I started to think people hated my story 'cause while I checked the reviews every 5minute not much people reviewed and I even tried to change my summary. And started to feel like quitting, then after watching a show and thinking of the next chapter while playing basketball, I came back and saw the reviews and saw like saying I'm a good writer and I should make more and telling me it's a great chapter. I was like wow some people actually like my story XD! So thx alooot that really inspired me to write more! And sorry about the no voting thing 'cause i actually re-read the rules and they said Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc is not allowed. :(
*AT THE WATERFALL*
BRADY POV:
"Hey if you don't wanna swing over there you can just swim there if you want" Makinzie said sarcastically.
"Wh-which one is sa-safer?" I asked Makinzie while shaking.
"HA! There is no safe way at all on getting there, I'll be surprised if you actually stayed alive" Makinzie laughed. And she looked at me with my face that looked like I just saw a ghost.
"Kidding! Kidding! Kinda…" Makinzie said. Yeah that didn't help me one bit! I looked down again took a deep, deep, deeeeep breath. I stepped closer to the waterfall and held the rope tightly. I looked down. Then I was about to jump. I looked down again. Then I was going to jump. I did that for like 8 times till Boomer started to yell at me. I tried my best to stall so I don't have to jump
"Okay this maybe my last day, if anything is gonna happened to me! REMEMBER KINKOW I AM KING BRADY THE ALL POWERFUL AND THE ADO-" Before I could finish my awesome speech Makinzie pushed me! I was screaming like it was the last scream I'll ever have. Then at the bottom of the lake was a tree with the Golden Apple! The tree almost hit me but I dodged it and grabbed the Apple as fast as I could. After that I felt soo proud of myself!
"YEEAAAAAAAAHHHH! I DID ITT! WHO'S THE MAAN!" I said proudly looking back at Boomer and Makinzie who were giving me signals to move or something? Then when I looked in front me, I saw a huge tree. Then this time I actually got hit by a tree, it was a good thing I landed at the soft ground. I was so bruised, so Makinzie and Boomer came over to help me out.
*Brady, Boomer, & Makinzie went back to the throne room.*
BRADY POV:
After that I had one small cut at my cheek not too far from my eye, it was bleeding a bit, but I thought no one would notice. Suddenly Mikayla came and looked at my face and saw the small damage.
"What happened?" Mikayla said sarcastically.
"Am…just you know the extreme stuff…you wouldn't know" I said with a smirk.
"Yeah right, that's probably paint or something" Mikayla said as she went closer to get a better look, then she tried to wipe it away with her left hand thinking it was fake.
"OUCH!" I screamed as I grabbed her left hand and tried to pull it away before she makes it worst. I unexpectedly accidently slowly pulled her closer to me instead, while I was still in pain ; it made her right hand place on my shoulder, as I was still holding her left hand. Then the pain just disappeared. Then we were face to face and I just paused. I never thought our faces could be this close to each other. I a saw sparks fly! Suddenly I felt like time stopped, actually I felt like the whole world stopped spinning, every second felt like a minute. I didn't know what to say as she was staring at me. All I can hear was my heart beating and all I could feel was the island wind. Boomer and Makinzie were there, but I felt like it was only me and Mikayla. We gazed into each other's eyes. My eyes were burning but I couldn't look away, her eyes shined like stars. We looked at each other yet no emotion came, we didn't smile or frown. We were both speechless…
MAKINZIE POV:
I got so giddy, but tried to hide it by having the biggest and annoying smile and my eyebrows were raising. I was screaming in the inside because I never seen a 'moment' like this, especially because it was my favorite cousin ever! And a king! And they were just romantically looking at each other! OMG soooo exciting!
"Whaat are theey doing? Did they just get hit by a freeze ray?" Boomer whispered to me.
"SHHHHH! I think there about to kiss!" I said slapping his shoulder hundreds of times with both of my hands trying to get him to shut up.
They stayed like that for like 10 seconds even if Boomer and I were talking… until
Authors note: I hope the Brakayla scene isn't so bad LOL Oh and I hoped you like the tittle haha get it? Water fall Falling...