thank you 2 people for those reviews on my punctuation and all that stuff which probably explains why im getting E's and D'sin english but i dont get why, i speak fluent english well time to end the corny comedy and start the story
They all get into Wakka's hut and sit down as yuna attends to tidus who got hit a few times
"Yuna im ok really" he said while trying to get Yuna from worrying over him
"are you sure because that seems pretty bad" she says in a worried voice as she stands behind himthen Tidus searches around his body and sees a blood stain on the side of his jacket, so he takes it off and looks at the inside of it to see alot of blood so he gets up and puts his back to a mirror and looks at it to see a big and deep cut down his back and looks at Yuna and sighs in defeat then lays on his stomach
"fine go ahead" and while Yuna starts healing him after chnging to white mage dressphere. Wakka looks over to auron who seems to be staring at his hand
"yo Auron whats up?" then auron looks at wakka and gets up
"im going for a walk" he says as he grabs his sword.
Auron leans on the railings on thebridge beside the waterfall staring at the square object then feels a hand on his back he then turns to see a smiling Rikku
"so hows it going Auron" she says as she leans the railing next to Auron and Auron doesn't answer "so whats that" she says pointing at the square object
"dont know but it has some writing on the back" Auron says puzzled
"well let me see" she says jumping and he hands it to her "mama kono mono shuueki tame za tsuchi o za okumatte shima zanin tame tsuchi dearou gein za haburi zakatachidzukuru kagirinaisenshiyori ankoku" Rikku then looks at Auron puzzled and gives the object back to him, she turns around "well im of back" shethen walks of then Auron hearsa scream and grabs his sword and runs to where he heard it, the way Rikku went he then sees Rikku layed out on the floor and he looks up to see a man in a hooded robe
"what did you do" Auron says with anger building up as he tends to her and the man just laughs then Auron attacks him but he repels it with nunchuks he then hits Auron with them but Auron blocks then Auron slashes at him but he dodges and hits Auron in his back then his right arm a few times before Auron strikes at him cutting his robe down his stomach, the man then sidewards flips to his left while leaving a black aura and lands on his feet then forward flips and half way through lands on his left arm and then pushes off and jump high into the air then spins and comes down fast and stops in air while still spinning and repeatedly hits Auron with the nunchuks then Auron goes flying back wards into the entrance of the village from the force and the object came out of his pocket and next to Auron.The man walks towards Auron and grabs it but Auron grabs his arm then punches him in the face and the man walks back holding his face then puts his left foot forward and beds his knees and extends his arm with the nunchuks so the end faces Auron, then an energy ball comes out of the nunchuks and hits Auron which forces him over the wall into the village and the gang come out with their weopons to see what happened and see Auron layed out on the floor and they run to him
"Auron whats going on?" Tidus asked
"wheres Rikku" Yuna says worried then Auron points to the hole the flying creature made before outside the entrance as the man drops the object into it then covering it with dirt then a black aura starts to build up from it then it turns blue and absorbs itself into the man then he stares at the gang then raises his arm and 50 dark warriors rise from the floor and charge at the village
"Rikku is outside the entrance knocked out" Auron says while getting up then the gang prepare for battle
what do you think about the story and heres a challenge try to find out what it said on the back of the object (the foreign languange part) and put it in your reply or in an e-mail or summet. review plz