Alright, I think this is against the rules but it's either do this or e-mail everyone who reviewed and I'm far to lazy for that. My family has two computers (a slow one and a fast one) and the fast one has broken down. Coincidently, the next chapter was on that computer. I have the story printed out but right now I don't feel like retyping it out when the problem could be fixed soon (I hope.) So for the time being the story is on hiatus. If my computer is down for more than say, two weeks I will retype it out and post it but for now this is all you get.
I also want to take the time to broach a question to you guys (girls, whatever). Someone has told me that my summary well, stinks. I can't think of a new one that sounds even remotely good. So I took a quote from my story (and it's from chapter 3, so it's a bit of a teaser) and I was wondering what you people think of it as a summary.
"Nora had always known that her past would catch up with her. It was never a question of if but when. When would her careful planning be not enough, when would the lies crumble like a house of cards, its foundation not strong enough to support the lives that perched upon it?
I like it, but I am open to suggestions from anyone who wants to take a stab at a summary.
I would also like to take the time to apologize to anyone who read my author's note from chapter 2. I'm sure the first thing that popped into your heads was 'Would you like some cheese with that whine?' I was trying to be sarcastic because I know that there are many people who are reading this story who aren't reviewing for whatever reason because I read lots of stories and don't review. Turns out sarcasm doesn't translate too well into writing. Next time I'll just say that I'm being sarcastic. Or just stop writing so much. Whatever. So I hope to get the next chapter up soon but while I'm waiting I'll start on chapter 4. How's that for a compromise? Thanks to anyone whose actually read this far. TTFN! Ta-Ta-For-Now!
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