UPDATE: PAY ATTENTION TO THE AUTHOR NOTES IN PART 1! THEY'RE UNDERNEATH THE PREVIOUS AUTHOR'S NOTES! 1/7/2015
Author's note: Ok I am very sorry for anyone that has been reading this, besides the followers I do know. I have t to give very big thanks out to Del-Spooner
He has helped me so much with this story, he is the guy who helped really fix my bad mistakes. You must check out his story, it is called Bambi: A life in the
forest. He is currently making tons of new chps. to his story, his "sequel" (if thats what you what to call it) will be on October 1st. Give Del-spooner loads
of follower's, and thx to him. He is a very awesome dude. Ok for my story, I might have to do 3-4 parts, so do check for updates on this CHP., AS IN CHP.3! I have part
2 currently written, I just need to write a 2nd or 3rd draft. (BTW IF YOU DON"T WANT TO WASTE A REVIEW, PM ABOUT THIS CHP. CAUSE THEIRS MORE TO
COME ON THS CHP.) Know onto the Main event. (That last sentence Know onto the main event, it is a movie quote tell me which movie its from, and I could
give you something in the story development.) Sorry spooner couldn't link you. People here are the steps.
1st step: Go to fanfic search bar at the right hand corner. 2nd step: Change story to writer. 3rd step: Type Del-Spooner. Then hit his name, and read his story. BTW His story is 1 years old, he
just got back, so cut him some slack.
UPDATE: I am going to explain my writing. This is script writing, and when you see this symbol :
that means characters are going to talk. Please I separated the characters dialog's on one sentence, most of the time it will have one name on a sentence. You should notice that when you read it.
UPDATE OF 1/7/2015: Eh-h boy I made a huge mistake letting this out, ok I've been practicing. PROMISE! I thought my writing skills was better than this! And I know it is... but this! What I did here was complete laziness! I didn't take the time to look at it, or write another draft. I'm so sorry, I'll be fixing part 2, and 3 after this so PLZ! DO NOT READ THEM YET! I'll be fixing this for awhile. This will be a quick objective so don't worry! I'm going to make some announcements at part 3's author note.
Its not their yet so just wait! I'll get right on chp.1 and 2 as well! I swear! If you guys want to read them after major fixing! I will, I have done a slap (terrible) job, and could have done better. Forgive me for my neglection to the story, and sloppy job. BTW GUYS I NEED YOUR HELP plz let me know of things like this. (I'm not mad at anyone, but myself for this.)
Bambi 3 Chp.3
Father and Son part 1
- The night was long, very wet, moist, and humid. The forest was a sound asleep, except for the noise of the crickets, frogs, and other nocturnal animals. Sunrise was upon the forest, the storm had stopped awhile ago, and the dark clouds were fading away.
- Lato just woke up, he got up slightly stretching his legs: "Yawwwhuhuh!"
-Lato notice the foggy night, and see's small lights sparkle from inside the fog.
-Lato (giggles): "he-he"; Lato ran outside the den laughing. He stopped by the entrance of the den to watch the lights shimmer through the fog.
-Lato got into a jumping position, he tried to catch one of the lights. He spotted another one, Lato then tries again, again and again. Lato was having fun trying to cacth the lights flashing slowly off and on; as time went on the sun started rising.
- Lato kept jumping at the lights, the sun's light got into the edge of Latp's eye, he notice the sunrise and the lights were disappearing:" Oh no, plus this is getting boring... Hmm.. Oh yea! Lila loves to play games, maybe she'll play with me!"
- Lato dashed to the den, he stopped. (Thought): "Better not wake up Mom or Dad." Lato crept quietly over to Lila.
- Lato whispers into Lila ear: "Hey Lila, get up... get up sis."
- Lila whines: "No Lato! Go away!" She turns over, (face first) snuggling into her Dad's pelt.
- Lato bites her ear, pulling on it: "Get up Lila! Commmee.. onnn!"
- Lila whines (again): "Nooo! Lato..."
- Lato gives up, tossing his head, and squinted back at her. He walks to the exit of the den mumbling, "She's no fun! No fun at all!"
- As he was walking towards outside, his stomach growled. Lato felt stomach rumbling, "I'm hungry, what time is it?" He looks at the sun, and saw that the sun was just half way from its complete rise over the horizon. He looked back at the fog, and see's it fading away with the lights disappearing within it.
- Lato turns around shouting, "Mommy! Get up! Mommy get up!"
- Faline slowly opened her eyes, and replies (tiredly): "What is it Lato?"
- Lato whines: "I'm hungry mom."
- Faline turns to the right, and looked at Bambi: "Bambi please feed your son."
- Bambi's ears lift, but he didn't move, "He's your son, before sun rise."
- Faline gazed at her mate, she looked outside and saw that it is sunrise.
- Faline smirks: "Hey Bambi."
- Bambi lifted his ears, and reply's tiredly: "huh?"
- Faline starts flirting with her mate: "Guess what honey." She grins.
- Bambi: "What honey?"
- Faline: "It is sunrise."
- Bambi immeditley lifts his head. Faline saw Bambi blushing red at her. She smiled, and giggled at him.
- Faline walked over to Bambi, and licks (kiss) him on his snout.
-Bambi got up:" Alright my angel I got him."
- Bambi nudge's Lila: "Lila... get up."
- Lila raised her head: "huh!? What.. Dad?"
- Bambi smiled while looking at his daughter; he thought: "That reminds me of when she was just a newborn."
(Flashback: This is when Bambi 1st met his children, face to face.)
- It was a bright morning, sunrise had just happened, the color of the sky was bright yellowish-orange.
- Bambi was walking into the den, he watched Faline smiling at him, and two little fawns sleeping.
- Bambi stood their with pride, smiling back at Faline. He took a deep breath and let it out.
- He walked over to Faline, and notice one of the fawns awaking. It was a light brown female fawn, laying in front of the other young one, with her head in the air, her eye's shut, ears down, and mouth wide open in the yawn.
- The small little fawn opened her eyes and noticed her father. She smiled at him.
(Flashback ends)
- Faline: "Bambi?... Are you.. ok?"
- Bambi twitched coming out of his daydream.
- Bambi: "huuuuhh?... Hgh Hmph! Lila time to eat."
-Lila (tiredly) repies to her father: "Oh... alright" Lila slowly gets up.
- Faline thinks: "I'm very concerned for him, that was weird. He was just standing there, for a while, and last night... I notice he looked... depressed."
- Faline sighs: "hahuuuh."
- Faline: "We are all having a tough time right know."
- Lato stood at the exit waiting for his Dad. Bambi was stretching his legs next to Lila.
- Bambi finished and (happily) said, "Ok kids! Time to eat!"
- Lato jumps into the air, runs out of the den screaming, "Wa-whoa!"
- Lila started walking slowly out of the den yawning.
- Bambi: " I better go get him. You get some sleep love." Bambi nuzzled Faline, and ran outside.
- Faline watched Bambi running out of the den shouting, "Lato don't eat that!"
- Faline thinks: "I picked the noblest mate, I could ever want."
- Bambi shows up in front of he Lila, and Lato, who were both just outside he den. The two were talking about last night.
- Lato speaks quickly: "Do you think there's more than ..."
- Lila: "Lato Sh!... SH!.. shush, Here comes Dad. Well talk later."
- Bambi: "Ok... Let me see.. AH!"
- Bambi spotted a nice patch of long grass.
- He ran slowly going by a few pine trees: Over here kids! Some fresh grass!"
- Lato turned to Lila: "Race ya sis!"
- Lila: "Okkk..."
- Lato ran off, Lila was to tired. It was a very long night for her, so she didn't feel like racing her brother, she just let him win.
- Lato got there first, Lila cames walking around the pine tree.
- Lato was smiling, and jumping from side to side: "I'd beat you Lila!"
- Lila didn't care much: "Ok."
- Lila, Lato, and Bambi started to eat, while Lila was remembering when herself, and Lato were eating awhile back. She remembered Lato chewing, like he has never seen food before. She noticed her father ate fast, but civiled. Lila thinks: "Dad eats fast but neater. Lato eats without any kind of manner. Is this a buck thing? Do they grow out of it?"
- Lila decided to study this further on.
Underneath is an update for 2015
Author's Note: Ok theres part 1. Part 1 is more of an experiment chp. I have to say, I am impressed how I did this. So I think I should explain somethings here. As in Lila, wanting to study bucks behavior. I'm using this as a test to adapt to Lila smart personality, and her playful behavior. As in Bambi's flashback, this one isn't bad. I stated in chp.2 not all flashbacks will be bad. Bambi is having these flashbacks thx to some tragical events. Stay tuned part 2 will be released very soon. I will update this Author's note to. AGAIN NOT MY characters! They go to Greatmarta. THIS IS A UNCANON STORY!
UPADTE OF 1/7/2015: Ok I was reviewing my Author note, and I also fixed up part 1. Now I know why I thought this was "done" cause near the end I did a (somewhat) better job. Alright as of part 4 coming out... Their is no release date (just yet.), I promise a Christmas present but I can't do it... I don't know how to make it up to you guys... its just... so hard, with life fu**** with you and know I have midterms. As of part 1 was updated at 1/7/2015. Please check at my bio. I will be updating that to keep you guys in check of what's going on. I'll see you guys on part 2! NOTE PART 2 and 3 is still here at its previous state.
Author's note: OMG Part2 is here, this chp. has to be the longest chp. I ever made, it feels good, but a pain in the butt. :) Ok, I need to announce, in a chp.3 summary that I made to start my drafts out. I planned some-things out, but everything changed. I had some returning characters, it was Thumper's kids. Suddenly...they just couldn't fit into this chp. and this would be to similar to a Bambi 2 moment. This would be a Bambi and his own father moment.I couldn't do that cause of legal to illegal things.
Good news: They will return; maybe for a breif moment in chp.4, I'm very sorry, but when Greatmarta said she had trouble fitting them in the story, I see what she meant. But I will find a way around, and promise to add them a lot more (not a lot to a bunch of times), but more than 1 appearance every 10 chps. (I'm not being serious, cause there wasn't even 10 chps. on the official story.) You should get my point. 9If not, it doesn't matter, cause Greatmarta was right. They have some serious trouble fitting into the story.)
Extra Good news: A secret returning character from Felix Salten is coming from the story. According to the Bambi wiki, it sounds like he was supposed to be in the movie, but was cut. :(
More news: Chp.4 will have a lot more characters returning from the story, and movies. Chp.4 will have a character, that I will be adding as well. btw This character is my own. (I claim it.)
Again with claimers: I will own any future new character adding. (except the returning characters.)
Disclaimers: Any current characters in the story I DO NOT OWN, PURPOSE IS FOR A SATISFYING ENDING! ENTERTAINMENT PURPOSE ONLY. THIS IS UNCANON. Thank you on to the show. (Story -_-)
Thumper: Hey my kids better be in the next show (chp.), and as well as me!
Finsher: Yea, yea. I promise.
Secert character: Me as well.
Finsher: O_O Get out of here! YOUR NOT SUPPOSE TO BE HERE JUST YET!
UPDATE OF 1/8/2015: Boy did I rush this, and I was a fool to believe I was writing correctly; this sucks to me and is embarrassing I wrote like a1st grader. I promise part 4 is not like this, cause I've taken hours just to do a section. I had to re-write part 4 completley for crying out loud, and I will check that story before releasing it. Alright I'm going to see/check every error here.
Bambi 3 book 2
Father and Son part 2
Ronno's Den
-Sunrise had just happened, Ronno was coming back inside the den as Rea, Roga, and Hali were still sleeping.
-Ronno walked towards to Roga, and Hali.
-Ronno: "Roga! Hali! Awake!"
-Roga jumps to his feet; He whimper's: "Yes Dad..."
-Ronno: "Outside."
-Roga immediately ran outside, knowing not to mess with his father.
-Hali got up, she walked over towards Ronno front right leg, Hali nuzzled his leg.
-Ronno looked at Hali, and thinks, "I can't yell at her... She's just... No! Stand with pride Ronno."
-Ronno shook his head: "Ok. Hali go play with your brother." Ronno gently pushed Hali out of the den.
-Hali scrambled forward, and turns around; she looked at him frowning and whimper's: "Daddy..."
-Ronno calmly shouts: "No Hali. Not until I say come in. Just... stay near the den, and know go play with your brother."
-Hali was walking out of the den, looking at the ground.
-Ronno walked over to Rea, he gazed at her while she was a sound asleep, "Rea! Get up."
-Rea woke up, she got up slowly stretching her good legs. She realized Ronno was in front of her, she looked at him still in a stretching pose awkwardly smiling at him.
-Rea:"He-Good morning... ha-honey."
-Ronno was not amused,"Rea please show some dignity."
-Ronno took a deep breath in, and let it out:"huh... Rea what you did last night was... unacceptable; you could have been killed. You put Roga at stake, and his future."
-Rea stared at the ground:"I'm sorry Ronno... I-I just couldn't-..."
-Rea took a breath in: "Huuuh. I just couldn't let her die..."
-Ronno:"Quiet, you will be responsible for her, you will protect her, feed her, and care for her."
-Rea continued to staring at the ground, and mumbled:"Yes honey."
-Ronno glared at her:"Furthermore, I will have nothing to do with her. I won't even to save her life!"
-Rea quickly looked up:"Ronno! You can't..."
-Ronno interrupts: "Silence, do not talk to me like that."
-Ronno stared at Rea for a moment, Rea stared back at Ronno just for a moment and looked at the ground.
Ronno thinks:"What have I done! She is still hurt, I-I did. I made her feel like she thought was nothing important, and I told her that her actions where terrible. She was brave back there... I completely forgotten that... I'm just so upset that she would risk her life for a... stray...
-Ronno calmed himself, and spoke: I'... I'm sorry Rea."He took a step forward, " I am very ashamed of myself, a.r..r.r. Are you ok?"
-Rea slightly looked up; she saw her mate standing in front of her; Ronno was staring at her with sorrow all over his face. She saw all the guilt inside him, and thought:" I can't just leave him like this... Their are a lot of things going on, and he's been through a lot in his whole life... I can't let his guilt consume him. I must forgive him, he is my mate, and I still love him no matter what. I know who he is, and how sweet he can be... he just loses his temper so fast. I will."
-Rea got up off the ground, and tried to walk, She limped with every step she took getting closer to him.
-Ronno's thinks: "She shouldn't move! She is very injured!"
-Rea got to Ronno, and she started to nuzzle him.
-Ronno: "Rea, you shoul..."
-Rea whispered:"Its alright Ronno, I love you. I always will."
-Ronno stood in place feeling anxious and confusion, he watched his defenseless mate nuzzling him.
-Ronno thinks:"I just yelled at her and put her down, but yet she still loves me."
-Ronno took a few steps back, and shook his head.
-Rea tumbled a bit, but she re-claimed her balance.
-Ronno: "Rea..."
-He stopped and looked at Rea:"Rea... I will only be concerned about Hali... if it has anything to do with Roga."
-Ronno turned to the exit of the den, and starts to walkout:"Remember if you try to save Hali again... Roga may not have a mother."
-Ronno walked out of the den, and mumbled:"Just like Bambi."
-Rea heared what he mumbled, and she thinks,"Just like Bambi? What does he mean?."
-Ronno walked out of the den , and to his right; he see's Hali. Hali was standing in front of him, she was staring at him right in his eyes, she was crying. Tears filled her eyes running down her face; like a stream.
-Ronno's thought:"Ugh... She must have heard me..."
-Ronno looked at the ground, and sighed:"huuh."
-Ronno looked back at Hali:"Hali, go... go on inside."
-Ronno: "Huh... What am I suppose to do... she's-just not my child."
-Ronno walked over to Roga, who was sitting near a small pond.
-Ronno:"Roga!"
-Roga looked at his father squinting at him. Roga looked back at the pond:"Hmph!"
-Ronno shook his head from side to side:"huuhh..."
-Ronno sat down next to Roga, and spoke: "Listen, Hali is know living here. You can get a long with her, or tolerate her. Understand...?
-Roga sat at the edge of the pond, looking into his reflection. Ronno staring into the pond with Roga, waited for a short moment for Roga to Respond before losing his temper.
-Ronno shouts:" Do you understand?"
-Roga turned to his father: "Yes Dad!"
-Ronno stood up:"You better not give your mother that attitude either!"
-Roga got up (as well): "I don't care!"
-Roga ran through some bushes, Ronno watched him go. Ronno thought, "I know where he's going.. he just needs time to himself."
-Ronno walked into the den, he came inside and saw Hali in Rea's gray fur. He stopped to watch Hali cry, she was pouring big drops of tears from her eyes. Ronno felt guilty deep inside himself.
Ronno thinks:"hhuuhh... I spoke my truth."
-Rea lifted her ears soon as Ronno walked in. She was desperate to talk to him, but she knew Ronno needed time to himself. Ronno walked over to a dark corner of the den, he laid himself down, and stared at Hali for a moment; He later fell asleep.
Authors note: Ok finally I tried to have it posted Sunday (U.S.A time.) Part 3 is under way, it should be posted in a few days, this part will be small, and starting back at Bambi's breakfast. I'll tell you the new character's species, it's another deer. Again and a reminder go and support Del-spooner. He helped me out a lot. Thank you again Spooner. I'll see you guys soon.
WAIT! Need to mention something I know, Ronno's family is having some prob. Ronno is going through a ton of stress, and Hali is very upset, I feel guilty for doing this to her. I promise things will be better for Hali. Plus I think I found out the characters age's, I'll spill it later. Good day/night guys; see you later.
UPDATE: 1/8/2015: Alright this was easy, I found tons a mistakes towards the top and at the bottom it had some errors but not as many as the top. So from my conclusion I do a better job when I get further into the story, and a terrible one at the beginning of things. I'll work on 3 soon, I feel like theirs something I want to tel you guys... oh nvm. ;)
Why did I wink you ask idk. Maybe you guys should scroll a little and read my notes for some spoilers.
Authors Note: Ok Part 3 is finally here, First things are 1st, I FEEL like this part is somewhat unique, and almost has the feeling to part 1.
BTW I just found out that this chp. is very similar to the official chp. 3 or 4 when Lato was supposed to go with his Dad, I'm very sorry, there are some differences between the two, but I don't think its enough. Part 2 prob. is the main source of separating the two similar chps.
Furthermore here are the ages of Lato, Lila, Roga, Hali, where Bambi is now, Faline, Ronno, and Rea. (More characters are being added, and I will give there age as well. (THESE ages are estimated, not exact. One more thing, I'm not sure if I will give them exact ages.)
Lila, and Lato's age: about or little over two months
Roga: He's about a little over than 3 months, Greatmarta said he was a little older than the Lato and Lila, and I'm saying this; he hit puberty very early, but I will stall it, he will continue to have small antlers like bumps
Hali: about or is a little over 1 month old, she is sort of a new born.
Spoiler: The new character is about 4 months, it is a male, species deer. (BTW the new character is not the returning character, they're separate, but may be related I haven't decided.)
I will explain the age's and timeline in better detail later, for a brief description I am trying to fit this story's timeline in real life, and mixed in Disney's way. Disney messed up, and screwed up the irl deer's life cycle, and Greatmarta gave Roga antlers to early. But Disney screwed up 1st, so it gives anyone the excuse to modify the timeline of Bambi and a deer's life cycle/puberty.
Bambi: Is a little over 2 years old same as Faline, Rea, and Ronno.
Were we left off was with Bambi and his family.
Bambi 3 Chp.3 Part 3
Bambi
-Bambi, and his children were still eating, he knew he had to go real soon, "I need to hurry their meal up, and get them to the lake. Faline would expect me to, before I left."
-While Lato was eating he came up with an idea; he smirks. Lato grabbed a bunch of grass into his mouth, and chewed up his food fast. He swallowed it and walked towards Lil.
Lato: "Burp! He HA!"
-Lila winced: "Eww Lato! That's gross."
-Lato kept laughing, "ha ha!"
-Lila glared at him, she couldn't let him win. Lila looked at her Dad:" Daddy, tell Lato about manners again."
-Bambi watched what happened, Bambi didn't care much. He walked over to Lila and he whispered into her ear," I have an idea, why don't you do the same? And when your ready, let it out into his face!"
-Lila (showed) was disgusted:" No, Mother said we use our manners."
-Bambi stood up staring at Lila, and thought,"She's right, what kind of Father or prince am I, if I don't show him how to act like a prince. Or buck."
-Bambi turned his head to the right, and stared at his son; Lato was eating, when Lato was tearing out a patch of grass, he caught a glimpse of his Father staring at him. Lato looked up at his Dad, wondering what his father wanted.
-Lato talked with food in his mouth: "What?"
-Bambi was disgusted by what he saw. Bambi took a step back.
-Bambi thinks: "Yuck!"
-Bambi (talks in a firm voice:) "Lato we don't talk with our moth full, and we don't burp in anyone's face, we also say excuse me"
-Lato just stared at his Father; thinking: "Huuuhh. Blah blah blah. Dad needs to loosen up, its prince this, manners that. He just doesn't know how to have fun, anymore."
-Bambi watched his son going back to chewing the grass.
-Bambi thinks: "Huh. He just doesn't seem to care what anyone tells him. I'm worried if he doesn't try to learn a things he won't be able to fend for himself. Huh... What time is it? Shoot! Alright I need to get them some water."
-Bambi: "Alright kids, time to go to the lake."
-Lila bit off one last patch of grass, and she followed her Dad. "Finally, I'm parched." (Lila spoke.) The 3 deer were walking on a deer path, down a hill while the trees surround them, sunlight flashing through the leaves and the wind blowing through there fur.
-Lato: "Lila what does parch mean?"
-Lila thinks: "Knows my chance to teach him something! Finally I get to big sister I've always wanted to be!"
-Lila replies: "Parch means, I'm thirsty, or I thirst." **Lila keeps talking**
-Lato thinks: "Man... She really knows a lot of big words."
-Lato looked at Lila who was still going on about explaining the word: "Know for a sentence..."
-Lato:"Ok! Enough! I get it... Forget I asked."
-Lila looked at the ground: "Oh!... Ok.."
-Bambi: "Alright kids were here. Go on, go get drink, and have some fun while your at it."
-Lato ran towards the creek and jumped in, he started splashing around in the water. Bambi was watching him. Bambi smiled at his son playing. Bambi notice Lila who was looking down at the ground, with her ears low.
-Bambi: "Lila!"
-Llila perked her ears, and turned around: "Yes Dad?"
-Bambi tilts his head: "What's wrong sweetie."
-Lila: "huh.."
-Lila: "Its Lato, I was defining a word to him, he just told me to shut my moth, in a very mean way, he just has an attitude. I guess he's upset."
-Bambi looked over at Lato, who was drinking up almost a whole cup of water within secs., "Alright I'll handle him. Know go on, and go drink some water. Then have a little bit of fun."
-Lila: "Ok Daddy."
-Bambi thinks: "Ok, Lato what am I going to with you. Huuh... Crap what time is it.!" Bambi look into the sky, and saw the sun was only a couple on mins. before he had to go.
-Bambi continues thinking: "Uggh. Like my Father said its better not to be dehydrated. I hope Faline gets here soon."
-Bambi ran down the hill, he quickly (but neatly) drank some water. Faline ran out of some bushes, she was looking around for Bambi, and the kids. She spotted Bambi by the huge lake with the waterfall.
-Faline walked down the hill shouting: "Bambi! I got the kids, go!"
-Bambi perked his ears up, and looked at Faline. He ran over to his mate.
-Bambi nuzzled Faline around her neck: Thanks darling. I'd better be off!."
-Faline thinks as she stared at Lato, who stopped drinking the water and see's a butterfly. Lato jumped through the water splashing through after the butterfly.
-Faline thinks: "This could be when Lato will make up his promise."
-Bambi was running up the hill. Faline turned around as soon as he made it to the top; shouting: "Bambi!"
-Bambi stopped, and turned around: "What is it Faline?"
-Faline: "Take Lato with you!"
-Bambi thinks: "It will be one less child for her to handle."
-Bambi looks at Lato playing near the lake in a patch of flowers chasing the butterfly.
-Bambi shouts: "Lato!"
-Lato jumps, trying to pounce on the butterfly. He fails, and lands deep in the flower patch. Lato stuck his head out of the patch, perking his ears; hearing his name.
-Lato screams: "Yes Dad?"
-Bambi: "Your coming with me on patrol!"
-When Lato heard this he became weary, he slowly walked up the hill with his ears tucked down. He pleads to his mother: "Mom please don't make me go. I don't want to go!" Lato smiles.
-Faline was not appealed: "No Lato! This will no workt on me again. You will go today! That is final."
-Lato whines: "But Mommy!"
-Faline: "No but's Lato. Your father was agonized that day, you promise him that you will make it up. And nows the day.
-Bambi chimed in: "Lato I was very sad when you lied to me, broke your promise to me. It hurt very bad son. I hope you can look into your heart, and do what's right, that's all I ask of you." Bambi was hoping for a sign of some maturity.
-Lato thinks: "I don't want to go with him. I want to stay here, and have fun. What should I do?... I got it!
-Lato stomped his feet and stood his ground shouting: "No! I won't go, and you can't make me! your not my boss!
-Faline eyes widened, and her ears were forward: "Lato" I am your Mother, I'm raising you, and your Father is to. We are your boss."
-Lato: " I don't care who you are! I wish you two weren't my parents!"
-Bambi thinks: "This is going to far, this.. "attitude" is enough!"
Bambi yells: "Lato! Don't you talk to your mother or me like that. Lets go! Now!
-Lato: "No!"
-Bambi: "Lato!"
-Lato acknowledge his Dad knowing his father was very upset. He walked up the hill, and as he got closer to his Dad who was at the top, he walked slower. He stopped, and saw his Dad very upset, frowning, and squinting at him at the same time. Lato looked right into his Dads eyes, and his Father was angrily staring back at him.
-Bambi: "I'll see if I can straighten you out." Lato gulped.
-Both deer walked into a thicker, out of Faline's sight.
UPDATE OF 1/9/2015: Alright part 3 is all done, and this makes some of my schedule with life and this a little more free. I hope what I've done here shows I know my grammar, just terrible skills and noticing. I feel embarrassed of this, but it won't stop me and I promise to do better.
Note that I said I can't keep my promises, well guess what I can't keep promises that I can't keep, but improvement of writing is what I can.
Like always thank you.
Authors note: Ok Lato is in a lot of trouble, and I'm very impressed with this part. I hope I came up with a new writing style lol. If I did, and it becomes famous I'm naming it.
AGAIN THESE CHARACTERS ARE NOT MY'N THEY ARE DISNEY'S OR GREATMARTA'S! GO CHECK OUT HER STORY IF YOU STUMBLE UPON THIS CHP. GO TYPE IN BAMBI 3 THE WAY OF THE DEER. THIS IS A UNCANON STORY.
Alright there will be a part 4, I don't know when but soon. There maybe a part 5 having to do with Ronno, and his son, or Roga will be in part 4, and Ronno maybe briefly. I haven't wrote 4 yet so it will be awhile. If you had already reviewed PM me to.
I will explain the birthday's and ages later, as in more detail. Prob. in part 4.
I can't wait for 4! So exciting.
Authors Note: Here's (Not yet) Part 4, I'll tell you what and everything on what I have been doing. This 4th part has been an as* kicking in mine; I'm so sorry that I have been gone for so long, and I may have to go back on chp.6 to chp.4. I have been depressed, fixing up this freakin pain in my as*. The Depression messed me up while writing, and I have to say I put my own emotions into this.
If you guys see some messed up parts plz let me know, I have re-written over and over, I covered a lot of it. OH BTW I have also been playing video games a lot so theirs my own fault besides depression.
Ok lets clear this up I'm doing better now, grades came up-ish "he-ha". I have some great news, I have promoted two people to help with the story. Del-spooner is now my Co-author and Sky-the-white-dragon is my Beta-reader.
Go check their stories out, it will be very appreciated to them. To get to them change the search settings from story to writer and type their names. If you can't find them PM me for their links. (I would put that in if the Doc. manger would let me.)
Bad news (Not involving me.) Del-spooner had a seizure, I will not shed to much light on this much as I can, but plz go to his story and spam it up. He deserves (a lot) some attention from yous guys. Again check his stories out.
After chp.4 to the people I promise to adv. their stories, I will but this will take a while and my story will not be updated for a while. I'm sorry for the promise of chp.5-6, can't do it at the min.
Now you guys are all like, whats with the long Authors note, well I'm explaining the story now, so sit back and relax. Ok we left off with Bambi and Lato leaving, ya-yad-yad. So Lato is now being trained. BTW pay close attention to this chp. I have put tons of very hidden references in here, and "sneak peeks" of what you could call it to what I'm planning for the next two chps.
It will take a complete Genius to assume all the correct guesses, so don't put yourself down if you can't get it all. NOW onto the story!
UPDATE OF 1/8/2015: If you guys are reading this author note, I decided to leave it here cause I'm lazy :P. That and I wanted to tell you guys. I'm sorry for such a messy author notes, don't mean it. Part4 is not here yet like I said. I have some spoilers for you guys that I owe.
SPOILERS: Alright if spooner finds out about this he may kill me XD. Spooner is alright know guys, he is working on a new story. I'll be helping with it, so stay tuned. :D
Spoiler: This is a sad one, if you guys aren't reading our bio. plz do. Cause they tell you whats going on. k? Ok. Ummm... Oh yeah. For the sad spoiler, spooner is taking down Bambi: A life in the forest. BUT good news its not going to be gone forever. Their will be a re-do version of it :D. He felt like (somewhat of me, if you were paying attention :P) it was "rushed". In my opinion some of it was but it was still better than mine. You guys need to give him more credit than me, cause I'm a bad author. (And its the truth.)
Well this is it for the author note of right now. Part 3 wil be worked on, and part 4 will be a lot better. I promise that. I'm not doing an instant updates anymore, cause of my rushing and stuff... See you guys on part 3 and 4.