy?"
"Jim! Gene!" they all heard a scream from three people. Faith, Melfina, and Aisha were running to them.
"Go back! Go back NOW!!!!!" yelled the two guys. "NOW!!!"
"Melfina! Get Rina and Faith as far away from here as you possibly can! You help her Jim!" yelled Gene. Jim and Melfina nodded. He looked at Aisha. "Your going to help beat his A$$. Right?"
"Hell yah'," Aisha said, snapping her knuckles. She looked up, no full moon. Damn..looked like she'd have to do this with just her usual strength. Which was enough to beat a hundred scrawny asses at once! "Lets get a movin' here Gene!"
He nodded. Dave started to panic.
He yelled "Just had the damn girl over!" Dave pointed the gun at Aisha who was ready to charge. "I won't shoot anybody, just hand Faith over, and this will be all okay once again."
"Why do you want Faith?!" asked Aisha as she growled under her breath. "And who in the heck are ya' anyway?"
Faith held onto Melfina's dress and hid behind her. That was the man that tried to kidnap her. She was so scared..she didn't want to be hit again. Faith looked up at Melfina.
Please don't let it happen again...
"Don't worry Faith. I'll get you away from here," Melfina said with a fake smile. "Come on Jim. I'll go get Rina while you start running. K?"
He nodded in agreement. "Come on Faith. We are out of here."
While they slipped away, Dave saw it. Darn it! If they got away Ira would do more than just cutting up his face. So he did what he didn't want to do in the first place. Dave shot. Everyone gasped as Rina, who had just ran into the backyard to find Gene, fell down with a gunshot in her hip. Gene ran to his daughter and was also shot. But he didn't mind the pain that started to build up in his shoulder from the bullet. Melfina and Aisha ran to them as he held her in his arms.
There was no doubt that she needed to get to the hospital now. So did Gene. When he looked back, pointing his gun straight at where he was to shoot him right in the heart, Dave was already gone somewhere. Was he after Jim and Faith who got away?! Gene handed his crying daughter to Aisha; then jumped up. He had to go find them.
"Gene! You can't get up and find that man now! And what about Rina, Gene?!" asked Melfina with tears strolling down her pretty face. "She needs you now!"
"Take her to the hospital. And hurry. I have to go find Faith and Jim because Dave might be after THEM. And I can't let them down by not helping them," replied Gene. "Hurry. Rina needs your guy's help so get to the damn hospital now!"
"Your ar-" she began to say but he put a finger over her lips.
Gene smiled. "Don't worry about me Melfina. Everything will be FINE."
"You be careful. And rip that guy to shreds for me, k?" Aisha asked with soft eyes. "Find Jim and Faith in one piece. Okay? Because I...just want to tell Jim.."
"I know. Just wait and I'll be back!" Gene shouted as he ran off to fine them.
His arm burned excruciatingly but he had to go on. He had to find Jim and Faith. He had to survive this. Gene wouldn't let his daughter grow up without her godfather and father. There was no way! His little aniki wasn't going to be hurt. And Faith wasn't going to be kidnapped.
Gene would make sure of that.
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Hope you liked it a lot! It took me three days to write this! *swipes sweat off of forehead* Phew.
*(*(* SENSHINCHAN 14, IF YOU DID NOT READ THE TOP, READ IT. NO, YOU ARE NOT IN TROUBLE. I WON'T BE ABLE TO PUT YOU IN IT UNLESS YOU COMPLY IN ONE WEEK FROM TODAY(10-22-2003) SO DO IT NOWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*)*)*)