AN: Well I've written a fewmore paragraphs. Next chapter gets to the point. R&R everybody I'd like some feedback on this.
All throughout the day I was dreading the beating after school. The last bell of the day rung and my heart sank. I tried to take as much time to pack my books and walk down the hallways. They only beat me outside the school. They didn't know that the teachers didn't care about me. And the janitor sent the to the principals office (including me) 'cause we got blood all over the walls. I took a deep breath and walked outside the back doors. To my surprize they were waiting for me there.
I started running towards the forest and never looked back. But I could hear their footsteps right behind me. I tried to run as fast as I could but my legs were giving in on me. I never had that much energy to begin with. I haven't had any food for a few days and my wounds never had time to heal. I felt tears coming to my eyes. I knew this time they would really kill me. I wanted to call out for help but I never had the will to use my voice. I looked in front of me, it was blurry but i could still makeout a river.
It was my only chance left. I leaped for the water but to my horror, I felt someone tug me back by my school bag and a kinfe meet my neck. I felt the knife slice through my skin and then a fist hitting my side. I started to feel dizzy. As I fell to the damp ground, I felt another painful kick to my head and then everything was dark around me. I couldn't move but every pain was still there. It felt as if I was deep under water. As if I was drowning. But I could breathe. Suddenly I didn't feel like I was floating anymore, it felt as if I had touched the bottom. I felt dry, almost dry, the back of my head felt damp. I would have thought it was my blood if it wasn't so cold. I felt my eyelids start to correspond again.
I opened my eyes and I saw the now cloudy sky. I could smell the damp air and the smell of the forest. Did I die?....