( hello guys am I am pround to say you guys for reading my first ( naruto ) story and also it would help if you guys would check my profile and do the poll on it because im only leaving it up for 2 more days after this chapter goes up so without votes Im guessing you guys don't want naruto to have a harem then but seriously please vote on something if you don't want him to be in a harem and he is just ine with kin and tayuya then say it in the review section because im to lazy ( I don't know how to add a new selection thing to it ) to add a new one to it also thank you god of cake for telling the right traing ground number for the forest of death. So without any further adoo here is chapter 3 do do dooooooo.

Also Tobi is a good boy.

Also I do not own naruto or be a man song

Chapter 3 (I want to start naming these say in the review section if you want me to start naming my chapters)

( preiviously on avatar… I mean naruto) (that was a great tv cartoon show )

(Now if you want to start the song be a man also I do not own this song or the lyrics im putting on here)

"I'll show them that im not worthless ill make them pay" thought naruto as he got into a acedemy stance while looking at madara while tobi/obito off to the sides started singing(now I will begin lyrics and you can begin the song or read the lyrics. Also feel free to tell me if you like this my adding songs into the fic I will do more if you like them)

(Let's get down to buisness
to defeat the huns.
Did they send me daughters
when I asked for sons?)

Naruto then rushed at madara and tried to land a kick which was blocked by madara hand

And then his foot was grab and he was throw into the ground. "Is that the best you can do boy? I bet your sister would be able to do better" madara taunted

(You're the saddest bunch I ever met
But you can bet before we're through
Mister, I'll make a man
Out of you.)

Naruto got back up with determination in his eyes "I'm better than my sisters ill show everyone that!" naruto yelled

"Then come and show me that naruto" madara replied as naruto came running at him and tried to land a hit again and again.

(Tranquil as a forest)

Naruto was sitting down brused and beat up but still trying to get back up and land a hit on madara.

(But on fire within)

(Once you find your center

You are sure to win.)

Naruto was sitting down in a meditating position trying to locate his charkra but suddenly he let up by a bluish redish blackis light. "I did it" naruto thought. (don't mind the links I think they might show up on the page if not then ingore this)

(You're a spinless, pale pathetic lot
And you haven't got a clue.
Somehow I'll make a man
Out of you.)

"hi im not pathetic or spinless" naruto said

"then come show me that" madara said standing completely unharmed not even with a scratch. "yyyyaaaaarrrrgggghhhh" naruto yelled charging at madara the fastest he could go whick was really slow and madara and obito eyes even when they were his age they could move much faster but there help him with that. " you need to work on your speed naruto" madara said hopping over a low kick from naruto that was pretty slow. :with the speed your going at nowi couldive killed you in over 100 ways" madara said as he kneed naruto in the head and kickec him away

"I'm never gonna catch my breath" naruto though as he way trying to move with a gravity seal on his legs and arms and body set at times 5.

"Say goodbye to those who knew me" naruto thought while dodging a fire small fire ball launch at him at slow speeds by sadly noone even knew he existed but he is going to changed

(Boy, was I a fool for letting the teachers in the school for cutting my gym) (I changed part of it hope you guys arint mad at me) Naruto said doing 50 jumping jacks then 5o pushups then 50 laps around the traing area safely with madara and obito by his side.

(This guy's got him scared to death) kyubbi though inside the seal watching naruto do his excersize

(Now I really wish that I knew how to swim) thought naruto while looking at the pond

"you must first know how to swin before you can water walk because if you fail you might drown" he remember madara saying

(BE A MAN) tobi said from somewhere as naruto jump into the pond.

(We must be swift as a coursing river) Naruto was running a lot faster with the times 5 gravity seals on his body running at was standing still as if noting in the world can hurt him (which is true intill naruto becomes more skilled)

( BE A MAN)

Madara actully had to use a tiny bit more effort to dodge naruto hits and attack back.

(With all the force of a great typhoon)

Naruto actully landed a hit on madara and lauched him into a rock with tiny cracks forming on it."I actully did it take that madara-sensi" naruto yelled

"Nice job naruto lets see if you can do that again" madara said getting off of the rock with a evil glit in his eye with a bit of proudness as naruto gulped.

(BE A MAN)

Naruto was learning the hand seal for the fire ball jutus.

(With all the strength of a raging fire)

"Fire style: Fire Ball No Jutus" yelled naruto as he shot out a red fire ball out his mouth

As it hit the ground it left light scorched marks "great job naruto" madra said with his voice filled with pride.

(Mysterious as the dark side of the moon)

Madara was once again standing alone in the clearing atleast that was what it looked like but then he suddenly ducked under a kick that was going to hit his head. "nice job naruto you allmost got me there but you will have to try harder than that to hit me " madara said as he grabed the foot and threw it ahead of him into a bush.

- 2 years later-

(Time is racing toward us
Till the huns arrive.
Heed my every order
And you might survive.)

"naruto the geniu exams are allmost here do you still want to show everyone how strong you gotten?" madara asked

"You can bet on it madara-sensie" naruto replied while rushing a lot faster at madara

(You're unsuited for the rage of war
So pack up, go home you're through
How could I make a man
Out of you?)

"here hopes goes that naruto unlocks the sharingan" madara though

"look here naruto you are unfit to be a shinobi and since I taught you all most of my jutus and fighting style you must be killed goodbye naruto it been fun" madara said while bringing out a kunia and rushing at naruto

"wait WHAT!" naruto yelled as he say his sensi rushing at him to kill him his own sensie that he look up as a father figure it hurt him so much but he wouldn't die here even though he new he stood no chance agaist he thing started to move slower for him his sensie was moving a lot slower and he could see his next move.

([men] BE A MAN
We must be swift as a coursing river
[men] BE A MAN
With all the force of a great typhoon
[men] BE A MAN
With all the strenght of a raging fire
Mysterious as the dark side of the moon)

Then naruto rushed at his senie and duck under the kunia slash from his sensie and brought out a kunia of his own and bringed it down on his senie neck then there was a poof.

"nice job naruto you unlocked your sharingan" said madara while patting naruto on the back

"ya nice job kid on unlocked your sharigan now I can train you know" said tobi/obito evilly

"oh crap" though naruto

-THE END-sorry guys for the short chapter but I wanted this up as soon a possible and RNR(rate and review I think that whats it means)