It took me a little more to make a new Chapter, but here I am writing a new Chapter.
So here it goes...
Italic thinking or quoting
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu jutsu
Demon speaking
Chapter 3- Shinigami's gift
"What the..." ,but he didn't finish the sentence. Kyubi had his mouth on the ground and the eyes widened at maximum. " It can't be... It ... can ... not... be possible " Kyubi stuttered. He then sighed and sighed and after a few minutes he cleared his thoughts. " So... he's the one you were talking about... ". Kyubi smirked and turned to the back of his cage. " A new era will soon begin. Can't wait to see how it will all turn " he said and fell asleep.
Several hours later
"What the fuck happened?! ... I only remember falling into that waterfall and moreover why do my eyes hurt like hell?!" asked Naruto as he got back to his feet. "Why are my eyes burning!?"
" Calm down brat! Take a look at your eyes. " told him Kyubi. Then Naruto moved to the bank of the river and saw his eyes. "What the hell happened to my eyes!? Where are my blue eyes?! What's with these purple eyes?! That's why I felt them burning, isn't it?". " Ugh ... would you calm down already?! Those eyes are called the Rinnegan and the only one known to have ever possessed those eyes was only Rikudo Sennin. " told him Kyubi. " You mean the founder of ninja world as it is now? I'm so awesome!" talked Naruto as he started jumping around, forgetting the pain in his eyes and the fact that he nearly died . " What a cheeky and energeticbrat " thought Kyubi chuckling.
Meanwhile, all this time with Jiraiya
"It can't be possible! There's no way Naruto could die! He went through tougher times with the civilians. He also got Kyubi and Kyubi should have healed his wounds! So there's no way he could have died, unless ...
Flashback, training with Jiraiya before the finals of the Chunin
"So he has a very very bad chakra control... I think Orochimaru-teme might have helped the situation." thought Jiraiya."Brat come here!"called Jiraiya. "Wasn't I supposed to do the water walking exercise?!" huffed Naruto. "Well that can wait. This is a trusting exercise. Take your shirt off. Good. Now channel some chakra around your stomach. Good." " Well here is the Eight Trigrams Seal. Indeed a true piece of art, Minato. Just as expected from you. Really the strongest seal. The spiral keeps Kyubi's chakra and also his huge amount of hatred, while the 8 symbols are the 8 paths of chakra that pass through the stomach. They also serve as a way to combine Kyubi's chakra with his chakra, but also serve as a sponge for Kyubi's hatred. However, thinking about Kyubi's huge hatred, this sponge is quite useless. Well wait ...What the hell is that Five Elements Seal doing there anyways?! I don't really remember Minato adding another seal! Wait... ugh fuck! This is Orochimaru's doing! It's blocking the chakra from getting out of the seal and also disturbing the kid's chakra control. No wonder he had so bad chakra 's get rid of it!" thought Jiraiya as he removed the seal. "OUCH! THAT HURT ERO-SENNIN! What was that for?" asked Naruto as he held his stomach in pain. "Eh , well nothing" "Still disturbing the seal this way, will still block Kyubi's chakra from being used at a higher level then let's say summoning Gamabunta four times for about another three weeks I say. Let's hope nothing bad happens by then." thought Jiraiya as Naruto went back to water walking training succeedingat his first try.
Flashback end
Oh no! That might have been a big , big problem! Then the possibility of him being dead stands... BUT NO! He can't be dead!" thought Jiraiya running at full speed towards Valley of the End.
Back with Naruto
"I'm so hungry! I need to find very fast a village where I can eat so after that I can go back to Konoha" talked Naruto, as he started running along the river at medium speed, but as soon as made three steps , he fell to the ground in huge pain. "Oh fuck! I can't move! So for now I need to find a place to hide-out near this spot and rest. The pain won't let me even make a step so I should rest first. But I can't see any place near me where I can hide without being spotted. I am so unlucky today!". "Kit, get behind that waterfall. I know it hurts like hell , but that spot seems the only plausible place where you can hide and rest for now. " Kyubi told Naruto. Naruto nodded and got back to his feet with huge pain. " But Kyubi the river is too big and the waterfall and the flow are too strong for how weak I am , so I won't even get close to the waterfall without dying." realized Naruto. " Wow! Wow! You started thinking brat, what the hell happened?! " teased Kyubi. "Fuck you furball!" huffed Naruto. " Ow I didn't knew you were homosexual! Or at least interested in making sex with fox " teased Kyubi a little more. " I wasn't meaning it that way!" growled Naruto.
" Whatever brat. Now get to the edge of the waterfall. Good. Now time to use (again) one of the Rinnegan powers. Hold your arms in front of you and concentrate a medium size of Chakra. I know you're already low on Chakra, but you don't have any other chance. Now imagine everything being blown away in front of your hands "
"Shinra Tensei!" yelled Naruto without his own will. Immediately the water was blown away , showing for 3 seconds a very large cave behind the waterfall, leaving Naruto just enough time to jump behind the waterfall into the cave.
"What THE HELL was that!?" asked Naruto with his jaw on the ground.
"I have just told ya! One of rinnegan's specific powers. " answered Kyubi.
"Ok...?!" he said right before he dropped to the ground unconscious due to the Chakra use and the immense pain in his body.
"I think we've forced that a little bit too much. Anyways, now he'll have just enough time to recover. Though I have a feeling he won't return to Konoha."Right that moment, Naruto's stomach made a funny noise. " Let's hope e won't die because of his hunger " laughed Kyubi inside his cage.
During the following three days, naruto laid there on the ground unconscious. Unknown to Naruto and Kyubi, the awakened rinnegan caused this tiredness of naruto, so that the rinnegan could work now on his features. So during these three days , Naruto's chakra signature was changed ( This is the reason why during these three days, Jiraiya who was constantly searching for Naruto along the river couldn't actually find him), the chakra reserves , that were already jonin level, were increased to somewhere near Kage level, giving him perfect chakra control, his hair has grown and became more spiky, giving him the looks of Rikudo Sennin (except his whisker marks).
After these three days
Jiraiya returned to Konoha with his head between his legs. He entered the Hokage Mansion , of course through the window, 'cause Jiraiya isn't the type to use a door.
" Tsunade-hime ... I failed. Though I won't stop searching for him, it is quite clear that he's dead. According to Sasuke, he died after his Chidori strike and fell into the water , so his body might have reached the ocean, so we might never retrieve his body. I've looked anywhere for his chakra signature, but found nothing. I can't believe it turned out to this..."told Jiraiya
" I hoped he was still alive somewhere, but if neither you nor Kakashi found him ... I guess it can't be helped. The council is meeting today." the Hokage answered.
"So, what are you going to do?" asked Jiraiya.
"I guess we have to declare him dead" answered Tsunade rubbing her temples, holding back her tears. After all he was the main reason she accepted being Hokage. "Kami! Why him too? I guess Hashirama-jiji's necklace was filled with too much bad luck. It's better for it to be on the bottom of the ocean than killing even more men. I hoped that the necklace will remain on the bottom of the ocean, but not along with Naruto ... "
"I can't even look at your face Minato, I deserve every punch you'll throw at me after my death." thought Jiraiya looking at the floor.
Hours later, at the council meeting
"Has Jiraiya-sama found the boy?" asked one of the clan heads.
"Unfortunately, no. His body might never be retrieved, but i guess one thing is clear ..." answered the Hokage making a long pause.
"And that would be?" Asked everybody at the same time.
"He's dead" answered Tsunade. The Shinobi Council was silenced by her words, because they all knew the boy stopped Ichibi from destructing half of the village. But, on the other hand, the rest of the council , consisted of civilians looked as happy as they could throw a party right there right at that moment. "THE DEMON'S GONE!" they yelled being as happy as they could be.
"SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU IDIOTS!" yelled Tsunade silencing them. "He was the one who stopped Ichibi from destroying the whole village. He even stopped and brought back your precious Uchiha!"
"But he beat him to death! Only by luck Sasuke's not dead now! That Demon should have died so long ago!" a random villager said.
"Yes! I bet he didn't even stop Ichibi. I heard Sasuke was there too. That Demon didn't do anything. The Uchiha was the one who saved us!" another random villager said and all the other villagers nodded.
" SHUT UP! Whether you like it or not , he's one of the village's heros, so his name will be written on the Memorial Stone!" yelled Tsunade
"No way that Demon's name will be written on the memorial stone! We should vote!" yelled one villager.
"Ok. Who's for writing his name?" All the shinobi except Hiashi raised their hands. "Oh no... it won't go well." "Who's against?" All the villagers raised their hands. So the elders and Hiashi weren't neither against nor for.
"Looks like we won! His name won't be written!" smirked the civilians.
"There's no fucking way..." huffed Tsunade. "I thought Hiashi won't raise his hand...I'm so so so so sorry Naruto. I can't even get his name on the Memorial Stone... I'm so ashamed of my self. Is this the village we all loved ?" thought Tsunade thinking about the loved ones.
"And now let's talk about Sasuke's punishment" told Tsunade, trying her best not to go nuts and hit everything in her way.
"Punishment for what?" the civilians raised their eyebrows.
"The punishment for betraying the village!" yelled Tsunade.
"But he didn't betray the village! He was under the effect of Orochimaru's Cursed Seal" one random civilian told.
"As far as I know Sasuke didn't have his Cursed Seal fully activated. It was activated after he fled from Konoha. And before he fled, Kakashi sealed the Cursed Seal so that it wouldn't affect him" answered the lazy Shukaku.
"Yes. Let's vote." told Tsunade.
"I propose he'll stay a week in Konoha's prison, the next one week arrested at his home, training won't be allowed and for the following month he'll be on probation period, with two Anbu constantly with him. But this punishment, after he gets out of the hospital. By the way, how long is he going to stay in hospital?" asked Danzo.
"Two more weeks." answered Tsunade.
"Is he alright?" asked the civilians.
"Yeah ... we healed most of his wounds. But he will still have to rest and recover. He is unconscious at the moment" answered Tsunade.
"That demon... nearly killed the last Uchiha" huffed one civilian as the other started to complain also.
They next voted Danzo's suggestion. The shinobi except Hiashi and the elders voted for and the civilians, all voted against.
"So Danzo's suggestion will be applicated. We will hold the funeral for the boy later" said Tsunade.
"Funeral for the Demon? We should hold a carnival, not a funeral!" a random civilian said and the others agreed.
"You idiots..." stuttered Tsunade.
Later, a little funeral was held for the boy, because only a few people came, the ones who knew Naruto for who he was, not for who he held: Kakashi, Sakura holding Sasuke in her arms so that he could stand, the Hokage, Jiraiya, Kurenai and her team, Asuma and her team, some of the clan heads and a few shinobi who saw Naruto fighting Ichibi. Everyone , except Jiraiya, Tsunade and Kakashi, was wondering, why was his grave next to Minato Namikaze's. Also everyone was wondering why Sasuke wanted so much to come to the funeral (they all saw the way he was acting and wondered about this sudden change of actions). Everyone held flowers in their hands, and each one of them neared the grave and told Naruto how much they cared about him.
Sakura: "I'm so sorry you died. I can realize now that you really were a true ninja. No matter what happened, you really never went back on your words... I hope someday I'll become a true ninja like you, except the part with being a baka all the time" she thought as she chuckled a bit at the last part.
Sasuke: " I'm such an idiot. I wonder... Naruto, I really acted this way all the time? I'm wondering if you were the Dobe or I. I'm so sorry I killed you, I'm so ashamed just by looking at your empty grave. You were right, I was in darkness for too long and it was a bad thing. Now that you opened my eyes with your death I can realize a lot of things that I ignored. I clearly remember Itachi crying right before he left, I remember that even though he was cold looking and speaking, I could clearly see his body shaking. I swear I'll find the truth. I'm sorry it came up to this... You were indeed my best. Thank you Naruto..."
Kakashi: "Sensei, Obito, I feel so ashamed of myself. I failed so bad that I'm ashamed even to come at the Memorial Stone. I can't forgive myself for being so blind and idiot. If I hadn't been so stupid, he would have lived now.
Right at that moment, with Shinigami
"You , humans, can be so idiots at certain times!" told Shinigami
"I know, Shinigami-sama. I'm so ashamed of my self that Naruto went through this much. If I were now in the village, I would kill all the civilians." answered Minato.
"Wrong! I'm the one who will kill them all dattebane!" answered a very angry Kushina.
" So disgraceful!" told Hashirama and Tobirama.
"I know... I was to old... I couldn't do too much" came a beaten, younger form of Sarutobi.
"You want round 2 or what Sarutobi!?" asked an even more angrier form of Kushina.
"No no no..." gulped Sarutobi.
"Calm down!" yelled Shinigami "It is very interesting that he awakened the rinnegan. If he brings you back, I'll give him a gift." told Shinigami as he faded away.
"What was that supposed to mean?" they all asked at the same time.
Back at the funeral
All except Tsunade and Jiraiya told their last words. As the shinobi began to leave, the only ones who stayed were Kakashi, Jiraiya, Tsunade, Shikamaru and Sasuke who stood on the ground right in front of the grave.
" Shikamaru, are you ok?" asked Tsunade a shaking form of Shikamaru.
" I ... I ... don't deserve to be chunin. It's my fault. Because of me, he died..." answered Shikamaru.
" Calm down Shikamaru! It's not your fault! It's my fault, I've been reckless." answered Kakashi.
" No Kakashi, we all have our fault, not only you..." told Jiraiya.
" However, the biggest fault is mine" Sasuke answered.
They all widened their eyes. "What has happened to him? I bet something happened at the Valley of the End between them. Maybe Naruto told him something " thought Kakashi.
"Tell me ..." Shikamaru caught their attention. " I have noticed something. His grave is right next to Yondaime's. I haven't thought about it before, but Naruto , except his whisker marks, looks the same as Yondaime Hokage. Is Naruto his son?"
Sasuke widened his eyes as he realized that Shikamaru was right. "So you finally have figured it out. It's curious that he didn't find out earlier, but considering he's so lazy.I guess it's no reason to hide this fact anymore" both Tsunade and Jiraiya thought.
"Yes. " answered Kakashi.
" But if he's Yondaime's son, why did you hide the fact from anyone and moreover why is he hated so much by anyone in the village?" asked Shikamaru.
" First, if everyone had known that Naruto is Yondaime's son, Iwa who hates Minato with passion would have tried to killed or kidnap Naruto. Second, Bijus can not be killed, so Minato did the next best thing, he sealed it in his son." answered Tsunade.
"So Kyubi is sealed in Naruto?!" asked Sasuke. "So that's where the red chakra came from..." "But why his own son?"
"That's a question only Yondaime himself can answer , but I guess he trusted his son to be the only one strong enough to master the power and to stand the hatred" answered Kakashi.
A few hours later
Kakashi took Sasuke back to the hospital, Shikamaru walked back home and Tsunade went to the Hokage Mansion leaving Jiraiya alone in the graveyard.
"I still got a feeling that you're alive. I won't give searching." said Jiraiya as he left the graveyard.
Back with Naruto
Naruto slowly woke up and got back slowly to his feet.
"Ugh... How long I was out? Ugh... I'm so fucking hungry!" told Naruto. " Three days brat... Three days ". "WHAAAT!? I should get out of the cave and search for a village and a place where I can eat... and fast"
He walked towards the waterfall. " Shinra Tensei " he yelled and jumped out of the cave next to the waterfall. He started running along the river for about three hours , but the night came , so he made a fire and eat some fish and then fell asleep next to a tree.
Inside Kyubi's cage
" I still can't get over the fact that he's got the rinnegan " talked Kyubi particularly to no one.
" Me too" came a voice behind the fox.
"Who talked?!" asked Kyubi as he turned around looking for the source of the voice
"Nobody. Take the brat to Whirpool Country, in the Uzukage Mansion, in the Vault and tell him to search for a black scroll. Make sure he doesn't return to Konoha." the voice told Kyubi.
" Why? Who are you? " asked Kyubi, but the answer didn't come. " So it left. I think I heard that voice before... But when ...? where ... ? "
Next morning
Naruto woke up with a bad headache. He started running along the river and after six hours he reached the ocean. "Waaaait a second ... I want to go back to Konoha, so ... why am I running in the opposite direction?" realized Naruto. " Uh so you finally realized? " asked the fox lazily in his cage. " WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME EARLIER!? " yelled Naruto. " Calm down brat! I was wondering how long would it take you to realise... " answered Kyubi. " I swear I'm so gonna... Wait! I recognise that bridge! So I'm close to Wave Country! I guess I can make Izuna and the others a short visit." he said as he started to run towards the bridge. " "Great Naruto Bridge" I can't believe they named the bridge after my name! I'm so awesome!" he said as he started running towards the Wave country.
In front of Tazuna's house.
"Naruto ...? It's really ...you?!" asked Tazuna with his eyes widened at maximum.
"Yes! It's really me!" answered a smiling Naruto
"You're alive?!" answered Tazuna.
"If I'm here , I think I'm alive"
"Everybody thought you were dead!"
"Really?"
"Yes... back in Konoha you were declared dead and the village is full of parties and carnivals. They are very happy that the village doesn't have you anymore. They didn't even write your name on the memorial stone. They broke into your apartment burned your house and wrote on the walls 'The Demon is gone'. All the villages know about that and , they're all disgusted about their actions. Wave Country and Tea Country even broke their alliances with Konoha. We think sooner or later the other countries will do the same"
"What ... ? They hate me so much ...? "
"Yes... That village truly doesn't deserve you. But anyways, are you hungry? You look very tired! Let's get inside" told Tazuna as they entered the house.
Aaaand ... cut! Phew! This time I made the chapter longer. Sorry for the spelling, grammatic or logic mistakes.
I have just read the last manga chapter and I saw Minato saying something about a gift he intends to give Naruto. What's he talking about? The other half of Kyubi's chakra ?
'till next time!
