Okay, first time ever leaving an author's note!

I just want to thank "Guest" for reviewing and "Daddy'sLittleAngie99" for favoring and following my story! I don't know if you (guest) were multiple people or not since you aren't using an account but I want to thank everyone involved! Whether you just read it or actually reviewed! I also want to say that I won't be updating at all (probably) for a long while but I hope at least someone sticks with me! By the way, I have begun creating certain ways to do things. By that I mean whenever you see ,,,,,CommanderOfMurders''''' I'm either signing something or it's a time skip. I thought it MAY help with the whole copying thing.

And I know what a lot of you are probably thinking "For someone who supposedly works in the military she's rather useless in combat it seems." Well, I agree. Though there hasn't been any combat scenes she hasn't really pulled anything off yet, that would be because I came up with her on a whim. I went "I want to write someone for Fanfiction... Hmm... Callie Ryan! I like that. Who is she? ...Military..." So, I'm still working on that. I think she'll have a gun as a main weapon but she doesn't have it right now since the humonculi won't let her keep it. If someone wants to review to help me build my character I'm open to all suggestions, whether it's "Maybe she should have a streak of pink in her hair!" or "She should be evil!" just anything!

This may seem like it's leaning more towards OC X Greed but it'll get to where it's supposed to be eventually. Haha, that's all for now! R & R, please!

Thank you again!

When he said he had to kill someone I didn't think he meant stalk and then torture! Here I am, watching as Envy ties some random guy, I think his name is Frank, to a chair. The room is made of concrete and is rather cliché, honestly. With an iron door and single lightbulb it's rather dim in here, I'm just standing in the corner looking awkward. "Are you sure you even wanted to come? You can walk out anytime, you know." Envy remarked. 'Ah yes, I love standing here watching you slowly murder this guy. Don't worry about me.' "No, I want to learn stuff." Great answer, me, great answer. He simple scoffed and went back to searching through a bag of... knives I guess. "Please! Let me go!" Frank yelled, desperately trying to break out of the ropes. The palm tr-I mean Envy, just ignored him and pulled a large kitchen knife out of the bag before walking over to the terrified man. "So... I hear you found our little... Hideout..." Envy smirked, touching the knife to the guy's neck. I looked horrified at Envy and he looked back at me with a blank expression before turning back to Frank. "What do you want? Money? I'll give it to you! Name your price!" Another evil laugh later and the man had a knife sticking out of his head. I gasped loudly and flung my hands over my mouth, "You murdering monster! What the hell?!" I yell as he turns to me. An emotion that I don't recognize mixed with anger flashes across his face before he smirks ever so slightly. It seems kind of forced though. "I thought you said you've 'seen death before'", Envy mocked. "I saw death! Not torture!" He raised an eyebrow and kicked the bag off into some unknown corner. "You think that was torture? Ha! You've never seen true torture, Darling." he smirked at me. 'Darling?'

,,,,,CommanderOfMurders''''' (3-4 hourse later)

Now we're walking back to the hideout since Envy had a few more errands that were uneventful. I haven't said anything since the concrete dungeon of a torture chamber. It was actually REALLY cliché now that I think about it, I mean, more so than I said before. There was a victim with a name so normal as 'Frank' and the killer decided to leave evidence, besides the scene itself. "Hey, Envy?" he glanced at me. "Why did you tie that guy up just to kill him?" I was curious, you don't just tie someone up as if to torture then just put them out of their misery. He stayed silent for awhile before answering, "I was supposed to integrate him for information but I realized after that he had no idea about what I needed and he found the mansion so he had to be killed either way." Well that's a start. "So... What did you need to know?" He answered quickly this time, "You really think I'd tell you?" It was worth a try though! I just shrugged, though he couldn't see it since he was in front of me. I looked around the place, seeing a million trees and a few squirrels. I'm wearing my dark blue long sleeve t-shirt with black jeans and a black leather jacket that I 'borrowed' from Greed. I defiantly didn't break into his room and stole it, nope. It's rather large on me but it serves it's purpose. I have light-gray sneakers and a necklace with a small ring on it, it belonged to my Grandmother before she died, she was half Ishvalan though not a lot of people know that.

I hear a loud snap before a bear suddenly rockets across the path and into the other side of the woods. "OH-HO-HO, WADDA HELL?!" I scream, jumping up and getting grabbed by Envy. "Shut up! The whole world can hear you!" Oh yeah, hide outs are supposed to be hidden. My bad. I look at him, his violet eyes holding just a hint of humor but mostly forceful anger. "Well, sorry, Princess! I'm not used to bears falling from the sky!" I argue, pushing him away and crossing my arms. He frowns and ignores my comment, "We may be far away from society but the entirety of Xing probably heard you, goddammit!" 'Well someone's grumpy.' I thought. I guess I was pretty loud, huh? Just that moment we get to the mansion. Seriously, how has no-one (other than poor Frank) found this? Envy marches up to the door and swings it open, slapping someone in the face as I heard a shrill "Ow!" he didn't stop though as he ran up one of the two stair cases. I follow but stop and close the door. "What's his problem?" I hear Lust's voice from behind the door as she holds a cloth out to Greed who now has a broken nose. He apparently screams like a girl. "I have no idea, I guess it's because I screamed or something." Lust merely nodded though she didn't look convinced. I didn't lie, so her expression must've been for a different reason. "Dinner is ready by the way." she says off-handily. "Oh, okay." Oh dear god, please tell me someone else cooked it. I walk into the kitchen to see a plate of simple rice balls. 'Can you ruin those?' I thought hopefully.

I sit down, knowing that this is of course for me since no-one else eats in this place. A few seconds later and Greed enters, his nose no longer broken since all of them heal quickly. "Hey, doll." he smiles at me, doing a once-over at my clothing choice, smirking when he sees that I'm wearing one of his jackets. "Hi." I say giving a half-assed wave. He sits down across from me and leans his elbow on the table, looking intently towards me. I take a small bite of the rice balls, smiling small to myself as they aren't god-awful. "Who cooked?" I questioned, taking another bite. "That would be Lust with the help of myself. " He smirked. "Oh o- wait. You can cook?" I stare at him surprised. He chuckles, shaking his head. "Not exactly, I just know that adding pepper to rice is a horrible idea." I laughed slightly. "Ahhhh. So are you going to sit there and watch me like the creeper you are or actually go do something eventful?" I said humorously. He leans forward and stared at me disturbingly for a second before laughing at my bemused expression and standing up. "Well since you asked so nicely." He smirked before exiting. Peace at last!

,,,,,CommanderOfMurders''''' (An hour and a half later)

I'm beginning to question my life choices. I'm now sitting here, watching as Lust tries to get Gluttony to complete a simple children's puzzle. I'll say it right now, it hurts. "So the circle goes into the circle hole." Lust says softly, kneeling beside the blob of a homunculus on the floor in the sitting room. Of course, he picks up the square and to my amazement puts it in the right hole. Lust claps softly, "Great!" this repeats with a few errors until the whole puzzle is complete. "Can I eat now?" he asks with a finger in his mouth. Lust nods before turning to me while standing, "I know that was agonizing for you to watch but last week he couldn't remember what the square was called." she smiles at me. I give her a 'Kill me now' look before pretending to shoot myself and falling off the couch, landing on my face. "Oh, stop being dramatic." she says with humor in her voice. "Can't talk, dead." I say, being muffled by the floor. She laughs before patting my back, which she of course has to bend down a lot to do. I flop over and look up at her, "Is anything eventful gonna happen?" I ask bored. "Yes, I believe Father has decided to actually throw a ball." My eyes widened. "A ball? As in... Like... Dresses? And tuxes? And... Dresses?" I graduated top of my English class, can't you tell? She grins, "He says it should make everyone a bit more... social. Everyone is required to go unless they have a current mission that has to be carried out that day. So that would leave out Wrath and Gluttony." Oh, so he can go out himself? "Are you going?" I question, not being sure. "I need to find a more appropriate dress but if all goes as planned, yes." Suddenly it clicks. "Wait, everyone else is also required. So I need a dress, and that means Pride, Envy, and Greed are also going. As well as you." she nods. I sit up, a wide grin on my face. "Does that mean that Envy is forced to wear a suit?" she smirks. "Yes. Though I would honestly not be surprised if he shows up in a frilly skirt." I burst out laughing at the comment. "Haha! I would pay to see that!" we must've been louder than we thought as a prompt "SCREW YOU!" echoed down the hall. "Oh hush!" Lust yelled back, completely amused still. "...Greed needs a fedora." "Yes, yes he does."

So that was chapter 3! Tell me what you guys think! Next chapter might be the ball don't worry it won't be all Cinderella like. It'll probably be a few chimeras from Greed's group and the homunculi. I don't write chapters before I post them (Like a probably should...) but I hope you like this! I know I write short chapters and tend to get long winded (Those don't belong together... oops). You probably realized that the characters are really OOC but that would be because I watched the show YEARS ago (That's why I'm coming up with the story and everything) so I'm just giving them my interpretations of their personalities. I literally write in the 'copy and paste' area when publishing and this happens. Only those that have looked at the doc manager would probably know what I'm talking about, but still. Thank you so much! I hope I'll eventually become a better writer in the future and please vote in my poles!

,,,,,CommanderOfMurders'''''