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He left me alone after that, but the nurse stayed. I must of fallen asleep at some point because I don't remember much of that day. But whenever I was aware though, she was always writing notes. Always about one of the machines.
"Francesco? Francesco, wake up."
"I'm awake." I whispered. I had become a very light sleeper since I had been admitted to hospital.
"Do you feel well enough to have visitors? If you don't they can come back later."
"If it's the press, no. But if it's family or friend, then yes. I'm ok."
"Ok then, I'll just go get him." She left the room with paper work after that.
I waited for a while, anxious for who wanted to see me. It seemed like ages till I heard someone coming down the hallway. She appeared first, then she was followed in by someone.
"Raffaello!" I was so surprised to see him!
"Francesco!"
"It's so good to see you."
"You too."
It was so good to see Raffaello after what happened, I didn't know whether he knew what had happened. Took the opportunity to tell him when the nurse left the room.
"Do you know what actually happened?"
"Yes, I do Francesco. You were attacked, but we don't know who by. All I know was that I heard you scream, so I rushed up to your house and went in. I saw you looking pretty badly hurt so I called and ambulance. Did you not know that?"
"No I knew I had been attacked but I didn't know what happened after that. Thank you."
"That's Ok, I leave you now to get some rest you look exhausted. Bye."
"Bye…"
And with that, he left. It didn't take me long to fall asleep, but because am such a light sleeper, unfortunately, every little sound woke me. A beep from a monitor. Someone walking past the door…
In a random house, somewhere.
The name is Artemis. I'm a serial killer and robber. And I've killed 5 people in 1 month so far. All I killed, apart from one. Why didn't I kill him, like all of the other innocents. The plan was to break in, kill the occupant, take the valuables and leave. Without being caught. Step 1 was to break into the house, I did that without fail. Step 2 was to kill the occupant, but that was the step I couldn't do. Francesco Bernoulli had been my racing hero for as long as I could remember, but then without realising it, I was breaking into his house to kill him. But I couldn't. So I Just planned to knock him out but I ended up hurting him real bad. As I hit him, He screamed a scream of pain. I feel so bad now. I Know I didn't take anything and that Francesco was taken straight to hospital but I still feel guilty for breaking in. But for someone so famous, he didn't exactly have many valuables. It just looked like a load of sentimental stuff.
In the hospital.
It is to loud to sleep right now, and to bright. The nurse had thankfully turned off the beeping of the machines but she couldn't stop the brightness coming through the blinds or the sound of a busy hospital. So as I lay there awake, I occupied myself with the thoughts of that dream I had the night I was attacked. We were racing and then there was this scream. It was definitely a scream of pain, but why? I would definitely talk to Raffaello about this and maybe contact some of the people who were racing with me. This was no normal dream. I don't remember much from my childhood but I have one particular memory that was just like the dream, so maybe the dream wasn't a dream maybe it was a flashback…
Amazingly, I did manage to fall asleep but I was exhausted even though I had done nothing all day. I was starting to wonder when I was going to be discharged. And I had lost count of how long I had been here after day 3. As I was thinking, the daily routine started. Raffaello came to see me, keep me company and give me the latest news on the race course and things like that. So I took the opportunity to ask him how long I had been here.
"Raffaello, I had a thought earlier of how long I have actually been here? I sort of lost count after day 3..."
"If I tell you, you'll be shocked. You've just got to keep calm, Ok?"
"Ok. Now please tell me."
"Ok. Here it goes. When you were attacked, the attacker knocked you out, then left. We found you unconscious. Some of you wounds were quite severe, so to help them heal, they kept you sedated. They sedated you for a week until they thought they were healed enough for you to be conscious. You have been conscious now for 7 days, so you have been here for 2 weeks."
I hadn't been expecting it to have been so long. It didn't feel like it…I was so shocked by it that my heart rate went up and made machines beep. I was speechless as well…
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