Yes finally uploaded
Yes finally updated. I'm almost done with 3 other chapters.
I'm finally getting the hang of this, its getting quite longer and more longer and the image is getting better.
Still waiting for review's though
I also got request to have a femnaruhina pairing.
Since I did not get much, I inserted some events with them so I can adjust it easily later on future chapters.
P.S. harem won't work, it would likely make her whore. And I hate whores, gays and the likes.
DEMON – demonic voice, summons, etc
FLASHBACK – letters, flashbacks
THOUGHTS – thoughts (example:hahahaha)
JUTSU'S –obviously jutsu's (example : KAGE MANE NO JUTSU)
YELL – obvious as well
Normal – this as well
DISCLAIMER: I would not hope of it, the original owner won't let a pricy project such as Naruto of his/her hands
SUMMARY: Uzumaki Naruto has been adopted by Kakashi, apparently he's discovered his God Daughter is still alive.
C H 3 - A C A D E M Y
(3 years later)
Beep Beep Beep
Groaning, Natsumi rolled to her left, sleeping on her stomach with a pillow covering her head, unconsciously trying to ignore the noise.
Beep Beep Beep
SMASH!
She sheepishly sat up the bed, facing a drawer, pretty much expecting that she'd lose another clock, she took a spare at the drawer; looking at the time. She suddenly shot up, launching out of the bed and rushing to the shower. It was already 8:30 AM and she's got only 30 f#ck#n minutes to get ready… she made a mental note to kick her nii-san's (kakashi) ass for not waking her up.
She rushed to her bathroom and turned on the hot water, she let the drizzling water run through her hourglass figure, and picked up random shampoo and applied it to her long olden locks; she then went to her normal routine… she wore black and blue undershirt, dark green vest (like the chuunin vest), baggy cargo pants, kunai holder strapped in his waist and finally her signature blue mask before putting on her henge (Naruto henge does not actually have a mask on, just a few change in clothing, you get what I mean later on). He pretty much idolize his nii-san, except for the little precious orange book that kakashi tried to taint him to.
(FLASHBACK)
It was going to be her first time of celebrating her birthday with Kakashi, she was still quite terrified of what happened to her previous years and until today, and took every opportunity to stick close to her adoptive brother. They stopped in the middle of the road when Kakashi put his hands on her shoulder, they happened to come across some of Kakashi's close friends, namely Asuma and Yuuhi Kurenai whom was dating for about 2 months now along with the ever so active Maito Gai with the famous gai pose. Upon noticing them, she hid behind kakashi's right leg, she was not in her henge that time since it seemed to be a god idea so no one would nitice her, too bad it could not be done everyday since everyone would notice Naruto's sudden disappearance and she just happened to show up.
"Hey Kakashi, whose' the kid" Asuma, Kurenai, and Gai stared at kakashi and the little girl.
"Kakashi, Nooooooo! My eternal rival has become a pedophile; you lost your flames of youth"
Kakashi and the others just sweat dropped; nothing to say, he needed an excuse. He thought it would be a good opportunity for her to socialize with others aside from Kakashi and the old man, besides she was not in henge so it would rather be hard to make an excuse and took / more likely drag the three jounins to the corner and began to tell them everything including her impromptu change in the birthday plans. Luckily, none of them held a grudge: Sarutobi Asuma somehow inherited his father's understanding, Kurenai just thought of her as a cute and innocent little girl while Gai was just plainly too nice.
"Yosh!, my eternal rival's youth burns so brightly… I will run 500 times around Konoha" Gai said.
The others were pretty sure that his eyes burst into flames. "Uh, Gai, I don't think you would reach the party in time"
"Yosh, then I would do 1000 laps tomorrow using my hands with 100 pounds of weights on both my legs and arms"
(LATER THAT NIGHT)
Natsumi went home alone since they took too long, she looked for them and saw no one on the alley. She was crying all the way thinking, 'maybe nii-san did not want me'. She went to the front door of the apartment, much to her surprise there in front of her appeared Kakashi, the old man and the three strangers.
"Domo argato Hokage ojiji-san" she cried out louder and began giving warm embraces. Minutes of silence, eating, conversations. She excitedly began to pick her first present.
The first one was covered in all green gift wrap, she picked the card.
"From the very youthful green beast of konoha, Maitooo Gai!". She opened it revealing a pair of weights and a book 'Idiots guide to taijutsu. This gave the Kurenai and Asuma a confused look, they were hoping it to be a green spandex.
Kakashi pulled both of them, whispering "I was even lucky to stop gai from buying another set of spandex and make another clone of himself", they then went back to the group then saw now Natsumi with tears on her left eye.
"Natsu-chan, don't you like the gifts"
"Gomen Hokage-sama" Addressing the kage with respect for the very first time "its just that… its my first birthday I got to celebrate and with no one beating me to death".
They all felt pity except Kakashi and the kage whom was used to the situation. Kurenai then gave her a hug, "ok, how about we move on to the next present" she handed another gift to her. Natsumi assumed it was from her since the card says Kurenai which most certainly a girl's name, inside were several new clothes, red tank top's, sakura petal designed kimono's, and the last one looked like a smaller version of Kurenai's usual clothing, making her blush a bit.
"WellIWasThingkingOfHavingASisterWhenItPoppedintoMyMindSoIJustUnconsciouslyPickedItUpSinceItsSuchAShortNotice" Kurenai said the excuse in a fast manner, giving everyone even the so called genius kakashi a hard time to decipher.
They began to laugh at Kurenai's expense except Asuma whom knew he would be at hell later on if he did. They looked at the place where Natsumi should have been and panicked, she was no longer there and started to panic. Before thing got too far, they heard the door of her room open, Natsumi went out now wearing a red top with weird white medical tapes over her right shoulder to her waist. Kurenai could not stop it any longer
"KAWAII" she got her in a bone crushing hug
"ah.. ghh. Kurenai-san.. Arigato.. but.. I.. can.t ..breathe" she tried and succeeded to get out of her grasp, breathing heavily before reaching another gift.
The card says that this is from Asuma-san, she cancelled out everyone she know – leaving now only one other person she does not know, she opened it and hugging a recognizable pair of chakra blades.
Asuma walked to her "Natsu-chan, I knew you'd like it. Grandpa, uh I mean father here tipped me on the wind affinity of yours."
"Arigato Asuma-san, I've been trying to train with it and someone told me about blades, so I tried it with kunai which only got broke the blades" she giggled.
She then looked to the last 2 gifts. She was quite curious since one of it took a cylindrical shape, only few possible items would take such a shape. She then picked it up, read the letter.
"I'd also figure you'd need this"
From: Old man
She opened it, her eyes widened in surprise. It was a scroll with kanji for 'KAGE BUNSHIN JUTSU'. She isn't able to create a normal Bunshin because of her inhuman amount of chakra. Then smiled at her grandfather figure.
Lastly, she picked up Kakashi's gift. Kakashi let out a perverted giggle from under his mask while Kurenai, whom had a good idea on what's inside, glared at him.
Inside was the all so famous 'Icha Icha Paradise Volume 1', Natsumi opened the book to a random page before Kurenai forcefully closed and took the book while hitting Kakashi on the head forming his very own private mountain.
"What I'm just kidding" Kakashi said while in his head "cant blame a guy for trying". He reached to his kanai holder and took a small rectangular box and put it in her hands.
She got the gift, opening it is a set of blue masks.
(FLASHBACK KAI)
Naruto arrived earlier than he expected. He looked around the classroom, looking for a place to sit; he could either sit beside Sasuke or Hinata, of course he sat next to the Hyuuga, sure she had some serious confidence problems but she's not like the stuck-up, conceited, arrogant bastards as the last Uchiha or the Hyuuga's minus Hinata.
He sat next to her making her blush at bit, fidgeting more than she used to 'Her Naruto-kun was sitting next to her and looking at her' She had perverted thoughts
"Naruto-kun"
"Hime-chan" he pushed her to the wall, his hands on her waist pulling her face closer to a lip lock into a passionate deep kiss, which was rewarded by moans by both parties.
"Aishteru Naruto-kun" they now lay naked in her bed. He was already about to take her.
She was interrupted from her wonderful day dreams and snapped back to the real world. Noticing what just happened, her blood rushed to her head making her 23 shades of red that could make a tomato jealous as his nose was leaking out blood. Upon regaining her composure, as she wiped the blood off her nose and tried to stop herself from fainting; she was honestly doing a good job till she saw Naruto's face close to hers, trying to get her temperature… then the last thing that happened shocked everyone in class.
Hinata kissed Naruto whom just seemed to melt; but that was not the point, it was that their so called shy, sweet, weak, innocent Hinata made the f#ck#n first move, and in PUBLIC.
"Oh shit… Oh shit… Oh Shit… I'm gonna kill that so called mother of mine for passing me that tomboy genes of hers" Naruto thought
Now the whole class had a new interesting topic to gossip about, it was rather noisy as Iruka went to the room.
"QUIET" Iruka shouted with his signature bubble head jutsu (the one he uses to make his head bigger).
He then cleared his throat "Welcome to the genin exams, I would like to explain this briefly… the test is simple, I'd just have to test your capabilities. KAWARIMI, HENGE, and BUNSHIN JUTSU." He took a piece of paper, reading the list. "first is Yamanaka Ino". Ino walked up to perform the said jutsu.
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"Uchiha Sasuke"
" "
" "
Naruto fell asleep
"Uzumaki Naruto"
Naruto still did not budge
"NARUTO" Iruka shouted and threw a chalk at Naruto
"Uh. Don't kill me" Naruto said.
Iruka got a sad look, he is one of the few people who understand and acquainted him "ok now Naruto, come down here".
"Ok now Naruto, all you need to do are 3 jutsu's. First I want to KAWARIMI to the leg on my left." Iruka said as Naruto did a sealless KAWARIMI and reappeared beside Iruka with the log on Naruto's previous place. "Next, I want you to henge into me, and no jokes" Naruto was about to do OIROKE NO JUTSU or HAREM NO JUTSU, which could put Itachi's TSUKUYOMI to shame, when Iruka said the last part, besides he would not want to give everyone a preview of what's behind the mask, he made a last minute change in the seals; there was a puff of smoke and another Iruka appeared as the smoke cleared.
"Now for the last part. Do at least 3 Bunshin's" Iruka said while Mizuki was giving off an intense glare.
"Kyuu nii-san, what do you think of Mizuki sensei. Ive never seen him like this for the last 3 years since I was here"
"DO YOU THINK THAT I COULD READ MINDS, BUT STILL KEEP ON GUARD. HE SMELLS LIKE SNAKE."
"As for the BUNSHIN, I knew ojiji-san gave it for a reason… guess I'll have to thank him later"
"NOT NOW KIT, I DON'T THINK THAT MIZUKI HERE WANT'S YOU TO PASS. GO WITH THE FLOW AND JUST TRY AGAIN NEXT YEAR." Naruto gave a mental nod and closed the mental link.
Naruto made several hand seals of normal BUNSHIN. There beside him appeared 2 clones, which more or less looked like boneless disfigured bodies looking as if they were wearing black and white skins.
"YOU FAIL." Iruka
"Yeah, I guess I did." Naruto said "but that won't stop this from being HOKAGE"
A hand grabbed on to Iruka's shoulder "Iruka, maybe we could make an exception this time… after all, this is his second try" Mizuki stated.
"Mizuki, you know we can't pass anyone like that. It would be like sending them to a suicide mission." Iruka
(AFTER THE EXAM)
Naruto was just sitting in the swing in front of the academy, looking at the students being fetched by their parents. He heard them talking from there, thanks to the side effect of merging with Kyuubi.
"Hey look!" two girls glanced at Naruto's direction
"I heard he's the only one who failed"
"Suits him right, that's not even enough for what he done. Who in the right mind would even want that dem"
"Shh.. were not supposed to tell, remember"
Naruto was thinking deeply, even though he already knew about this. He did not know why he still is hurt by those words. He knew he also failed on purpose, he then ignored it about to walk away on the verge of tears. He felt a hand on his shoulder.
"Mizuki-sensei" Naruto said with a questioning tone
"Naruto, don't be hard on yourself. Iruka was just looking up to you"
"I understand sensei"
"Naruto, I feel bad for you so how about I let you in another secret… there is another way to pass to become a genin.
"What is it sensei"
"This is easier than I thought" Mizuki said to himself and whispered to Naruto
"Score, how stupid would anyone be to fall for something like this… that's why it's called FORBIDDEN scroll. Maybe I can use this as an advantage" he thought and nodded to his sensei.
(SCENE CHANGE)
Naruto was hopping from tree to tree and stopped at the clearing with a shed that Mizuki told him about. He then unrolled the huge scroll strapped on his back and began reading.
"KAGE BUNSHIN JUTSU" well I know that one already
"KUCHEYO SENO JUTSU: EDO TENSEI" sounds interesting
Name: KUCHEYO SENO JUTSU: EDO TENSEI
BANNED BY: Shodaime Hokage
REASON: use of human sacrifice, bending the laws of nature
TYPE: Supportive
REQUIREMENTS: high chakra reserve and control and retrieval of the body
DESCRIPTION: Resurrects the dead to the living giving the summoner full control unless decided not to
"Wow seems tempting; I have always wanted to see my dad. What a waste then, I don't have and cant use sacrifices" Naruto thought
"So much for that idea, now what's next: SHIKI FUUJIN, sounds like a seal jutsu"
NAME: SHIKI FUUJIN
BANNED BY: Sandaime Hokage
REASON: Sacrifices casters life
TYPE: Offensive
REQUIREMENT: High chakra reserve as well as control, high will, and mastery of seals
DESCRIPTION: summons the death god to take both caster and opponent's souls, and only used as last resort
"KIT, TRY TO LEARN AS MUCH OF THAT AS POSSIBLE… USE KAGE BUNSHIN TO SPEED IT UP"
"Why"
"IT'S THE SEAL THAT GOT ME TRAPPED IN HERE IN THE FIRST PLACE. MAYBE WE COULD TWEAK THE SEAL A LITTLE SINCE WE CANNOT DESTROY OR REMOVE IT WITHOUT BOTH OF US DYING" Naruto nodded and made several KAGE BUNSHIN.
(SEVERAL HOURS LATER)
"NARUTO" a figure in the branch shouted
"Iruka-sensei. You found me, I only learned one jutsu" he said with a Narutoish grin
"What do you thing your doing Naruto" Iruka
"What does it look like I'm doing, I learn a jutsu from this scroll then I pass the test" Naruto
"What, who told you that"
"Mizuki-sensei did"
"So Mizuki did this" Iruka thought. "Naruto, that scroll is forbidden. Mizuki used you"
Iruka heard several shurikens; he pushed Naruto the side as the projectiles pinned him to the shed.
"Naruto, give me the scroll" Mizuki
"Naruto, protect the scroll and run" Iruka said as he pulled the shurikens out.
"No Naruto don't be too hasty, you know why the village hates you" Mizuki
"No Mizuki, don't"
"Twelve years ago, the Yondaime sealed the Demon Fox in a new born baby. That baby is you, you are the Demon Fox who murdered several people, including Iruka's parents."
"Don't listen to him Naruto"
"That's right, even Iruka here hates you"
Chuckling "Do you think I don't know that, I mean how hard it would be to not notice a large seal over you stomach each time you apply or use chakra.". This pissed Mizuke enough to throw one of his fuuma shuriken while Naruto was off guard. Naruto waited for his death, though it never did come, he felt warm crimson liquid and watery substance on his face. He opened his eyes and saw Iruka-sensei in front of him with a large shuriken on his back, blood was coming out of his mouth, and his eyes were teary.
"Iruka-sensei, why"
"We are very much the same, I have lived alone. I know how you feel, I even became the village prankster just to gain attention. You're even lucky to be adopted by Kakashi, I won't let you lose that"
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Naruto ran through the forest as he was followed by Iruka.
"Naruto, hand me the scroll" Iruka said as he was tackled by Naruto
"How did you know I'm not Iruka" Mizuki dropped his HENGE
"Simple, because I'm Iruka" Iruka as well dropped his HENGE
"Why do you keep protecting the Demon, that Demon killed your parents and many others"
"Maybe your right… That Demon did do that" Iruka said, oblivious to Naruto who was listening to the conversation. Naruto was crying he was severely hurt by one of the people he consider closest. "But Naruto is not like that, he is a proud citizen and soon to be ninja of Konohakagure, the jailor of the Kyuubi no Kitsune"
"Well then, I was going to kill you later but your just plain annoying" He threw large wave of kunais and shurikens to Iruka.
"So this is the end for me now, huh" He waited for his death, he heard several metal clash. He opened his eyes to see what was happening.
"Don't you dare touch Iruka-sensei" Vile Red chakra was being released by Naruto causing him to drop his HENGE.
"So, the Demon was In a HENGE the whole time or your trying to kill me from laughter or blood loss; that wont work. No matter, I'll still kill you in one blow, and then the village will treat me as a hero for killing the plague"
"Is that so, then ill send everything back a thousand fold" Natsumi put on a seal for KAGE BUNSHIN and made a thousand clones. "Pissed on your pants yet." She then charged at Mizuki with full force.
"Wait, those aren't normal BUNSHIN, those are solid clones" Iruka thought
The clones popped out of existence leaving a beaten up Mizuki on the ground. Iruka came closer to an exhausted Natsumi.
"Naruto… (Uh) –chan, close your eyes for a minute"
"What for sensei"
"Now, it's a surprise" she then closed her eyes, she heard the sound of metal and rubbing leather.
"Now sensei, can I open it"
"Ok, you can open your eyes now"
She opened her eyes, something about Iruka seemed different. Looking at her sensei's forehead, she noticed that it was now bare – she then touched her own forehead.
"Naruto, you've graduated" Iruka said with a smile and was tackled into a hug.
"So, I guess I have a lot of explaining, huh"
"How about you tell me while we get ramen, my treat"
(ICHIRAKU)
She basically told him everything except for the fact that she was trying to learn to alter the seal, and her training with Kyuubi.
"So you purposely failed huh. Now about your gender, I understand hiding it but you know you can't hide it forever"
"I kinda thought about that, maybe after the chuunin exams would be a good time."
"Well, before I forget. Since you graduated, you should be at the academy at 8 AM sharp" Iruka was counting his money; he glanced at the table side tableside, he was shocked to see only one bowl.
Natsumi giggled at the priceless face of her sensei. "Well, it doesn't mean that I ate like that before that I would still be… Ja Ne" she leaf shunshined leaving her still shocked sensei.
Well I'm already done with the next 3 chapters and just encoding it. The other 2 are already planned.
Chapter titles are.
CH4- Bell Test (encoding)
CH5- Wave (finalizing)
CH6- Chuunin exams (on progress)
CH7- (not yet started)
CH8- (not yet started)
CH9- (Not yet ready for execution)
CH10- (Not yet ready for execution)
CH11- (Not yet ready for execution)
CH12- (Not yet ready for execution)
CH13 above – (no idea yet)
I may also leave for a while after chapter 6 and for another future chapter since I'm getting ready for college,
I would still find time, like now. I'm doing this every night
Pairings still not decided so I made situations to easily alter them. Default would be Sasufemnaru.
I also made some alterations in the summary, since my friend also asked for strong naru. I would not be able to do that though until the exams.
I would appreciate criticism so please review