A Question for the Readers.
Hey guys well first off I just wanted to say thanks for all the reviews so far and I appreciate all the feedback, both good and bad.
After reading some of the reviews for this story I have come to the conclusion that perhaps I went about doing things the wrong way. I have received a few Private Messages asking about having Kal or Clark takes Shepard's place or even have him actually being Shepard.
I must admit that I did think about doing that but there were a few problems along the way when I was putting the concept for this story together. Mainly that having a super powered alien from a galaxy far far away in the human military. Bringing Kal in as one of Shepard's associates seemed like the most logical approach to solve this problem.
The other issue was that when coming up with the concept for this story I wanted to do it based around a world where Clark never became Superman. Having him being buried alive along with Doomsday seemed like a way around it. The other idea I did think about was having Jor-El trap him in the fortress again like he did in season seven before Bizarro returned.
In the long run no matter how I put Clark/Kal into the Mass Effect Universe there were always going to be problems as the two universes don't really mix that well. The biggest problem being that Clark/Kal is way too powerful and as one review stated he could pretty much wipe out all the Reapers himself.
So anyway my question is should I continue writing this story as it is, or should I go back and start it again but this time having Kal and Shepard as the same person. If I do it that way I could use some help for doing a back story on Clark/Kal as to how he could be part of the human military without them knowing that he's a super powered alien from a galaxy far far away.
The other thing I was thinking about was doing a crossover between Mass Effect and Heroes. When I originally came up with the concept of doing a crossover with Mass Effect I did think about doing one with Peter Petrelli taking on the role of commander Shepard. If I had done this though I would have done it so that his original powers got restored after he lost them. And since Peter would pretty much be immortal he would have had to have changed his identity at some point allowing him to take on the name of Shepard. Also while he is extremely powerful he is still essentially human.
So anyway let me know what you think. Either leave a comment in the review section or send me a private message.
Anyway as I said at the beginning, thanks to those of you who have been reading this so and thanks to those who have left reviews as well. I do appreciate your honesty and feedback given so far.