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Simbasother daughter: thankx for the review and i have read some of your story and their very impressive for a 10 year old to be writing.ill be sure to add a review once i read them.

british guy:thankx for the word change i was close to it but wasnt sure(but on the bright side i learnedrouge is red in french. ill be sure to change it.

bounding jackalope:dont worry this story will have very minamal humans in it.they were the only villians i chould think of and might be a real challenge.anyway enjoy chapter 3!

kovu115:thankx for the review,hope you like chapter 3

all that reviwed:thankx again and hope you keep reviewing and liking the story(im hoping for this to be around 25/30 chapters.)

and one more thing:the paradise that they live in is not timon and pumbas old home )

Chapter 3:The Pradise pride

The paradise pride was completly independent from the Pride Lands.The king was a young lion named Ghai(guy),his mate and queen was Named Sallow and they had just found the perfect place to call home:a home with tons and tons of trees,great waterfalls and plenty of game roaming around.Ghai had always hated Simba,he ruled over so much more then he and his wife,he had animals to bow to him,lioness's to go hunt for them,he was very jelous because all the paradise pride had consited of 3 lions.Ghai,his mate Tallow and their son Fang.Fang was still a cub and sine there was no other lions to play with he got into alot of trouble.

One day after Fang had been about to dive over a waterfall,Tallow had caught him just before he had dove in,she gave him the "if anything were to happen to you.." speech and he just layed there pretending to listen and nodding at times saying "Yes mom." Other then those problems the paradise's pride was very relaxed and had No Worries.They had Akuna Matata. Then one day a pregent abandoned lioness had come to Ghai for help.She said she had fallen in love with a rouge lion but he had left her after she was pregent and beat her almost,and came to them for help because they were the closest.

"Please help me and my cub,im begging you...i feel ill birth any time." Ghai,accepted her and the lioness,whos name was Mage,had birthed her first three cubs,two males and one female;Rota,Zoki,and Pala.She was very thankful,she and her cubs were accepted into the pride.

A few years had passed( one or two) and now Fang,still a cub had three younger lion cubs to play with.They whould go off into the trees all day and play tag and catch rabbits.

Fang now the oldest cub had a light brown tuft on his head and woderful strange red eyes,and light colored fur.

Rota was a light chocolate color with a black tuft on his head with light blue eyes.

Zoki was simular except his tuft and skin were both the same:a lighter brown and his eyes were a light orange.

Pala the only lioness of all the cubs had a light tan colored fur with wonderful dark green eyes.All three cubs had pure white undersides.One day during a game of tag Fang and Pala were play wrestling.She had pinned him so many times that he chouldnt count,Finnally he pinned her smiling "Finnally i got you." He said playfully and got off her smiling.Pala giggled "Only after about a thousand times...cmon lets play tag!" She hit him with her paw and ran off "Your IT!" Fang followed her through the dense trees and over logs and leaves,she got to a edge where it rolled down into a reven and into a dark hole.She paused looking at it,Fang ran up behind her and tried to slow down but the ground was slippery and they both slid off the revene and into the Hole.

Pala fell first,then Fang on top.Their noses touched for a secound and they both pulled away a little embarresed and confused,but both laughed. "How do..we get out of here?She asked looking around the hole. "I think i know a way out..this way." Fang said trotting ahead,then waiting for her to catch up. "I think theres a way up here..." Suddenly a hyena leaped out laughing,It was Shenzi,somehow she had survived the fire all those years ago.Her black hair was now slightly grey and her ribs were showing through.Finnaly! some meat...and ohh a fresh cub too.." Just as she was about to leap on the cub,Fang appeared swiping Shezi's face.She yelped and fell backwards,and didnt get up.

Pala's fright turned into enthusiasm as she hugged Fang gratefully.He was caught off guard,this was a little strange but she was younger by about a mounth or so,he didnt blame her. "Oh Fang you saved me! i thought i was going to die...Thank-You so much,im so glad were friends. Fang smiled "So am i...lets get out of here before anymore stupied Hyenas show up.."He jumped up onto the body of the hyena. i...actually killed her...im only a cub and i killed a full grown hyena! He thought as he gripped the edge of the hole with his claws,saw a branch and gripped it with his teeth.He looked at Pala and said muzzled through clenched teeth "grab my tail Pala.,and ill pull you up.She nodded and grabed his tail with her teeth,flinching he pulled her up.They were safe now,she smiled at him happily and they walked back to the pride,and were best friends from then on.

When they got back to the pride,they told Ghai what had happened and Palas mother hugged her gracisly "Thank the kings your ok..." She looked at Fang,then at Pala "Pala did Fang help you out of the hole? She nodded and blushed a little.Ghai looked at his son and smiled "Im very glad you did this son,it was very honorable.You will be a good King after I die.Pala hugged Fang again and thanked him,then went to tell her brothers what had happened.

Fang watched her go,and his father smiled at him as Fang looked at Tallow "What mom?" She laughed "Isnt it ovious Fang? you got a little crush on her dont you!" Fang's ears sunk in embarrasment "No! were just good friends.We saved each other today and-" Ghai looked at his son "Lets go for a walk son sha'll we?" He nodded and followed his enormus fathers paw prints.He got a chance to sneak a look at Pala,her mother was giving her a bath and they were talking and giggling.She looked at Fang and wispered into Mage's ear's;they giggled again and waved.

"See,my son?" Ghai said when they were walking twords a field and sat down "even though your still a cub,your still the ladies man,just like your old man.Fang laughed and glanced at the stars "Dad is it true about the Great Kings up there?" Ghai nodded "Yes my son; they are all up there.My father watching us,and when i die i will watch over you.Fang smiled at his father.Hes so wise,much wiser then stupied Simba he thought."Now..." Ghai started "Tell me what happened.

"Tell me how you are falling in love so early in life?" Ghai hada feeling he wanted to know this,he had a strange feeling that he may not be around much longer to ask him later.

The next day Simba and Nala got up at around the same time they usually got up but this time in a very excited mood.They told Kiara what they were doing and she giggled and mouthed to her mother "Have Fun!" She ran over to Kovu and pounched on him and kissed his nose with hers. "Wake up Kovu...we get to rule for one day while Simba and Nala have a day "alone"..isnt that exciting!" He yawned that was more like a roar and smiled at her "Yea! so we get to boss the animals around?"

"Yea!"

"And boss them around alot,and do whatever?"

"Yea!" She laughed "But you know Kovu that isnt all that a King is. He smiled "I know that,they have to keep order and such..right?"

Kiara nodded. "And make good judgements..and be a good father to his children." She smiled at him and Kovu smiled back.

Yes,but you'll make a better mother Kiara..you love little cubs i know youll be a very good mother." She smiled and nuzzled him "And of course youll be a great father." Nala approached them "Were heading off now,were not gonna tell you where we are because we are ordering you not to find us. got it?" Kiara nodded and laughed "Yes mom." Simba hugged her daughter once and the King and Queen ran off together resting their head on one another walking away farther and farther.

Kiara turned to face Kovu "Sooo what is on the angenda for the first day of the King?" Kovu scratched his mane. "Hmmmm."He looked outside and saw a storm moving in. "well lets go see if any animals need shelter,then.." He stopped suddenly looking around,then walked outside.

A rouge lion leaped on Kovu taking him down off of pride rock.Kiara yelled in fear and shock as she ran to help.The two male lions roared angrily as they both hit the ground.Kovu got up first and glared "Whats the big idea! you just dont attack the King like that!" The other male lion roared "Shut up you have no power over me..only over the Pride Lands not Africa." Kovu glared "Who are you anyway? you have no right to be here on our lands!

The lion roared and slashed at Kovu.He easily moved around the larger much fatter lion and slashed at his face. But he had no clue who this lion was.All he knew was this lion was endangering Kiara and possibly the rest of the Pride. He roared loudly and some of the lioness's came to Kovu's side.Kovu studied the facial features,both of his eyes had scars on them now and his right eye was bleeding freshly.His left was white,Kovu guessed he had gone blind.The enemy stopped and looked at Kovu,oviously shocked.

"KOVU!" he roared,his expression had turned from blind fury to mild excitment.Kovu eyed him strangly but growled "Tell me who you are or we will kill you." He looked at the lioness's and they nodded agreeing.Kiara came to his side as well.

The rouge sat up importantly. "I am Ziras mate.Your father."

(A/N: this is my first cliff hanger,hope you liked chapter 3,and no scar isnt the father.i decided to add action into chapter 3...hope you like chapter 4 comming up)