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hey I'm really sorry about the REALLY LOOOONG wait its just I've been really busy with school and I started a few new books so I had no time to update but again I'm soooooo sorry about the really long wait BTW I think I'm going to start making a precise day of the week to update, what do you think? what day do you think I should update? and I have one more thing to apologize about it's my spelling, grammar and punctuation I was rereading the chapters I wrote and I realized I had so many errors so I might go back and fix all that because I personally hate when authors make mistakes in their writing but were all human...hopefully if you have any questions about the past chapters please ask me I'll be happy to reply I know this author's note has been pretty long but I really wanted to say this and again soooooo sorry!
"Tris tris," Christina says "what sorry" "I've been trying to get you too talk for six hours there only one more hour then the party starts,"
TRIS POV
I turned to see that Christina was already dressed in a tight black strapless knee length dress and some black 5 inch pumps her make up and hair was also done, her make up was very light witch surprised me a bit and her hair was simply straight it was not much but she made it look like a lot "you look great"! I exclaimed standing up "thanks, as do you," she replied handing me a bag "what's this"? I asked looking and the brown paper bag "dauntless cake, eat quickly," she said turning me around so I could see my hair it was let out and curled into loose waves. It was different because of how I rarely curled it "I know you want to admire yourself and all but you need to eat or you wont be able to tear it up on the dance floor"! she exclaimed with a huge grin "okay Christina, what ever you say," I said smiling at her then I started eating
*** time laps***
we slowly walked until we found the spot the party was being held "I'm so excited," i exclaimed as we walked into the big room full of moving body's i observed the room there was a DJ right across the dance floor and a few long tables with food and punch on them there also was a few chairs set up but nobody was on them except one person I slowly made my way over only to see...
Cliffy, sorry this was a pretty short chapter and i know i have been gone for awhile but i will try to get another one posted tomorrow or soon and can you guys please review to tell me if this was good or not because i was gone for awhile and my judgment is a bit clouded i promise next time i will make a longer chapter