So the 3rd chapter has arrived. I for some reason could not reply to the reviews this may be because I am doing it on iPad however I'm not sure. I'm spending more time on this one to make it perfect, I'm not the most experienced writer, I'm barely in my teens so advice is always welcome enjoy everyone and remember ideas shall be used if I believe they are good if not in this story then in one of the next. Also a big thank you to neo Tyson the founder of this community for giving advice I shall try to make this longer.
well my iPad being the prick it is won't go outta bold sorry :/
A weary Peter rose from his bed slowly and slightly demonically as if he and the Undertaker were one. Today he had a date with miss "Great Personality" and he got up earlier than usual to get ready for his date. He didn't really know why he bothered with miss "Great personality" but he guessed it was something to do with Gwen and to see if he was just lucky with her. Gwen...Gwen... He still, after all she said loved her but (bold has gone off now) another woman kept coming into his head, Black cat just thinking off her perfect body made him drool, her presence alone enough to make a man happy for weeks. Her starlight eyes were so beautiful Helen of Troy would be green with envy and her teeth were so shiny you'd swear that you saw your own reflection in them but wouldn't truly notice or care as she would just make you turn your attention to her no matter what you were doing. Mother Nature herself would bow down to the beautiful ferociousness of the Black cat. Her claws sharp as swords but her tone so soft tender and seductive you wouldn't notice the pain her claws inflict if you were conversing with her. 'Snap out of it Pete' his conscious told him. He decided to take today off as a super hero considering there were many other heroes and his current levels of distraction would more hinder than help the civilians. He showered and again she entered his mind plaguing him with images of her, she's all that mattered to him now but she was a villain and he a hero, they couldn't be together."maybe she could reform." He whispered so quiet he could barely hear himself. He went to the mall, trying to find something for his date with miss "Great personality" he chuckled to himself, he still couldn't get round the fact he agreed. As Jonah said she was rich she was was likely very classy, not wanting to look cheap he picked up a white suit blazer and white pants with a red shirt, he wanted to keep the top 2 buttons open and decided against a rather cliche tie. He had 6 hours left till the date and decided to take his best friend Harry to the florists with him as Harry had experience with the prep girls." Pete get her two of everything that way you can't go wrong" Harry said thinking of it as a genius idea " Harry I can't afford that, I barely had enough for the suit and even if I could what if she was allergic to a kind" questioned Peter in a desperate voice."I'll pay for you and if she is she will be too overpowered by the gesture to even care." Retorted Harry. " Harry you know I can't make you pay!" Exclaimed Peter bot wanting anyone's charity, even Harry's. "I'm gonna pay or else I'm gonna tell everyone what you and that tranny did last Christmas." Harry threatened chuckling at the thought."You wouldn't dare!" Said Pete in a unsure and weak voice.
A few hours later a slicked up Pete arrived at the le sacre bleu restaurant courtesy of Harry's limo driver. " I'll call you when you need to pick me up Leonard, and give Harry my thanks!" And with that they bid adieu. Anxiety took over Peter as he walked to the door, each step feeling like one hundred. Then in the corner of his eye he saw a ravishing beauty! She had less body fat than a super model, and had the grace of a noble elf platinum blonde hair made you think the moon was in front of you! She was a goddess in all but status...
Jamison bellowed" Peter my boy meet Felicia Hardy." "H-h-hi the-these are f-for yo-you." Parker stuttered the words barely leaving his lips as he was mesmerised by her beauty. If black cat ever had a rival to the throne of sexiest thing alive, she was standing in front of him, she giggled at his expense her laughter a fair swap for the embarrassment he just suffered. " Hello mr Parker, these flowers are beautiful." Stated Felicia in a warm and familiar tone. " Not nearly as beautiful as you." He flirtatiously said to the young woman clad in all black, is animal instinct was kicking in he wanted her to be his! "Whatever happened to the bewildered timid boy that was here not 2 minutes ago may I ask?" She questioned rather teasingly. They laughed together before Felicia noticed something. "Excuse me Peter, but may I ask what happened to your chin?" her tender fingers touching the bruise where black cat kicked him. "I walked into a-a lamppost" he lied. " A lamppost you say?" She questioned rhetorically.
'Think Felicia think' she thought to herself. 'He is too familiar' she liked how the date was going thus far but she wanted to know where they met before.'wait that bruise,could he be spiderman?'
leonard drove Felicia to her home, just before she got out the car she said "Peter I enjoyed today thank you." She drew him closed and they kissed passionately and fiercely for a minute or two. She reluctantly released and they exchanged phone numbers."today was a good day whispered Peter replaying the events over and over
so it's done, next chapter will be spidey and cat so don't fret, remember to drop a review