I hope you like it, I used some lines from the actual movie, to help setup some of my scenes, that's my method, I using my own creative juices, lol I also take a few lines from kickass movies, lines that deserve to be repeated. Enjoy.
Its been a few days since Denny's arrived and tension is still at an all time high around the mercer house, so she tries to reach out… upstairs the youngest of all the mercers jack, lies on his bed and strums on his vintage black Fender acoustic, when Denny knocks at his door.
Denny: "wait… let me guess…..uh, radiohead?
(Jack stares at Denny with curiosity)
Jack: "What?"
Denny: "Radiohead… no wait, I'm dead off… umm, shit zepplin right?, Led Zepplin?"
Jack: "How did u know, you know Led Zepplin?"
Denny: "Shit, you'd be surprised what I know… (she eyes his guitar) .. Shit, great Strat too
Jack: "Huh?"
Denny: "Strat… your fender (pointing to his guitar)
Jack: "Hmm, how did you..?"
Denny: "I told you man…. (she slowly makes her way into his room, and ever so slowly makes her way to the edge of his bed and sits) "May I?" (pointing to his guitar)
(Jack hands over his black acoustic fender… and without hesitation, Denny begins to place the courses scales of "Stairway to Heaven" by Led Zepplin perfectly, Jack watches in amazement)
Jack: "Shit" (he smirks at her)
Denny: "you'll have to excuse my shitty playing, haven't played since high school… loved it though you know, used to play all kinds of shit man… Aero smith, Zepplin, Clapton, Hendrix, yep the greats" (she smiles, as Jack just continues to stare in surprise)
Denny: "What,
Jack: "Huh…"
Denny: "Say something man, your starting to wig me out" (she jokes)
Jack: "No, just didn't expect it… I mean Jerry says that you and Bobby used to be… close back then….."
Denny: "Yea so?"
Jack: "No… I just meant….."
Denny: " NO. No. I get it Jack, its not you… (she lets out a small sigh) "I get it, I know me and bobby are so different right?… we weren't always
Jack:" Jerry also said that you a…. did some time years ago"
(she rolls her eyes, shakes her head and pauses)
(she lets out a small sigh)
Denny: "Damn…. Jerry sure is on top of things….I mean shit…."
(he looks down at the ground)
Denny: "Well, yeah okay… time I guess you could call it that''
Jack: "So ah, what for.. I mean why?"
Denny: "Well….. Lets just say, no offense but umm……………
(she takes a long pause, and closes her eyes)
Denny: "Never fall for a Mercer brother…..
(he eyes her)
Denny: "Ok, kid well to make a long boring ass story short… me and Bobby got into some really bad shit years ago, I mean some really bad shit and ended up doing some time.. Well for Bob, it was only a couple of overnighters… and I ended up… getting fucked , I guess learning my fucking lessons…
Jack: "How?"
(she lets out a small sigh, as she feels her eyes begin to water, she slowly closes her eyes…)
Denny: "Two years in Lompoc, when I was about nineteen….. I'll die before I go back…"
(Suddenly, an loud and abrupt knock at the Mercers family's front door, quickly ends their conversation, it was Detective Green and Officer Fowler, coming to follow up on their new "evidence")
Detective Green: "Can we come in?" (as he and Fowler forcefully make their way into the household and follow Angel into the living room)
Angel: "Shit.. Ya'll already in"
Detective Green: "OOOOH OHHH, you, now ain't you sexy" (he eyes Bobby, wearing an old flamboyantly patterned blue, purple pink and white house robe of Evelyn's, to evidently cover up bruises from the night before, Bobby stand facing Green and Fowler, Denny quietly enters the living room to see the festivities)
Bobby: "Well that you, see Jackie was hoping to keep this little number for him self, but I beat him to it"
Fowler: "Say Gretsky… (holds up a plastic dime bag with a single hair in it) know what this it?"
Bobby; "Hair from you wife's tit….?"
(Denny rolls her eyes and smiles)
Fowler: "NO, try again, its hair from your thick skull…."
Denny: "Oh for fuck's sake"
(she whispers to herself, only Fowler hears her and turns around to face her standing next to jack in the living room door frame)
Fowler: "What did you say"
(Green turns)
Fowler: "Who the hell are you….?"
Denny: "Who the fuck are you…..?" (she said as she slowly inched towards him)
Detective Green: "Well, well , never thought I'd see that face again around these parts"
Denny: (sarcastically) "Good afternoon officer.. Oh excuse me.. Detective"
Detective Green: "Danielle Woods, what the hell are you doing back here, thought you would have learned your lessons"
Denny: "Well you know me Green, I couldn't resist good old fashion police harassment "
Detective Green: "Cut the shit Woods, what is this little reunion… what do you know about these shootings?"
Denny: "Oh please, just bite my ass Green, alright, I haven't done anything alright… yes I came back to visit, because I missed Ms. Evelyn's service, .. Now is that okay with you"
Detective Green; "Yeah well it just seems interesting that one of the nations best hackers would be in the same town at the same time two thugs we shot and murdered, and to be here at all places, back at the mercer house, your education"
(Folwer Smirks… Denny turns to him)
Angel: "Wait Green how to do go from petty thugs to contract killer?…. Besides they would have never told us who they were working for anyways… even if they got one hell of an ass whopping"
(Fowler smirks at Angel, then turns to Green)
Fowler: "You think your pretty cute don't you, he does… well everyone thinks their pretty cute until bust him in the mouth"
(Fowler walks up to Angel, Denny intercepts and get in between them)
Angel: "What so now you gonna bust me in my mouth?"
Denny: "God would you cut the shit… (she grabs Angel by the arm)
Detective Green: "Look all I'm saying is if you all got some good evidence give it to me and I will run with it, but stop trying to take on Detroit by your damn selves…. Shit if u keep knocking on the devils door long enough, someone's gonna answer you….."