Thank you to the people who pointed out the mistakes in the last two chapters. That is one of the main reasons I post on here. I want to get better, and the only way I'll get better is to know what I'm doing wrong.
On that note, I've decided not to go back and change the OOC of Renji and my faulty honorific use. When I look back at this a long time from now, I want to see how I've gotten better. However, I will be writing Renji more OC and fixing my honorifics. Actually, I've decided not to use the honorifics at all. This little story is basically just my way of testing my yaoi/lemon writing skills (or lack thereof). Once I've gotten a better handle on the smut, I will definitely start a story that has the whole package—great sex and a storyline/style that is more appropriate. I hope that you can still enjoy this; I know I'm sure as hell having a great time writing it.
Bleach and all associated characters are property of Kubo Tite. I just find them extremely sexy so I borrow them for these little sexual endeavors of mine.
All characters depicted in sexual situations are waaayy past the legal age of concent in any state or country.
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It was a gorgeous day. The sun was high in the cloudless sky and a warm breeze swept past my face. Then again, the weather was always nice in Seireitei. No, I suppose the real reason for the day being so amazing was the presence of a certaintaichou by my side. I snuck glances at him out of the corner of my eye as we made our way towards my house. Byakuya's long hair fluttered behind him and the sunlight danced across his white skin, giving it a godly glow.
I couldn't believe that this living masterpiece was actually coming home with me. Yesterday, I never would have dreamed that any of this could be possible. A subconscious part of me had loved and yearned for Byakuya even as I struggled to surpass him, but not once had I expected anything would happen. But now—now we were on our way to my place, where the sexy taichou would once again be my lover, and a damn good one, at that.
My pulse quickened as my thoughts were pulled back to our little encounter earlier that day. Byakuya's hands and mouth were wickedly talented, but it was the fact that we were getting hot and heavy in his office that really put me over the edge. If Matsumoto hadn't walked in when she did, I would have returned the favor—and then some.
I tried to slow my breathing and reminded myself that I would have all night to act out my lusty fantasies. A grin found its way to my lips as I thought about my sensual plans for the epitome of beauty walking beside me. I wanted to stretch Byakuya's elegant body out on my bed and take my time with him, slow and gentle, until he begged me to take him. My cock twitched at the thought of my sexy taichou writhing beneath me and panting my name. It was a good thing that I'd had the foresight to put clean sheets on the bed that morning. I made a mental note to buy some better ones; that perfect milky skin of his would look pretty damn fantastic against some black silk.
Byakuya was looking up at the sky, his eyes glittering brightly in the daylight. My stomach fluttered uncontrollably and my hand itched to reach out for his. I gawked at him silently and wondered briefly what he thought about holding hands in public. There was something comforting about walking next to him. Even though we weren't touching, I could acutely feel his presence at my side. I was aware of every time his white kosode fluttered in the wind to graze my leg and each little flicker of the reiatsu that he was letting seep out on purpose. Damn, just being near him was making me as giddy as a little school girl.
A small smile played at his lips when he caught me staring at him. He was breathtaking when he smiled, and I wished he would do it more.
"Is there something wrong, Renji?" he asked. My breath snagged as deep blue eyes pierced my own.
"Just admiring," I whispered. Just the sight of him was enough to take my breath away.
"Oh?" Byakuya's smile widened and I quickly lost track of everything else. He stopped abruptly, dragging me from my trance.
"What's the matter?" Fear knotted my stomach as I began to wonder if he was getting second thoughts.
"We have arrived," he said with a smirk. "This was our destination, was it not?" A pale finger pointed over my shoulder.
Shit. His gorgeous grin had distracted me so much that I hadn't even realized we were standing right outside my house. He chuckled softly and softened his gaze. "Are you going to invite me inside?"
My heart felt like it was trying to get out of my chest. Could this be real? A part of me still regarded the night before as a fluke incident, but he was really there—really standing in front of me, waiting for me to take him in. I blinked at him and tried to will my feet to move. Trying to act somewhat naturally, I made my way to the door and beckoned for him to follow. My hand shook as I unlocked the door and pushed it open. To say that I wasn't prepared for what happened next would be a huge understatement.
Before I had even taken a step inside, Byakuya grabbed me and spun me around. He crushed his lips into mine with so much force that our teeth ground together. Strong, lithe hands grasped the neck of my kimono and slammed me into the door, pushing it shut with a loud bang. My eyes widened and I tried to return the intensity of the kiss, but my head was spinning and my knees felt oddly weak. His hands let go of my clothes and grabbed my face, pulling my mouth harder into his. I parted my lips to grant his probing tongue entrance. He was ravenous, tasting and exploring every corner of my mouth that he could reach.
I lifted a hand to comb through his hair, but he caught my wrist and pinned it above my head and against the door. His other hand reached up to grab a fistful of my hair. A yelp of shock left me as he yanked my head back, exposing my throat to his rough, needy kisses. The sharp tug on my scalp paired with the pleasure of his mouth on my neck was surprisingly arousing and I tried to grind my hips into his. Pale lips smirked against my skin and perfectly white teeth nipped at the sensitive skin under my jaw. A needy moan purred somewhere in his chest, sending an uncontrollable shiver down my spine.
He released his grip on my wrist and hair and reached to untie the sash that held my clothes in place. After hastily removing the obi, Byakuya pulled my kimono down so that I was bare from the waist up. Long, white fingers splayed across my chest until they reached my nipples. He gave them a little squeeze that was far from gentle and a jolt of painful pleasure surged through my veins. Ebony hair tickled my face as his mouth trailed wet kisses from my neck down to my chest. My head thumped against the door behind me when his hot, wet tongue came into contact with the sensitive peaks. A primal groan came tumbling from my lips and I fisted my hands in his hair.
Byakuya grabbed both of my wrists and restrained them above my head. The movement made his hips press into mine and we both gasped at the sudden, intense sensation of our erections grinding together. He bent his head and bit my shoulder, his teeth clamping down hard enough to break the skin. My eyes rolled back as his tongue moved languidly over the wound, creating sensations that I'd never known were possible. His mouth moved to my ear, his hot breath tickling my sensitive skin and making me shudder.
"Do you want me, Renji?" The passion in his voice made my own desire spin wildly out of control.
"Yes," I panted.
"Do you need me, Renji?" His tongue flicked across my ear and I completely lost myself for a moment.
"Gods, yes... please..." My breathing was nothing but raspy gasps and I felt completely powerless in the hands of this gorgeous creature. He pulled away and looked at me steadily. The pure lust I saw in his eyes almost made my knees give out. I gripped desperately at the arm that was restraining my wrists, trying to find my balance and remain upright. His lips curved in a slow smirk and he ran a finger along my jaw. I pushed forward into the touch and was rewarded when he caressed my face and bent to press his lips to mine. The kiss was insistent yet controlled—so skillful and passionate that I saw stars explode behind my eyelids. His mouth was sweet and smooth and seemed to fit perfectly with mine. When he finally pulled back, I was panting and practically crazy with need.
He leaned back again and appraised me with longing eyes. I wanted to touch him—to do something that would spark the same desire in him that he had in me. My arms twitched but his grip remained secure on my wrists. Another slow smirk worked his lips as he realized I was thinking about escaping his grasp. He moved forward and crushed my body between his own and the door, forcing the breath from my lungs as I exhaled. Steely blue eyes stared into my own and I sighed at the blissful feeling of his weight against me.
"Going somewhere?" His eyes danced in amusement.
"N-no." A hand moved down to my groin.
"Do you want something?" The hand rubbed against my painfully hard erection.
"Please..." Long fingers wrapped around me through my hakama.
"Please, what?" A short stroke was followed by a gentle squeeze.
"I-I need you." Byakuya released his grip on my cock and I had to stifle the moan of protest that rose in my throat. He brought our faces together until the tips of our noses were touching. After holding my gaze for a few agonizing moments, he suddenly let go of my wrists and took a step backward.
"Take me to your bed." It was definitely a command, not a request. The urgent authority in his voice was strangely erotic and I quickly complied. I led the way to my bedroom, looking back frequently to watch him follow. Once inside the dimly lit room, I turned to face him, only to be met with a blur of pale skin and black hair as he swiftly crossed the room and pushed me back onto the bed. Strong arms held me down as he continued his hungry assault on my body.
I closed my eyes and relished the feeling of his lips, tongue, and teeth working across my chest and stomach. My hands reached for his silky hair, but once again he caught them and pinned them to my sides. I gave in to his restraints and allowed him to cover me in hungry kisses, my vision hazy with lust as I watched him.
He worked lower until his hands came to rest on the top of my hakama. His hands gripped the fabric and I heard it tear as he removed the rest of my clothing in one deft move. In a second he had also stripped and stood naked and erect above me. The impatience and intensity of his actions spurred my own need and I wanted to do anything I could to quench the fire that was slowly consuming him. He crawled back up and kissed me deeply before turning me over onto my stomach.
Fear flickered through me as I began to understand where things were headed. I had never been taken before—I had always been top. Uncertainty threatened to make me question him until I felt his breath on my ear and his voice, thick with desire, whispered in my ear. "Do you trust me, Renji?"
I sighed and let my body relax. Byakuya would never hurt me. I turned to look him in the eye and nodded, afraid that my voice would fail me. He kissed me caringly before moving to kiss and caress my back. The feeling of his mouth and hands moving across my skin drove any lingering feelings of doubt from my mind. He moved down steadily until his breath fell lightly on my tailbone. I felt long fingers spread my cheeks apart and I quivered in anticipation of his next move.
Suddenly, without warning, Byakuya's hot, wet tongue darted out against my puckered entrance. My hips jerked in response and I gasped at the extreme pleasure that coursed through my body at such a simple touch. He made a small noise of approval and continued to tease and lick my opening, drawing more guttural moans from deep within me.
Just when I thought I would die from pleasure, I felt a slick finger press against me and slip slowly into my body. The sweet smell of green tea wafted up to me and I wondered briefly when he had grabbed the bottle of oil off the nightstand. Any and all thoughts were quickly thrown aside as Byakuya pressed further into me. The feeling was odd and a little uncomfortable, but I reminded myself how good it felt to be inside him and I immediately became determined to give him the same pleasure. I tried to relax as the finger pushed all the way inside.
Byakuya came up to kiss the back of my neck and shoulders, stilling his finger inside of me to let me get used to the feeling. The magic of his kisses began to take hold and I felt my body go limp as I fell into the sensations washing over me. The finger inside me twisted, brushing against something that made me go blind—an intense flow of pleasure raging through my veins like fire. My head jerked back and he took the opportunity to bite my neck, the pain sharpening the pleasure and sending me into a whirlwind of sensation. Another finger pressed in to join the first and the initial discomfort was quickly lost in bliss as both digits pressed against my sweet spot. My lips parted in a silent scream and my body clenched around hm.
I buried my face in the bed and tried desperately to think straight. Byakuya's fingers were now scissoring inside of me, and I could feel his breath falling in heavy pants against my back. In that moment I realized that I didn't care one bit about pain or discomfort. I was completely willing to do anything to please this man. "Byakuya, please."
A forehead rested on my shoulder and I realized that he was as near to losing control as I was. Once his breathing wasn't quite as raspy, he nuzzled my neck and inhaled deeply when his nose came into contact with my hair. "Renji..."
"Please, I need you." He must have heard the desire in my voice because he removed his fingers and positioned himself between my legs. I rose to my knees to create a better angle and shuddered when I felt his arm reach around my waist. The tip of his oil-slicked arousal rested against my entrance and I let out the breath I hadn't realized I had been holding. When he felt my body relax he gently pushed forward and past my tight ring of muscles.
I bit my lip as the burning pain hit me. Byakuya stilled when I tensed and ran his hand down my back. Long, cool fingers moved down to my cock and wrapped around the sensitive flesh. A slow tremor worked through my body as the burn was overwhelmed by the sensation of his grip on my arousal. In one movement, Byakuya slid his hand down my length and pushed the rest of the way into my body. We both froze, silent but for the steady stream of hoarse gasps that was our breathing.
After a moment, Byakuya's hand began a slow rhythm on my cock. After a few pumps, the sharp sting was much more tolerable and I began to concentrate on the pleasure that his hand was wringing from me. His thumb circled my sensitive tip and smeared the clear drops of precum that had gathered there. A groan rose from my throat and his cock twitched in response. The surprisingly pleasing sensation that came from the movement elicited another low moan from me.
Taking that as a cue, Byakuya slowly withdrew his cock a few inches before gently thrusting back in. The pain was gone and even the odd discomfort was gradually giving way to a more pleasurable feeling. I felt full, almost—complete. I looked back to see Byakuya biting his lip in concentration, his face contorted as he tried to maintain his control. His eyes met mine and I ground my hips back into his. "Please."
The word must have severed the last thread of his restraint because in an instant he grabbed my hips and thrust deeper into me, a deep growl resounding in his chest. I focused on his hand stroking my cock and closed my eyes. They flew open wide when Byakuya hit that spot inside me and a rush of uncontrollable pleasure crashed through me. "Fuck... ngh... oh gods."
Byakuya's mouth was back at my ear and his panting breath made me shiver. "Good?"
"Y-yes..." He kissed my neck and picked up his pace, driving into me with more intensity and force. Every time he pushed forward he hit my sweet spot, sending surges of blinding pleasure through my body. My need peaked and I thrust back to meet him, matching his rhythm as I impaled myself on his cock. Our speed rose steadily until we were both moving frantically, sweat dripping down our naked bodies. Heat pooled in my belly and I knew I was close. "Byakuya..."
He reached down and resumed stroking my cock. As soon as his smooth fingers wrapped around me, my need whirled out of control and my body convulsed as my release washed over me. A scream escaped from my mouth as wave after wave of unbearably intense pleasure surged through me. Byakuya's hand never faltered, continuing its rhythm as my seed spilled onto the bed below. My ass clenched around his cock and he pushed hard into me one more time before I felt his body shake and his cock pulse inside me with his own orgasm. His forehead rested on my back and his chest shook with each ragged breath he took.
My strength left me and I sank onto the bed, wincing when I felt Byakuya's softening cock slip from me. He sighed and rolled onto his back beside me, chest still heaving as he panted. I rested my head on a pillow and gazed at the god lying next to me. He was absolutely stunning. Ivory skin glistened with sweat and strands of charcoal colored hair clung to a perfectly chiseled jaw. Thick lashes fluttered over icy blue eyes and slim, pale lips parted in a half smile. I traced a finger down the inside of his muscular arm, reveling in the feel of his silky skin under my calloused touch.
"Byakuya?"
"Hm?" He turned and looked at me with satisfaction written all over his face.
"I—" my voice faltered and I averted my eyes. "I really enjoyed that."
He took my chin in his hand and raised my gaze to his. When I looked in his, eyes my throat tightened at the caring and emotion that I saw there. I leaned in to kiss him slowly and gently. His arms wrapped around me and pulled me into him. I rested my head on his chest and sighed. There wasn't anywhere else in the world I wanted to be. My thoughts drifted back to all the plans that I had had for him, and how soon I had forgotten about them once he put his hands on me.
The night was still far from over.
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I'm not exactly sure that I'm happy with this chapter. My lemon writing skills still need work, but that's the whole point of this story. Still, I have only been reading yaoi for the last month and writing it for the last week. Please, please, please leave me some comments and constructive criticism. I really want to get better at these sex scenes.