Well this is the really second chapter sorry if I made it look like it before :( well tell me what you think
Miss were here" I woke up in a ugh and turned over to look at him " ugh what time is it " I said as I rubbed my eyes "it's 9am " the man said now I remember I asked this man to drop me off at Konoha cause it was near his route for trade Man I hate hang overs. "You know miss it makes me wonder why do want to go to Konoha in the first place? No ones really entered there since after the great war" he said as I came up to the front of the wagon with him. " Are looking to become a citizen" " not really" I said quietly. I jumped out of the wagon and gave the man some money and started to walk towards the gate.
So this is were your from mom, pretty big. I took out a smoke and popped it in my mouth. Before I could slam on the door some answered " State your name and your reason for wanting to enter our country man said boy that was fast "Naoki Uzumaki I'm a traveler" the man was quiet for a minute. " why are you carrying a sword" " um I don't maybe cause I'm a young girl who travels alone from town to town and goes through dark forests and deserts that have freaks and bandits," and you ask me why I carry it" I say sarcastically I feel the man was standing dumb folded by what I just said I was trying to hold in my smirk " go straight to the hokage tower and she will decide if you can gain a pass" he said recovered quickly the gates opened" don't try anything or else the anbu will deal with you" well this is going to be interesting ,I walked in.
" did you hear what she said Kotetsu" he still looking at her going in "yes I heard her" Her last name it's the same as him, you don't think-" I don't know" he cut him off" but let's see what happens" She's the spitting image of him".