Hello everyone I really appreciate all the fantastic reviews from, Love is lost, Deadly Melody, and Dorthy. (if I missed you I'm sorry) and all the wonderful constructive criticism. I'm going to do this chapter in a play setting if you like it or don't please tell me in a review thanks. I hope you enjoy this chapter and if you have any ideas about what I should do next I would love to hear it. please read and review! Italic means thoughts.
In Inuyasha's time
Inuyasha dashed through the forest back to his friends who were still sitting by the well.
Sango: Well look who's back. .
Inuyasha: Guys guess what I just found out! Said Sango: Your sensitivity? because you sure didn't have it yesterday.
Inuyasha: No! Kiyiko is evil!
Sango with sarcasm : You just figured that out now?
Ignoring her Inuyasha continued.
Inuyasha: I saw her in the woods talking to Naraku! And scheming to kill me and take the shirkon shards!
Sango: Well if she's going to take the shirkon shards we should probably do something.
Inuyasha annoyed: And kill me!
Sango: Like I said if she's going to take the shirkon shards we should probably do something. enjoying the fact that she was annoying him.
Inuyasha: Whatever.
Sango smirked knowing she had got to him. Inuyasha saw her and rushed toward her yelling.
Inuyasha: ''I'm going to wipe that smirk right off your face!''
Shippo in Kagome form: Sit!
Inuyasha: Wha-? Kagome? Then he noticed Shippo's tail. Shippo! Then he punched the poor baby fox demon in the head.
Shippo in regular form: Whaaa! I just didn't want you to hurt Sango! Whaa!
Inuyasha: Oh shut up.
Miriko : (Who was watching the whole thing without doing a thing to protect poor Sango) Hahahahah!
Inuyasha: You shut up too.
Sango: You shut up.
Inuyasha: You look'n for a fight?!
Sango: It depends on if your gonna run away again.
Inuyasha: Oh its on!
Sango: I'm ready when you are!
Inuyasha: Be fore warned I'm not gonna go easy on ya just cus your Kagome's friend or cus your a girl!
Sango: Fine with me, just you be warned I'm already mad at you for breaking Kagome's heart!
Inuyasha: (just the tiniest bit afraid of the blue fire surrounding Sango as she walked toward him) Bring it on!
Koga: Yo!
Inuyasha: ( a tiny bit thankful that he showed up just then) What do you want you puny wolf!
Koga: I came to see my fiance is that a problem mutt?
Inuyasha: Yes! And she's not ''your fiance''!
Sango: He made her go back to her world and never come back cus he broke her heart..Again
Koga: her world?
Inuyasha: Sango shut up!
Sango: Oh you don't know do you?
Koga: Know what?
Sango: Kagome lives in a world 500 years in the future she come here to help us then Inuyasha went and broke her heart for- what is like the third time now?
Shippo: Yep.
Miriko: I believe so.
Inuyasha: Shut up all of you!
Sango: so anyway she went back to her world and the only ones that can go through the time portal are Kagome and Inuyasha... Oh! And Inuyasha chose Kiyiko over Kagome, and in the processes broke her heart and made her say she's never coming back. Then earlier today Inuyasha saw Kiyiko being evil with Naraku and now he knows the truth and that's all.
Koga: (burning with blue fire rage) Let me get this straight, mutt made Kagome- my Kagome leave, broke her heart and left her for a ally of Naraku?`
Sango: Yep pretty much.
Inuyasha: Now wait just a minute before anyone does something they'll regret! (backing away from the blue fire ball of rage that is Koga).
Sango: Get him Koga!
Inuyasha: OK! I'm sorry! I didn't want to break her heart! It just kinda happened! Me and Kiyiko had a history and I couldn't let go of that, but I love Kagome! OK I love her! But I was worried that if I chose Kagome then Kiyiko would get jealous and try and kill her!
Sango: She already has tried to kill Kagome! She hates her regardless!
Inuyasha: She has? Why didn't Kagome tell me?
Sango: Idiot! She didn't tell you because, one, you wouldn't believe her, and two she cared more about your happiness then her happiness!
Koga: OK that's lovely but I'm still gonna kill you mutt!
Sango: Wait Koga
Koga: A minute ago you were cheering me on but now that you heard his sob story you changed sides?!
Sango: Yep.
Shippo: Me too.
Miriko: Me as well.
Koga: whatever I don't need your help to kill him! (rushing towards him)
In Kagome's time at her house
Kagome was laying on her bed reading a text book. She had just gotten home from school.
Kagome's mom: Kagome! Someone's here to see you! His name is Hojo! I'll send him up!
Kagome: Hi Hojo!
Hojo: Hi Kagome! I see your feeling better! I bet its that special diet I gave you!
Kagome: sure... that's what it was..
Hojo: I just came to see how you were doing so I guess I'll be going now.
Kagome: OK bye.. wait! Hojo! Will you lend me some notes?
Hojo: sure! Here you go.
Kagome: thanks so much Hojo! Your a life saver!
Hojo: well I'll be going now.
Kagome: OK thanks again Hojo! Bye!
Kagome went happily back to her studying, a couple minutes later she looked at her clock and saw it was two thirty she jumped up and went to go meet her friends at
the restaurant.
At the restaurant
Friend No.1 (happily): Kagome your here!
Kagome (equally happy) : Yep!
Friend No.2: Hooray!
Friend No.3: So hows that delinquent boyfriend of yours?
Kagome: Stupid as ever.
Friend No.1: What did he do this time?
Kagome: Just left me for another girl is all.
Friend No.1 Friend No.2 Friend No.3: What!?
Kagome: Yep.. And no just because I am not with him anymore doesn't mean I'm going to go out with Hojo.
Friend No.3: why not?!
Kagome: sigh, I still love him..
Friend No.1 Friend No.2 Friend No.3: What!?
Kagome: sigh, I know I'm pathetic. Sigh,
Friend No.2: No its not that! I think its super romantic, sigh,
Friend No1: Yeah, sigh,
Kagome bursts into tears: Why can't I just be enough for him?! He doesn't even know I love him! I've been dropping hints for years! But he's so obsessed with her he doesn't even notice me! And she doesn't even love him! She hates him buts is using him and he doesn't even realize it! She's even tried to kill me! But its not like if I told him he'd believe me.
Friend No.1 Friend No.2 Friend No.3 are stunned
Kagome sniffles: Sorry guys I didn't mean to cause a scene.
Friend No.3: Its OK Kagome.
Kagome's phone rings
Kagome: Hello? Oh hi mom, no!? Okay, see you soon bye. She slumps her head down on the table.
Friend No.2: Whats wrong Kagome?
Kagome; that was my mom, he's here.
Friend No.1: who?
Kagome: Him
Friend No.1 Friend No.2 Friend No.3: What!?
Kagome: yep. He's at my mom's house! So I gotta go!
Friend No.1: Stay strong Kagome!
Friend No.2: You can do it Kagome!
Friend No.3: Good luck!
Kagome: thanks guys see you later bye!
sorry to interrupt the story but just in case you were wondering, Sango helped Inuyasha get to the well and jump in where he would be safe from Koga. Anyway back to the story.
At Kagome's house
Kagome walked up to her house and saw Inuyasha sitting on the steps.
Kagome: Hmph! And walked right passed him with her nose in the air.
Inuyasha: Wait Kagome!
Kagome: What do you want?!
Inuyasha: To apologize
Kagome: Well its to late now, goodbye Inuyasha.
And with that she went inside and up to her room.
(Inuyasha was sitting on the steps because Kagome's family wouldn't let him inside)
Inuyasha climbed up the tree next to Kagome's room and sat down.
Inuyasha: I'm not coming down until you say you'll listen to me.
Kagome: Then you'll be there till you die!
Inuyasha: Fine I will.
Kagome: Whatever.
The next morning
Kagome: Your still here?!
Inuyasha: I told you I'm not coming down till you will listen to me, and from this moment on I am not going to sleep eat or drink till you'll listen to me.
Kagome: Hmph! We'll see how long you last.
A week later
Kagome; Why are you still here?! Just go home!
Inuyasha weakly: (because he hasn't had sleep, food, or water in a week) Not without you.
Kagome: Fine you get 10 minuets.
Inuyasha: Thanks
Inuyasha climbed into her room through the window
Inuyasha: well you see-
then he collapsed from starving himself, Kagome thinking he was dead because of her, started crying
Kagome: I'm so sorry! if only I had listened to you right away! Inuyasha I love you!
Inuyasha weakly: You do?
Kagome: Your still alive?
Inuyasha: I must have passed out. Look Kagome what I wanted to say was, I'm sorry I didn't mean to hurt you I was only thinking about Kiyiko and I didn't realize that I loved you.
Kagome: You found out Kiyiko was evil didn't you.
Inuyasha: Well.. I.. sigh, yes
Kagome: well lets go back
Inuyasha: back?
Kagome: Yes, back home.
Inuyasha: Really?!
Kagome: Really lets go...
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thus concludes my first fan fiction I hoped you enjoyed it, sorry its so short but I got tired of this and I'm going to start on something else. Thanks for reading! :)
