hi, well since it's december and almost my birthday i felt very gratfull and typed this for you...

hope you enjoy!

Ed walked around this town he found himself in, and he already found himself hating it. Why? You may ask. Well the fact that it was pouring rain at the moment making him wet and his ports ach might be one of the reasons. Ed found a canapé by a building and stood under it. He looked through a nearby window and watched the people inside, smiling and making joke's, having fun. Ed observed the people them self's, four where female. One with black hair with a pixie cut talking to one with brown hair that looked awkward the other two sat next to the male's both with long blond/brown hair. The 4 male's on the other hand looked all different. The one next to the awkward chick had brown hair and his arm slung over her shoulder and pixie cut's man sat quietly next to her looking quit stiff to Ed. Finally Ed's eye's traveled two the last 2 men taking note that for some reason they all have gold eyes. One man was grinning wildly and talking holding the hand of the younger lady. Finally Ed looked at the last man

"shit" Ed cussed. The other man was none other than Carlisle and he was handing the awkward chick a present. And that's when Ed realized that it must have been her birthday.

Inside the café

"Happy birthday Bella" Carlisle stood up and handed her a present. Just as Bella was grabbing the present Alice gasped as her eyes clouding over. All vampires in the café knew what that meant, she was having a vision. Bella thanking Carlisle for the gift set it aside for latter, more interested in what Alice was seeing.

"EVERY BODY GET DOWN!" Alice suddenly yelled as she fell to the ground other's fallowing close behind, knowing not to question her after she had had a vision.

"what did you see Alice" Asked Edward

"drive by shooting" Alice murmured just as the glass shattered, thundering down on the other people in the room, along with the scream's. The echo of the gun shots bouncing of the walls as they heard a car rapidly drive away.

Slowly they all stood up. Nobody was injured not even the people that were hit by glass; this was a miracle they all thought before an elderly lady looked outside. Soon there was screaming in the café once again as some ran outside other's ran to the far back. Carlisle being the doctor in the house ran outside fallowed by the rest of his family to see what the lady saw, soon he found himself regretting that he did.

There lying on the ground in a heap of black and red with clouded eyes wide open, was the young man from this morning. Edward Elric. His blond hair had fallen out of its neat pony tail and was now died crimson from his own blood, coming from the wounds over his body. The one that drew peoples attention was the bullet hole in the center of his forhead. Carlisle took off his coat and lay it over the boy hiding his body from onviewers closing the blonds eyes while doing so. Soon the paramedics came and took the body away from the scene, Carlisle riding with the boy in the back, head hung low and eyes clouded with grief.

((….*grab's tissue* I made myself cry….))

Hospital 5hours after shooting

In the dark room, red sparks began to fly, Illuminating the room. There on a cold slap of metal laid Edward Elric. Sparks danced across his body, licking his wound's but then stopped. There was a load gasp coming from the body as it shot up. It was silent, the darkness seamed to absorb the time turning mere seconds into minutes, suddenly a voice cut the silence as if cutting through frozen butter "well fuck"

half of you guy's are problemly doing a 'WTF!' face...mwhahahahahahahah!

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