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Jacamar to answer you question, I did not get it from there I didn't even have Lestate or any vampire in my head at the time. Please explain to me why you think that.

As for everyone else please review I really need some input for the story.

And just to let you all know this is a very long story. And its also slash with three men. (Harry and two others)(For you Sara, who knew before I even wrote it) Pease don't tell me I didn't give a warning.

Oh and if you read this you'll know that there is a preview of the next chapter at the bottom.

I DO NOT OWN HARRY POTTER ORANY OTHER CHARITER.

When I woke again I realized they had left the light on, maybe so I could get use to the light.

I looked around and saw that they were not in the room with me, and then I heard the voices behind the door that Edward had used earlier.

I stood and walked over to the door and opened it a crack and looked into the hallway.

Edward was standing there with Eric and a girl I didn't know.

At the sound of the door opening they all looked at me. I looked at the girl, she was as tall as Edward, and had had long blond hair with, strangely, bright blue eyes.

When she looked at me her eyes went wide and she went to one knee and showed her neck to me in a show of submission.

She looked startled when Eric said, "Isabella, what are you doing?"

"I… don't know. I just felt the strange urge to bow to him." She said in a tinkling voice that matched her looks.

"Eric, you don't think…" Edward said to his mate.

"I don't know." Was the quite reply.

"Tell them will be there in an hour. Bella. We have to get him ready first." Edward said to the distressed girl.

She nodded and stood up, walking away with a dazed look on her face.

I admit I was curios but I didn't say anything to them except to ask, "Where are we going?"

"The prices of out kind would like to meet you." Eric said gruffly, walking back into the room.

"Princes? No kings?" I asked curiously.

"We don't have kings. There are princes. We will one day have a king, he will be of both kinds of creature. It is said in the legend that we will know from a couple of things, one everyone shall bow to him. Two he shall be able to read the minds of everyone, as well as communicate with all of us. Among other minor details" Edward explained to me. "Alright go hop into the shower. I'll put some clothes on the counter for you."

I nodded and went into the bathroom and turned the water on as high as it would go and stripped the boxer off and stepped in.

I was having a hard time washing my hair so I yelled, "hey, umm… Edward could you umm... help me I'm having a hard time washing my hair because of my ears could you come help me?"

"Of course I can Harry." Edward said as he walked into the bathroom with a pile of clothes. He set the clothes down and walked over to the shower.

I sat on the edge of the tub and handed him the shampoo. As he washed my hair he asked me, "how are with all of this Harry?"

"I'm fine actually, it's different here but I can get use to it." I leaned into his hands making him chuckle.

"Are you alright with your transformation though?" he asked.

"Yeah, I just need to get use to all the changes, especially the ears, tail, and eyes. But I'm getting there." I replied.

"Alright, fold your ears and rinse." he told me.

After a few tries my ears folded against my head and I stepped under.

"Would you like me to wash your tail to, it looks like it will be hard to wash by yourself?" he asked.

I looked at him wearily. But he only had a fatherly look in his eyes, nothing... Inappropriate. He looked no where but my face and tail, so I nodded in thanks.

"Wow you use a lot of shampoo." he said as half the bottle went onto my tail.

My ears flattened and my head went down. He saw this and his eyes went wide, "oh no, Harry… I didn't mean it like that. I just thought it was funny."

My ears perked up and I gave a small smile.

"Umm…I might have to help rinse it to, is that alright?" I nodded and he went to the other side and pulled my tail under the water.

"Thanks for helping me." I whispered.

"No problem." he said without even looking up. "Alright all done."

He looked at my drenched tail and hair. "How are you gonna dry off?" he whispered, mostly to himself. Making me giggle.

"Shut the door for a second." He stood back and closed the door, and I shook myself like a dog, making water fly everywhere covering everything.

I opened the door and smiled at him.

He started to laugh.

"What?" I asked.

"Your tail." Was the laughing reply.

I looked down to laugh myself. My tail was about twice the size it normally was (his tail looks like a wolf if that helps) it was so fluffy.

I grabbed a towel and dried the rest of me then I reached for my clothes. I tried to put my boxers and pants on but, "hey Edward can you put a hole in this for me?"

He grabbed them, and using an extended nail cut two holes in the back.

I put them on and said thank you. Then said "that's better." When my tail waved back and fourth, free of cloth.

He laughed at me and I stuck my tongue out at him.

I put my robes on after he put a hole in those as well.

When we walked out of the bathroom Eric asked me, "Are you hungry?" I shook my head no, "then would you like me to brush your hair and tail?"

I smiled enthusiastically, and he laughed and went into the bathroom coming out with a brush.

"We only have twenty minutes, but that should be enough time." Eric said as he started in my hair.

Twenty minutes later we were walking out of the room.

I had one hand in each of theirs, making me feel like a child but I really didn't care at the moment. My ears kept flicking at all the new sounds like, the fire from the torches and the sound of feet, or the clank of metal on metal, as Eric explained was some warriors practicing.

I kept listening until we got to a set of very large doors, where Eric said, "I will go let them now it's us." And slipped into the room.

When the doors opened further for me and Edward I slide behind hi.

I was sad to admit it, but I was really shy.

When Edward walked in I was right behind him my face buried in his back.

When we stopped I could tell we were in front of a large group of people from the sound of shuffling feet.

I pressed myself closer to him and felt Eric's hand on my shoulder.

"Well, where is his." I heard a deep voice ask.

Edward twisted around and looked at me, "come on Harry, no need to be shy." He whispered.

I grabbed both their hands and, with my ears flat against my head and my tail curled in fear, I stepped in between them and looked up.

Suddenly there was a collective gasp and everyone was starting to bow.

The two men sitting on thrones stood and dropped the goblets they were holding

One that I could tell was a werewolf had long dirty blond hair that went to his waist and clawed hands, stared at me with his amber eyes for a second before dropping down in a low bow, though not on his knee it was still a sign of respect.

The other one had short brown hair down that was long enough to cover his eyes and the back of his neck, looked at me calmly with his changing eyes and bowed down as low as the werewolf.

Startled I went back behind Edward, "why are they doing that?" I asked in a whisper.

"I don't know Harry." they both replied.

"Tell them to get up, I don't like it very much. Please." I was starting to panic.

"Why are all of you kneeling like that? Get up all of you." Edward said.

But they didn't listen to him, so I peeked around Edward and said weakly, "get up all of you."

They all stood and tried to look at me behind the werewolf and vampire standing in front of me.

"Eric, I'm scared." I whispered as some people tried to reach for me. And I clung to Edward tighter.

Eric growled as Edward turned and picked me up, pulling my legs around his waist and arms around his neck buried my face in his neck.

When Eric had started to growl the ones who were reaching for me backed of but they all still tried to get a look at me.

"What the hell is going on!!" yelled the werewolf prince, I realized was the one who had spoken earlier.

"We don't know price Moler." Edward replied.

Even with being really uncomfortable I gave a small giggle at the prices name earning me glares from my new parents.

I stopped but had a big smile on my face causing them to roll their eyes and their mouths twitched.

"What if he's the king?" a familiar yet unexpected voice yelled.

I looked up, and straight into the eyes of Lucius Malfoy.

He quickly looked away with a nod and looked at the two princes.

The princes looked at me. Right at the moment my ears flicked up at the sound of whispers.

But I didn't here anything, because everything went silent the minute they caught sight of my ears. My tail wrapped around Edward in fright, and they followed my every move.

"Dad," I said looking at Edward, "why do they look at my ears and tail like that?"

Edward looked down at me. "Because that doesn't happen very often, and you're the second in the last week to change like that." he said "the other was the Malfoy child."

I looked at Mr. .Malfoy, "id like to take to Draco sometime if that's ok?" I asked quietly to where they were the only ones to here, noticing Draco standing behind the older man, trying to hide as much as I was.

They nodded slightly.

They walked forward towards the princes still trying to avoid some of the people in the crowd.

I got a closer look at the two Princes. The vampire Prince actually looked not that much older then I to my surprise, but you could see the years of knowledge in his forever changing eyes. He had pale skin, like his skin use to be brown before he was changed. His ears came to a sharp point, his robes covered the rest of him but you could tell his was very skinny.

The other Prince, was very bulky, he had a nice dark tan making him look like a beach boy. His clock was a lot bigger then the other but they shared the same dark purple color. And he wore no shoes.

My parents took a seat and I buried my face again I Edwards neck.

"Why do you do that little one?" a new voice asked. I liked it its was a very calm voice. It made me calm down a little.

I peeked out to look at the prince. I don't like being around a lot of people. They tend to stare at me, and I've never really like attention. I've never had much of it." I whispered knowing he could here me.

He smiled and nodded.

He looked at the crowed and said, "go about you conversations while we speak to him."

They continued to watch me until Moler yelled, "NOW!!"

They continued to watch but started to watch but they started their own conversations, mostly about me from the whispers I heard.

They started to with small talk before the calm vampire started with, "so tell me more about yourself Harry, how did the transformation go?" he asked.

Edward was the one who answered him, " well prince Starlight," signaling he was the one was going to be the one talking, "it went really well until the changes, he had a hard time with those but we got it under control in time."

"Well what about…" whatever Starlight was about to say was interrupted by a loud crash and a cry of pain.

All our heads whipped around to see on of the young girls who had been serving wine had fallen over as well as one of the bottles she had been carrying had broken open and she had a cut on her hand.

The second I saw it my teeth lengthened my mind focusing on the blood.

I leaped off of Edwards lap straight for the young girl.

When she saw me she screamed and started to shuffle backwards.

When I was about two feet from her I was tackled from behind, but I ignored the weight and struggled towards the bleeding girl growling the whole time.

Suddenly I smelled another person's blood, one that I already knew.

Then there was a wrist in my mouth and I started to drink, I grabbed it and sank my teeth in further then they and been, I felt sorry because I drank more then normal, but her blood smell had gotten to me and I wanted to drink more.

Slowly I started to fall asleep. My hands fell away but my mouth kept going.

The last things I noticed were one; Lucius was feeding Draco in the same matter as me; and two, everyone was watching us.

Then I let go and my teeth slide back in and I fell asleep.

So tell me what you guys think lots of reviews please. I need some input on how I'm doing. Please. I've got a few but, sorry, there not telling me on how my writing is, to much of this to much of that, to little, need more explanation, less more please I want to write a real story but I thought if I did this first I could get an insight on my writing skill please ill give you lots of cookies.

Also if you have a Harry potter fiction you have written or are writing send me a message, if I like the group ill read it.

Alright since you listen to me babble you guys get a preview of the next chapter that might not be up for a couple of days.

I had been making dinner when uncle came back from work. He came stomping into the kitchen and looked at me.

"Boy, get to your room, and let your aunt finish that." He backhanded me across the face when I didn't move fast enough, hitting me on a bruise he had given to me the previous evening."

I ran to my room… well my cupboard under the stairs. I huddled ther, knowing what was coming next.

I pulled into myself, knowing what was coming. The door opened and broke my concentration…now it was going to hurt worse…

Haha cliffy alright lots of reviews.