This is kind of embarrassing but because I'm a beginner I'm going to cut myself some slack as I hope the rest of you will.. LOL
I've written chapter 3 and posted it. However I didn't use a beta and not a lot of people have read it yet so I've deleted the chapter and I'm going to spruce it up a bit. I've received some wonderful constructive criticism on how I can make it better so I'm going to change a couple of things to make it easier to read and understand.
If you've read it already, there's not any big change in the plot development but some words near the end are going to be redone. I really appreciate all the encouragement and criticism I've received. Thanks again Doc Spleenmiester. I'm working on it now and will have it ready later tonight.
Thank you all.
