OMG THANKS FOR THE REVIEWS! All in less than a day! Lol i thought my rants were dumb, since I want to be thankful I will reply to your reviews first,...
Note that some other reviews haven't arrived yet, i just recieved them in my email:
Shyjoker: You got that right!
Amberdiamondswords:I have no idea what that means, but if it isn't good I hope it won't end up like that :) AND OMG Amberdiamondswords actually reviewed!
Rishy25: Thanks! I'm glad that you respect my opinion.
Emelion3: Yeah.. It's pretty hard to find those kind of good fanfics!
Wolfpurpledinosaur: Lol that is so true! When I read some fanfics that make you go WTF I just stare into my Ipod thinking 'What have I done..'
Isla-Robin59: I LOVE TRANSFORMERS! Yay!
PinkFan-Gurl: Haha you got the words right out of my computer screen!
Anonymuse: Really? Who parodied it?
ForeverDreamer12: Yay! ForeverDreamer12 reviewed! And yes.. Some people prefer Mary Sues, that's sad actually.
Note: About my previous fanfiction, i'm not acting like a hypocrite, my first fanfiction actually sucked, so i decided to make this.
OKAY! NEXT RANT!
U.D.I Part 1 or whatever.
This is what annoys me..alot
BTW just add the words n,e, and s and the words spell out as undies.
Because when you read U.D.I fanfictions, it would be like reading a pair of undies.
U.D.I stands for..
drumroll please..
UNDER-DESCRIPTIVE IDIOTS!
Some fanfiction writers just straight sentences without adding some adjectives or making it an independent variable when it is supposed to be dependent.
It's like adding no seasoning in cup noodles.
Well in wattpad there would be O.D.I's or Over Descriptive Idiots but let's give an example for U.D.I:
I woke up and went outside of the house.
What...?
Who wakes up and magically escapes from the house? I mean you must be wearing pyjamas or something.
Another:
I was reading 'OMG LOOK AT THAT' then boom it went black.
See? doesn't make sense, at all.
Some U.D.I's just make everything go too quickly, like forcing ice cream to melt.
I MEAN WHO EVEN FORCES ICE CREAM TO MELT?! YOU COULD HAVE BEEN ARRESTED FOR FORCING ICE CREAM TO MELT!
It's like attempting to put like no adjectives or sense in the story to make it less cliche-like or Mary Sue-ish.
But instead your making far off worse.
BUT! That is just the literal type of being Under Descriptive, look at the other type of U.D.I:
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN THIS
They had but one last remaining night together, so they embraced each other as tightly as that two-flavor entwined string cheese that is orange and yellowish-white, the orange probably being a bland Cheddar and the white . . . Mozzarella, although it could possibly be Provolone or just plain American, as it really doesn't taste distinctly dissimilar from the orange, yet they would have you believe it does by coloring it differently.
See, sometimes i'm like that, that's like being under-descriptive, when you type out a paragraph and then end up at a totally different topic now.
So please.. Don't be a U.D.I or a O.D.I!
Nice, Funny, Amusing, Bad, or just plain boring, I certainly accept constructive criticism.
Next chapter might be about O.D.I's or something else, Sorry if it'short.