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Eve shook her head for what seemed like the ninety-fifth time, "You want what?"
Max Shepard laughed yet again. He knew that it might be difficult to talk to his daughter about becoming apart of his crew and eventually taking over for him, but this was downright tiresome. Eve was definitely too much like her mother.
Shepard's crew seemed to be incredibly annoyed especially Jack, the female escaped convict who everyone expected to be a man (great surprise right?).
"Shepard! Would you please just tell her to get her ass on the ship so we can leave? Fuck!" Jack yelled surprising Eve's friends in the process. All of them scattered after that.
"Excuse me, Jack, but I'm just having a wee bit of trouble believing that my father, who I just met today, wants me to join him in his fight against Cerberus who you were all employed for. I mean wouldn't you be a little skeptical in same way or another?" Eve asked not the least bit afraid of Jack, she'd met meaner Krogans.
Shepard covered his eyes half expecting Jack to jump over the table and kill his daughter, but when he heard no screaming he peaked out to see Jack smirking quite amused at the young Shepard. Shepard breathed a sigh of relief and shook his head, "If you were anyone else, Eve."
Eve grinned knowing what her father meant, "Okay, I have a quick question."
"Ask away."
"Can my friends join? They've all been beside me from the moment I came to the Citadel."
Eve's father nodded and smiled, "Of course they can. I wouldn't want you to be uncomfortable."
Eve thanked her father then stood up, "I guess I should inform them. When are we going to be leaving?"
"I'll give you a few hours. Just come and find me when you're done." Shepard smiled.
Eve nodded and walked out of the room to find her friends.