Hey guys I need help with this becaus eI am not sure if I need a bit more detail or if I need to have a twist of some sort! Please give me some idea's and I'll get back to you if you have any!

I am sorry that I have not been posting longer chapters I am new to all this and am really experimenting on it however as the story progresses and gets a bit more exciting I'll be sure to make them longer as they go.

I will keep posting only if people want me to. If I offend any of you I'll try to fix the problem and if you have any idea's PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE share them with me i am VERY open for idea's!

Thanks bunches

HamiChan