Due to two reviews, one from Milennial and the other from ncpfan.
I decided I need a bit of help, with fighting scenes and narration style in particular.
If anyone is willing, I would like your help with this matter.
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What I need is for someone to read my chapters and improve the quality by changing things without changing the story itself,
Milennial and ncpfan are on the top of the list for those I'd like to help me with this since they are the ones who pointed out the flaws.
Anyone else who wants to try, Please PM me.