Alright, new chapter,
This chapter will be about the battle in the pokemon center and the beginning of the Viridian forest
Now replies to reviews, I know I screwed up the punctuation marks, I'll fix it someday.
I'll italicize the pokemon speech starting from now, agains I originally did the greater and less than sign to signify it, but it didn't show up in the story no matter what I do.
What do you mean will there be action, this is a totally action/adventure story, did you really have to ask?
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Now, if you want Ash to catch a certain pokemon, please put it into a review
Now, I don't own pokemon.
Without further ado, I bring you...
Chapter 2
Pokemon Center Rumble!
Ash Ketchum appeared horrified as the smoke seeped into the building,
Two figures dropped down,
"Prepare for Trouble!"
"And make it double"
(A/N Team Rocket wil not appear as often, sorry, but they will be pretty powerful, just so they can contend with Ash.)
-INSERT TYPICAL ROCKET MOTTO
"Who are you?" Ash cried, "Your motto was absolutely horrendous!"
"WHAAAAAAT?" Jessie screamed as loudly as she could, "We spent so much time developing that,"
"Well Actually," James began,
"Shut it you purple-haired potty-face," Jessie yelled at James,
"Hmmf," Came the reply.
Ash scowled, "What do you guys want, I need to eat my dinner, I'm hungry,"
His remark was punctuated with a loud growl from his stomach.
"We are here to steal all the pokemon in the pokemon center!" Meowth yelled out.
"Haha," Ash chuckled, "yeah right, wait a second, did you just talk?"
"Yeah," Meowth cried, "you can't defeat me, cause I'm the top-cat around here!"
"But you are the only cat around here?" Ash said, confused, "Do you have self-confidence issues or something?"
"Are you insulting our loyal pokemon!" Jessie said, finally done bickering with James.
"Maybe I am," Ash shot back, "But you should treat him better, he is obviously self-centered and stupid,"
"I'll show you," Meowth yelled lunging at the boy,
Ash quickly dove out of the way and took out a poke ball,
"Riolu, time to come out and play!" Ash yelled,
Pikachu sweatdropped, "Play?"
"I'll crush you all!" Riolu came out with a shout.
"Riolu, start this off with a quick attack,"
But Meowth dodged it easily with skill,
"Fury Swipes," the small feline pokemon yelled,
"Dodge Riolu," Ash cried,
But it wasn't quick enough, Meowth reached the small canine pokemon and hit it furiously before jumping back out of range of Riolu's attacks,
"Ha!" Meowth yelled, "The cat beat up the dog!"
"Riolu don't give up, use force palm." Ash cried,
"You won't defeat me, you little miscreant!" Riolu shouted his paw surrounded with energy as he rushed Meowth,
"Miscreant? I'll show you, Pay Day!" Meowth screamed back, showering Riolu with coins.
The coins showered Riolu, who gasped in pain, then the small pre-evolved form of Lucario attacked Meowth, who summersaulted out of the way.
"I'll show you," Meowth yelled, "Iron Tail,"
The cat's tail took on a metallic sheen and whacked Riolu into the wall of the Pokemon center with a boom.
"Ouch", Riolu groaned, "That hurt!"
"Come on Riolu," Ash yelled, "I know you can do it!"
"Yes I can!" Riolu yelled out, His body took on a white glow.
"Yes!" Ash pumped his fist, "Riolu is evolving!"
Moments later, in the place of Riolu, a proud Lucario now stood.
"UH-Oh" Meowth said.
"Lucario Aura Sphere!" Ash yelled.
A ball of aura later, Meowth was blasted off before his comrades into an unknown location.
Ash looked around to find Jessie and James, "Crap," he grumbled, "They disappeared."
He spotted a terrified Nurse Joy behind the counter, "Where did they go?"
Nurse Joy pointed down a hall, to terrified to speak.
Ash rushed down the hallway, he saw Jessie and James, who also saw him, they stared,
"Where's Meowth" Jessie demanded,
"Lucario already took care of him." Ash said menacingly, "And your next."
"Ekans, go!" Jessie yelled, "Avenge Meowth,"
"Koffing, teach that impudent boy a lesson!"
"We will destroy you!" The two pokemon cried,
"Go, Pikachu and Shellgon!" The two pokemon came out with a cry,
"For dinner!" Ash yelled out his battle cry as his two pokemon sweatdropped(A/N for those of you that don't know what that is, in manga you know how in ridiculous situation's someone always has a big sweatdrop on the back of their head, that's a sweatdrop, how do I know this? Cause I'm awesome, thank you for asking. No, no the pleasure was all mine)
"Ekans, wrap that overgrown mouse!"
"Koffing Tackle!"
Ekans attempted to wrap around Pikachu, but the agile mouse sprang out of the way.
"Pikachu show that snake your Thunderbolt!"
"Shellgon, take the Tackle and retaliate with DragonBreath!"
Pikachu let out a crackle of electricity and it collided with Ekans with a crack.(A/N, Ekans is snake backwards and Arbok is Kobra backwards)
Koffing bounced right off of Shellgon's defense and was impaled with a beam of energy courtesy of Shellgon.
Koffing and Ekans both collided into Jessie and James and they piled up on the ground.
"Now Pikachu, Thunderbolt maximum power!" Ash yelled,
"Nice knowing you!" Pikachu yelled as he let loose massive amounts of energy and blew up as it hit the bad guys, and they blasted off into the sky.
"We did it!" Ash yelled excitedly, "We're the best!"
The next morning...
Ash yawned, it was a whole new day, it was time to conquer the day, he was going to the Viridian Forest, this was exciting!
Ash packed up all his things then proceeded to walk out the door of the pokemon center, he unfortunately ran into a certain red-head(I wonder who that could be?)
"What took you so long!" Misty yelled,
"Ummm, I was sleeping?" Ash said, "Now why do you care?"
"I'm going with you!" Misty cried, "Don't you remember that you still owe me a bicycle!"
"Oh yeah, about that," Ash said slowly.
"Yes?" Misty demanded,
Ash pointed behind her, "Look a Gyarados!"
"Where?" Misty shouted looking behind her, only finding a fat old guy staring at her. By the time she had turned back to Ash, he was already halfway across the city, "Get back here!"
Okay, so entire Viridian Forest next time Ash will be catching Caterpie, Pidgeotto, and a Scyther! Scyther will be part of Ashes Team Omega( his strongest team,) of 15 pokemon, including Lucario, Salamence, Rampardos, and Pikachu. It will evolve into a Scizor a couple chapters down the road, Caterpie will be a Butterfree by the end of next chapter probably, or the beginning of chapter 4, other pokemon will be partially decided by reviews, although only five legendary spots will be available. Charizard will also be on this team along with Garchomp and Hydreigon.