thoughts (kyuubi talks)
-fang talking-
kyuubi thoughts
+fang thoughts+
" Hmm nice area to bad im going to fuck it up now" says Rai as he poofs to to training area 25. 5 minutes later everybody else "about time you guys got here" says rai as he looked at his watch." Ok rai what or do you want fight them at" asked tsunade, "first taiutsu, next kenjutsu then genjutsu and last ninjutsu" said rai with a grin. "YOSH I GET TO GO FIRST AND SEE THIS YOUTHFUL PERSON FLAME OF YOUTH" yell gai as everybody everyody rubbed their earsand sweatdropped. " Ok gai-san any kinda of taijutsu even ones that use chakra is that ok?" asked rai "yes any kind of jutsu but would you please remove your hooded trenchcoat plase so i can see your youthful face?" asked gai. "Ok" said rai as he unbuttoned his trench coat and removed he hood, the girls all blushed and sad when they saw his face wow he has a pretty face but those scars is kinda sad,i wonder where he got them from thought all the girls there.On rai was black and red cargo pants and a dark blue short sleeve shirt with fish-net on underneath "My i ask you something why do want to be an elite jonin and why do you have that those scars on your face" ask gai is he got in his style " i want to be one of the best in this village and where i got these scars i tell you all later said rai as he crossed his arms in front of him." rai dont kill him with that style" warned jiraiya. " Jirayia-sama what style is that that rai is going in to" asked a curious lee " that my young ninja is rai's clan style called Wolf Fang" said jiraiya with a grin on his face. "ok fighters ready"asked tsunade both rai and gai nodded their heads "ok...BEGIN" yelled tsunade. Gai charged forward at rai, rai just stood there " what the hell is he doing hes goin to get hit" asked a curious ino. Gai kicked at rai's head but rai ducked it and swiped he open hand at gai's chest at lightning speed and connected, Gai fell down and couldn't get up again " what happed to gai sensei and what did rai do to sensei" asked a sad lee, " well lee aniki put his chakra into claws on the end of his fingers and if you get cut you go down for a while cause rai's chakra can either kill an oppent or paralyze them" said naruto. "Ok next oppent is asuma" said shocked tsunade, asuma getting over his shock stepped forward and took out his knuckled trench knifes. Rai picked up Renji and clicked a button and started to unsheath that blade, he pulled renji out fully and showed everybody a gold and dark red blade. Everybody looked at the blade in awe " I-is t-t-ha-t r-e-a-l gggoold?"asked tenten crush on rai even more then before for taking down gai in one attack. "ok ready to begin?" asked tsunade, both asuma and rai nodded " Ok...BEGIN" yelled tsunade. Rai charged forward at normal speed and swung hard at asuma's head, asuma blocked with his left and was being overpoweredholy shit this kid is strongthought asuma, asuma swung his right blade and it looked liked it missed rai but when rai jumped back he saw a cut on his shirt and when he put his hand over it and the removed his hand he saw blood on his hand" so you put your element into that blades to make them longer right asuma-san?" asked rai ,asuma chuckled and and said "yep thats right kid". rai narrowed his eyes and said " i am not a kid and now i'm going to end this here and now or that comment" as he ran at speeds over lee with his weights on and started to hit asuma all over his body and yelled "Heart Stopper" as the hit asuma in the chest over his heart, and asuma fell to the ground unconness. "ok can i get a break for a bit?" as he put asuma on his shoulders and walked over to a near by tree and propt asuma up right and sat next to him he for he poked asuma in the ribs hard to wake him up " aww shit it feels like i got hit by a super charged rasengan" said asuma as he pulled out a cigarette and was trying to find his lighter but a lighter was light in front of him and looked over at rai already smoking and lit his cigarette and started to smoke,everybody walked over with weird looks on their faces,rai looked up and said 'whats with thoses fucking weird ass looks on your faces?" as he took another puff "one why was that style called heart stopper, and two arnt you to young to smoke?" asked neji. " That style is called heart stopper because i kill my oppents with it and two if i'm old enuff to kill i'm old enuff to smoke and drink" answered rai. After that no one asked him questions of great importance " Next match" said tsunade ,kurenia and rai stepped across the field " ready kure-san" said rai with a grin as kurenai blushed with the new nickname she just nodded " you two ready" asked tsunade both oppents nodded 'ok...BEGIN" yelled tsunade." Ladies go first kure-san" she was already doing a long complicated series of seals and whispered/ relive the past jutsu/,rai was seeing his past "oh shit" said rai with wide eyes fang you got to get me out of this shit...NOW!!!!! rai mentally screamed to fang -ok pup your'll need my chakra to break this genjutsu...here you go-said fang. On the out side world kurenia paled and her eyes were watering up at what she saw happed in rai's passed "Oh My Fucking God his past is 20 times as worst than naruto's was, and that's how he got thoses scars on his fac-" she was brought out of her thoughts by a blast of silver chakra "no way he got out" thought kurenai across the field rai was sweating and breathing heavly " dont ever do that genjutsu on me again i dont want to see that stuff happen again"said rai in a very sad voice i wonder what she saw thought everbody there expect jiraiya and naruto who new rai's past already. "Ok kure-san my turn" Rai and went thought seals at incredible speeds wow he's fast thought everybody, when he was done he said /hell on earth jutsu/ kurenai saw her worst fear which was seeing her team and asuma die in front of her " AHHHHHHHH" screamed kurenai as she fell to her knees screaming before anyone could move the genjutsu dispelled kurenia stood up but her knees gave out but before she fell,rai was there to catch her" im sorry for making you see that kurenai-san" said rai as he laid her by a tree then he bowed to her "and "im sorry for making you see what you saw rai-san" said kurenai as she bowed her head. "kurenai-san what did you see in both jutsus" whispered tsunade " i saw his past and why he has thoses scars and his jutsu made me see my worst fear i will tell you everything when we get back to the hokage manor" whispered kurenai tsunade just nodded. "ok next match will begin after rai get some rest" said tsunade " i'm fine i want to get this over with" said rai as he walked to his to his side of the field and kakashi got to his side" tsunade -sama are we alound to use the kekkei genkia's we have?" asked kakashi "Yes" said tsunade at this rai got a evil grin on his face" what you grinning at you dont have a kekkei genkia" said kakashi, "you sure about that" said rai as he closed his eyes to concentrate he ground started to shook and lightning started to pour out of his body what the fuck kind of kekkie genkia is this thought almost everybody. Kakashi lifted his headband over his left eye to reveal the sharingan that was implanted into his eye. Kakashi charged up his Rikiri on his right hand as rai started to push chakra into his hands." Remember rai 30 minutes is your max with your kekkei genkia" yelled jiraiya " why can he use his kekkei genkia for 30 minutes only.. is it that weak? jiraiya-sama" asked shino " no he can only use it for 30 minutes. after 30 minutes is up rai's body starts to burn from his lightning chakra" said jiraiya sadly. As kakashi was about 3 feet away from rai, rai dissapeared " what were is he" said a confused kakashi, behind kakashi about 20 feet away rai reappeared and slammed his hands on the ground. Next thing that happend was the ground blew up around kakashi and rai.
flashback 2 minutes ago
as rai was about to slam his hands on to the ground " SHIT EVERYBODY JUMP IN TO THE TREES" yelled naruto.
present time
the feild was covered in smoke. "where are they" asked a terrified kiba, just as kiba said thoses words a shadow with another shadowon his shoulders came out of the smoking and broken ground. "Aniki are you and kakashi alright?" asked a concerned naruto. "yeah"pant"he"pant"just"knocked"pant"out"panted rai as he laid kakashi on the ground as he looked at his hands. "Let me look at your hands" said tsunade, rai held up his hand to tsunade to check out"hmmm... you have 2nd and 3rd degree burns on your hands from that jutsu, i'm making that jutsu a kinjutsu u can only use it as a last resort" said tsunade in a firm voice,rai just nodded his head "i'll heal you" said sakura "no it's fine i'm a very fast healer like my onii-san" said rai with a grin as he stood up " so im a elite jounin now ...right hokage-sama?" asked rai, "yes you are let's go back and get you your vest." said tsunade with a smile, so everybody walked or limped back to the hokage manor expect kakashi, jiraiya carried him back.
next chapter
rai gets his jounin vest, kurenai tells the other jounin & tsunade what she saw in both genjutsus naruto and rai sing and play guitars songs what i've done- by linkin park scars- by papa roach straight jacket label- by revis welcome to my life- by simple plan
and if you my fellow readers know any songs that have deep sad meanings to them send me the song and what band plays it