Hey guys,
First i just wanted to say thank you for the great responses, i honestly did not expect it at all but they have been wonderful. Also I wanted to address the last review I normally would private message but since it was a guest review I cannot. Oxford I agree with what you said, the story should be tagged differently! But the reason it was originally tagged SM was because this story was never suppose to go beyond the first chapter. I had no intention on naming who the person who Mercedes was marrying and even though it was incredibly sad I thought why not leave it with a realistic consequence. Now I have the story updated to Mercedes,Mike and Sam because we can add more than two characters and with story it can really go either way. Thanks again to everyone who has reviewed, given ideas and got emotionally invested into the story it really means a lot. Hopefully there will be another chapter soon!