Ok so here's my next chapter, I hope you like it. I know you think it's going to be a may-sue but I am not letting her fall in love with anyone and I will not let anyone fall in love with her. I will also try to put some other suggestions to work.

The next day a boy entered Eragon's room with a request from Nasuada to see him. Eragon fallowed the boy through the castle, to Nasuada's room. The boy opened the door for Eragon as he stepped inside. Nasuada looked up from a scroll on her desk when she heard the door open. Elva looked at Eragon with a smile on her face for one of the first times in her life. She looked much better without the curse upon her, even though she still felt the pain of other people. Nasuada stood up from her desk as Eragon strode across the room to bow in front of her.

"How are you Eragon? I heard that you left to find the ra'zac a few days ago."

"Yes. Roran and I have finally killed both of the ra'zac and their parents. I wanted to tell you sooner, but we were all a little weary from the journey."

"You managed to kill them? Well, that is quite a useful bit of information. This should help us in defeating Galbatorix, we just have to win Murtagh over or kill him. Sorry I know that is not something you want to here, he was your friend, as well as mine."

Eragon's heart sank when he thought about the death of his brother. He knew that he could not win him over when he had sworn an oath to his enemy in the ancient language. He did not want to have to kill his friend, let alone his brother.

"Maybe we can find a way to kill Galbatorix without the death of Murtagh." Nasuada said when she noticed the look on Eragon's face.

"I scryed Roran's fiancé after we killed the ra'zac, she was not with them as we had thought, and saw that she was in Gilead. Murtagh was there as well. I plan on traveling there with Roran this week to rescue Katrina. I will try to reason with Murtagh when we get there, if I cannot reason I will try to kill him."

"Thank you. I know that will be very hard for you, but you have to think about the good of all the people in Alagaesia. But before you leave I have something I would like you to see." Nasuada said as she walked towards the door.

Nasuada led Eragon down to what he assumed were the dungeons. It became darker and cooler by the minute. Elva followed behind Nasuada as a duckling fallows its mother through water.

"How are you, Elva?" Eragon asked as they descended towards the deepest dungeons.

"I have been feeling much better since you released me from my curse."

"I am very sorry for causing you such pain in the first place. I did not know enough to do something like that so early in my life."

"I have forgiven you many times now. Don't think on it any further." Elva replied sympathetically.

Nasuada stopped in front of a cell with a strange looking girl inside. Eragon knew he had seen her before, but where. In his dream! This was the girl he saw with Murtagh.

"She showed up a few days ago asking for you." Nasuada said." Do you recognize her?"

"Yes, I think I do. Why is she down here?" Eragon said with a confused tone.

"Elva thought that there was great evil in her heart. She asked me to put her here."

"What? I don't sense any evil in her."

"You do not look deep enough." Elva said.

"Just let her out, I have seen her before she is not evil."

Nasuada motioned for a guard to open the door. The guard fitted the key into the lock on the door and slowly pulled it open. Another guard went into the cell and retrieved the girl.

The girl walked out rubbing her wrists in the place where they had bound her hands. She looked up at Eragon with a forced smile of gratitude. Eragon cringed when he saw the look in her black eyes. I was a look of pure sadness and suffering. The girl quickly averted her eyes when she saw the look he gave her.

"Thank you." The girl said in a cold voice.

"Oh, you're welcome." Eragon replied.

Nasuada turned to leave. Elva and the guards fallowed her through the long hall. Eragon walked after them when he saw that they were far away from the two. Eragon did not speak to the girl until they came to his room. He invited her inside and motioned for her to sit.

"I have seen you before with my brother, Murtagh, in a dream. Do you really know him?" Eragon began.

"Yes. I know of who you speak." The girl replied.

"Can you tell me if he is in Gilead currently?"

"He did mention something about going there."

"Did he mention anything about a girl there?"

"Yes, he did. Her name is Katrina, right?"

"Yes, yes. So she is being held there?

"Yes."

Eragon felt such joy when he heard that she was there with Murtagh. If they left soon, they could get them both in the same spot and complete another step towards the death of the king.

"Thank you." Eragon replied.

"You are very welcome." The girl said with a bow as she stood up from her chair.

"Oh, I am sorry, what is your name?"

"Kada. My name is Kada." The girl said as she left the room.

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That night Kada walked silently towards the window in her tiny room, carrying a pigeon with a note attached to its left leg. She looked down at the pigeon, wishing that she could be as free as this bird. If the bird decided to flee instead of deliver this message, no one would look for it, it would be free.

She released the pigeon from her hands into the night air and watched it fly away towards the North. All she had to do now was set a trap for Eragon and Saphira once they reached Gilead and hope that it worked.

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The next day Eragon went to tell his cousin the news about Katrina. He knew that Roran would be happy to here about Katrina, and that his cousin would want to leave as soon as possible, which was what he wanted.

"Eragon."

Eragon spun around to see Kada behind him. She looked as if she had not slept at all last night.

"Oh, hello Kada. I was just on my way to tell Roran the news about Katrina. If you would like you may come along."

"Thank you Eragon, but I wanted to ask you if I could accompany you and your cousin to Gilead. I have been there before, I know my way around the prisons."

"How did you know that I planed to travel to Gilead with Roran?" Eragon asked.

"You were asking about someone in Gilead, I only assumed that you planed to travel there to rescue her. Now may I come or not?"

"Oh, um, yeah." Eragon said as he turned to walk down the hall to his cousin's room.

"Thank you."

Kada turned to return to her room. A smile appeared on her face as she thought of how easy it would be now. She could lead them both into a trap and they would never suspect a thing. The king knew that they were traveling to Gilead she just had to find a way to contact him once they got there.

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Eragon knocked on the door of his cousin's room. The door swung open to reveal the face of Roran. Eragon gave a smile when he saw his cousins face.

"I know that Katrina is in Gilead. If you want we could leave tomorrow I would be happy to, I just have to tell Saphira."

Roran's face brightened up at this. He began to get all of his things together in great haste.

Saphira, will you be ready to leave tomorrow?

Of course, little one.

At this Eragon left his cousin's room and traveled down the hall to alert Nasuada that they would be leaving soon. He began to think of his brother, and hoped that he could reason with him.

Well here is the third chapter of my story. It is a bit shorter than the last but I think that you'll like it.