Hey guys, not really a chapter but i would like to thank for the great criticism, because of this i'll be doing a rewrite of the chapters, and see how i can change things differently. I will also go back and check grammar and structure as well. Because of this I'll be taking more time to update, but your suggestions mean a lot. I know what i need to do now, and what I'm doing good.

Thanks to FranticSnivy and St Elmo's Fire, I'll look at others books and how they do things, I know my book is similar to other books, but i do plan on changing it a lot and making plot twist as well. If it's not much to ask I hope you can give me more advice later on, this is my first time writing pokemon fic, i love the anime and manga a lot, i've watched all the shows and read fics about them. So what do you suspect from this book, what do you expect for me?

Other than that thank you so much for telling me what i did wrong and what i can do to fix it! I prefer suggestions then simple comments like "it was good" it helps bring my confidence up and make me a better writer too! Thanks again and I'll talk to you all later.