a/nI've been getting some bad reveeis and they make me sad

a/nI've been getting some bad reveeis and they make me sad. Anyone who has readf thgis story, pleas stick with it I'm sure it will get better. And if your gonna leave a comment about how much I "suck" please put it nicely" Thankkkzzz

Chapter 2

Malissa ran exitedly through kings cross, dragging her heavy trunk full of Hogwarts supplies behind her. She looked up at the clock when she heard a bell ring. It was one minute till eleven!! She wondered what to do; her ticket said platform 9/3 quartres, where was that? Then she saw somebody run hurredly through the wall. She gasped. But it was too late to be scared, so she ran through the wall. She went through easily and saw a big red steamer. Throwing her suitcase into the cargohold, she jumped onto the train just before it pulled away.

On the train she found herself an empty conpartement and settled in for the long journey. "Everyone my age probably already has friends" she thought. "Everyone's already been in this school for years!" She pulled out one of her shcool books and started to read. "I might as well get a head start on the work." She thought to herself.

About 15 minutes and 100 pages later, A boy stepped into the compartment with her, he was followed by another boy and a girl. The boy had crazy black hair, green eyes, round glasses and a weird scar. The boy behind him had red hair, freckles and the girl had frizzy brown hair. They all sat down in the seat across from her. They began to discuss quidditch, something she'd never heard of before.
"What's quidditch? She asked."
The three people looked up at her, seeing her there for the first time. The boy with the messy black hair was instantly fell in love with Malissa, with her beautiful blonde hair with aqua streaks. He looked at her, and suddenly she knew she loved him too. But she didnt know him yet…so she made it a goal to do that.
The girl with frizzy hair spoke up.
"hey, I'm Hermione Graanger."
"HI!, said Malissa, I'm Malissa Crystal Yotsubo Munamoto!"
"I'm ron." Said the boy with the red hair and freckles. Ron weasley."
Then the boy with the messy hair spoke up.
"I'm Harry. Harry Potter." He spoke with happiness and wonder, that he had found such a beautiful princess to fill all his dreams with amazingness.
Then, for most of the long long train ride, she was silent knowing that her lover was sooo close.

an: I see how some people say she's like too perfect and stuufff….but im just making it so its easier for her to fall in looove! Everyone lovooes loves! We'll get into the DEEPER feelings llaater! Bye Bye, hugs and kissesm, hope you like this chapeter better, I really really tried with the grammer.